健康饮食初中英语作文

400字
主题:健康生活、科学饮食、习惯养成、身体保健、营养均衡

健康饮食初中英语作文

healthy eating habits are very important for our health. we should build healthy eating habits. we should eat fresh vegetables and fruits everyday.

they supply rich and the necessary vitamins for us. we also should eat less meat everday.

and we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night. besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions.

junk food is a fatal killer for our health so that we should stay far from them. it is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in the morning.

it is very bad for our health. breakfast is the most important meal for people.

健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康很重要。我们应该建立健康的饮食习惯。我们应该每天吃新鲜的蔬菜和水果,它们能给我们提供丰富的必要维生素。

我们每天还应该少吃肉,每天早晚喝一杯水。此外,我们应该注意饮食平衡,这能保证我们必要的营养。垃圾食品是我们健康的致命杀手,所以我们应该远离它们。据说大部分的学生早上几乎什么都不吃,这对我们的健康是有害的。早餐是人们最重要的一餐。

精选读者点评

这个“fatal killer”用得提气!唯独“junk food is a fatal killer”后面逗号接“so that”有点别扭,试试删掉“so that”,直接写“so we should…”?还有,“drink a glass of milk”和后文中文说的“喝一杯水”对不上哦~

当我长大后 when i grow up

350字
主题:亲情守护、时光流逝、代际沟通、成长反思、家庭纽带

当我长大后 when i grow up

how time flies! now i am 19 years old. i won cry when i leave home for a very far city to study. but tonight im very unhappy, because i miss my parents so much. as time goes, we have a little time to stay with our family. we only do our own things, just like, playing games, watching tv, playing mobile phone and so on. we don talk with each others. the old are very lonely and the young are very love to play ipad, which is unhealthy. so, when we group, please don forget our parents, because we won e_ist without them.

时间飞逝。我现在十九岁了。离家上学也不会哭了。但是今晚我一点都不开心,因为我想我爸爸妈妈了。随着时间的流逝,我们与家人在一起的时间只有一点点。我们都忙于自己的事情,比如,玩游戏,看电视,玩手机等。我们相互间都很少聊天。老人们觉得孤单,而年轻人却又喜欢玩对健康不好的ipad。所以,我们长大后不要把父母给忘了,因为没有他们就没有我们。

精选读者点评

开头中英混搭挺有想法,但“when i grow up”和后文没勾连上,像贴错的标签。后面想说亲情淡了、代际隔了,这个念头很真,可“玩ipad不健康”这句突然跳出来,像硬塞的药丸,苦得有点突兀。

一次不同寻常的经历

300字
主题:勇敢、互助、意外、成长、责任

one day, i went to ski with my friend, li mei. we were playing happily on the ice when i heard a shouthelp. i turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into a ice hole. but neither of us could swim. so li mei and i ran to ask for help. a few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. what an unusual e_perience it was!

一次不寻常的经历

有一天,我和我的朋友李梅一起去滑雪。当我听到一声喊“救命”的时候,我们在冰上玩得很开心。我转过身,看到一个男孩掉进一个冰洞里,感到很惊讶。但是我们都不能游泳。所以李梅和我跑去寻求帮助。几分钟后,一个警察来了,把那个男孩从水里拽了出来。这是一个不寻常的经历!

精选读者点评

标点太随意啦!“help”为啥不加引号?“a ice hole”该是“an ice hole”吧?还有,中文里“拽”字有点生硬,换成“拉”更自然~

怎样保持健康 how to stay healthy

450字
主题:身心健康、科学生活、自我管理、日常保健

怎样保持健康 how to stay healthy

as we all know, healthy is very important to everybody.but do you really know how to stay healthy? here are some useful tips. first, we should do e_ercise if we have time.for e_ample, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. or we can take a walk after supper.doing e_ercise makes us healthy and strong. second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies. stop eating junk food and drinking beers. last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. we should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. if we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. i wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.

我们都知道,健康对每个人来说都很重要。但是你知道该如何保持健康吗? 这里有一些实用的建议。首先,我们应该做运动,如果有时间的话。例如,我们可以在暑假的时候去游泳,或者晚饭后去散步。做运动让我们的身体更强壮更健康。第二,我们应该吃更多的蔬菜和水果,少吃糖果。不吃垃圾食品和啤酒。最后,我们应该早睡早起。如果睡不够,第二天就会很疲倦。如果我们都能按照以上的建议注意自己的健康,我们的身体会更棒。我希望每个人都有个强壮和健康的身体。

精选读者点评

这个“e_ercise”写法挺有意思,空着的字母像在考老师眼力,其实拼写错误背后是语音记忆没阐述恰当,建议把exercise拆成ex-er-cise三块读几遍,下次就不会漏r啦!

旅游的意义 the meaning of travel

400字
主题:心灵成长、认知拓展、生活感悟、自我发现

旅游的意义 the meaning of travel

many people like traveling. they just feel happy when traveling. but not many people will think the meaning of travel. what is the meaning of travel? actually, one of the meanings is to find happiness. putting aside all the trouble to enjoy themselves usually makes people happy. there is another important meaning. it is to learn things. to go out for a visit can enlarge people’s vision. people can learn a lot from it. therefore, sometimes we will find that some people will be different after they return home from travel. it is because they learn the true meaning of travel.

很多人都喜欢旅行。他们就觉得旅行的时候很开心。但并不是很多人会想旅行的意义。旅行的意义是什么呢?实际上,其中一个就是去寻找快乐。抛开所有的烦恼去享受通常都能让人开心起来。还有一个重要的意义。那就是学习。出去走走可以拓宽人们的视野。人们可以从中学到很多东西。所以,有时我们会发现有些人在旅游回来后会变得不太一样。这是因为他们了解了旅行的真谛。

精选读者点评

这个“抛开烦恼去享受”贴合语境!后半段讲“学东西”稍显笼统,要是能塞进一个你亲眼见过的小细节,比如在敦煌看见壁画褪色,突然懂了什么叫时间,就更打动人啦。

快乐的周末 happy weekend

400字
主题:成长、期待、欢聚、远方、实现、童年

快乐的周末 happy weekend

since i was small, i was so curious about the beach, because in my home, i never have the chance to see the real beach. it happens to me that my friends planned to go to beihai this weekend, so i was so e_cited to join them. it took us four hours to arrive in beihai, i saw the beach when i was in the busy, the water was so clean and there were so many people walked in the beach. when we found the hotel and dropped everything down, we went to the beach and had the barbecue, i played with my friends so happily. i realized my dream and have a happy weekend.

打从我小时候起,我就会海滩和好奇,因为在我家,我从来没有机会看到真正的海滩。很巧发生在我身上,我的朋友计划在这个周末去北海,因此我很兴奋能加入他们。我们花了四个小时到达北海,当我在汽车上的时候,我看到了海滩,水是那么的清澈,很多人在海滩上散步。当我们找到旅馆,放下一切东西以后,我们走到海边,一边烧烤,我很朋友们玩得很开心。我实现了自己的梦想,并且度过了一个愉快的周末。

精选读者点评

把“excited”拼成“e_cited”,还留着下划线呢!只是觉得读到“水那么清,很多人在沙滩散步”,画面一下就浮出来了,这句中文写得真干净。

谁偷走了你的时间 who steals your time

450字
主题:时间管理、自主学习、习惯养成、生活平衡

谁偷走了你的时间 who steals your time

when the new semester begins, we always find that there is not enough time to finish homework. though vacation is long, only in the last moment we find that time is always so short. it seems that someone steals our time. people always say that you will have time if you spare it. i think the reason for people to feel the lack of time lies in the lack of plan. finishing task first will be much efficient, because thinking about the amusement, then you will have the motivation. but if you choose to put the task in the last moment, you will forget about time soon. so you need to make the plan of your work, so as to enjoy your life.

新学期开始时,我们总是会觉得没有足够的时间去完成作业。虽然假期很长,但只有在最后一刻我们才会觉得时间是那么的短暂。似乎有人偷走了我们的时间。人们总是说,时间挤一挤总会有的。我认为人们感到时间不够的原因在于缺乏计划。把任务先完成会效率会高很多,因为想到娱乐,就会有动力。但是如果你选择在最后一刻才做任务,你很快就会忘记时间了。所以需要计划好工作,这样才能享受生活。

精选读者点评

标题中英文混用有点跳,但“偷时间”这个说法真灵动!后半段讲计划那段,像在跟同桌聊天,语气活,稍显“娱乐”和“任务”对举,是不是太二分了?玩的时候真就完全没计划!

是时候放手 time to let go

400字
主题:教育智慧、亲子关系、独立意识、挫折体验、陪伴渐行

是时候放手 time to let go

there is a father who wants to let her seven years old daugher to learn how to ride a bike. most of the children at her age can ride a bike, so the father decides not to let her daugher fall behind. the first time to ride the bike, the girl is very afraid of falling down. her scared voice makes the father hold the bike all the time. so a week has passed, the girl doesn’t make much progress. the faher thinks about his teaching method, then he decides to let go slowly. though the girl has fallen many times, the girl can ride the bike finally. the father realizes what he does is right.

有一个父亲想让她七岁女儿学习如何骑自行车。大多数的孩子在她的年龄都会骑自行车,所以这位爸爸为了不让自己女儿落后也决定让她学骑自行车。第一次骑自行车,女孩很害怕跌倒,她害怕的声音使得父亲一直扶着自行车。所以一个星期过去了,女孩没有多大进步。这位父亲思索着他的教学方法,之后他决定慢慢放手。虽然女孩多次跌倒了,但是,最后,女孩学会了骑自行车。父亲意识到他所做的是正确的。

精选读者点评

这个“放手”写得真有味道!爸爸手松开那一下,比所有道理都管用。结尾那句“父亲意识到他所做的是正确”,要是改成他摸着女儿擦破的膝盖说“原来摔疼了才记得怎么扶住自己”,就更活了。

scared the thief away-吓退小偷

400字
主题:自我保护、临危不乱、儿童智慧、家庭安全、正向力量

有一天,爸爸妈妈都出门去了,只剩我一个人在家。我正在做作业呢,忽然听到“咚咚咚”的声音。我想是谁敲门这么大的动静啊。我从门缝往外一看,只见一个贼头贼脑的人正拿着一把大钳子撬我家的门呢。肯定是小偷!怎么办呢?我只有一个人,肯定不是他的对手。这时我急中生智,想出了一个好办法,我大声喊了一句:“妈妈,爸爸叫你呢!”这一招果然有效,不一会小偷就吓跑了。真是邪不压正。

scared the thief away

one day, mamma and dad went out, leaving me alone at home. i was doing my homework suddenly i heard some sound of dong! dong! dong!at first i thought, who is knocking at the door with so loud a sound? i looked out from the door slit and saw a man with stealthy behavior picking the lock of the door. it was a thiefl i was so frightened that i didn know what to do for a short time. i was just a kid, and if he broke in, i was certainly no match for him. just at that moment a good idea occurred to me. i shouted loudly, mom, dad is calling you! fortunately it worked. the thief was scared away. a bad man can never be wiser than a good one.

精选读者点评

把“门缝往外看”写得真传神!贼头贼脑、咚咚咚、急中生智,这几个词蹦出来,画面就活了。结尾“邪不压正”稍显口号,要是换成你喊完那句后,手还在抖、心还在咚咚跳,味道就更足啦。

我和我的朋友me and my friend

250字
主题:友谊、成长、校园生活、课余活动

我和我的朋友me and my friend

hello everyone! my name is zhang li, i am twelve years old, and i am in class four, grade one. i like playing football, running, swimming and drawing. yang hua is my friend, he is my desk mate. he is taller than me. we have the same hobbies. we often play football or go swimming together after school. this is me and my friend. we would like to be your friends too.

大家好!我的名字叫张力,我12岁了,我在初一4班。我喜欢踢足球、跑步、游泳和素描。杨华是我的朋友,他是我的同桌。他比我高。我们有相同的爱好。我们放学后经常在一起踢足球。这就是我和我的朋友。我们很乐意也成为你们的朋友。

精选读者点评

这篇双语作文真有意思!中英文对照写法很聪明,看得出你花心思了。可“初一4班”写成“grade one”不太准,初中一年级是“grade seven”哦~再核对下课本里的年级表达吧。

我选择的路 the road i chose

400字
主题:自我选择、意志磨砺、责任意识、青春成长、亲情支持

我选择的路 the road i chose

since i watched the movie and was attracted by the girl who was dancing like an angel, i wanted to be her. i told my mother that i wanted to take the dance class. she was very happy and took me to the dance studio. at first, i practised so hard and felt great to make progress step by step. but a month passed, i felt so bored to do the same movement everyday, and i wanted to quit the class. but thinking about letting my mother down and if i gave up this time, i would do the same thing ne_t time, so i decided to insist. this was the road that i chose, so i can’t give up.

因为我看了一部电影,被一个跳舞跳得像天使的女孩吸引了,所以我就想要像她一样。我告诉我的母亲,我想学舞蹈课。她很高兴地带我去舞蹈工作室。一开始,我很努力练习,一步一步取得进步让我感觉棒极了。但一个月过去了,我感到很厌烦因为每天做同样的运动,我想要退学。但是想到这会让我的妈妈失望,而且如果我这一次放弃了,下一次我还会做同样的事情,所以我决定坚持下去。这是我选择的路,所以我不能放弃。

精选读者点评

这个“像天使的女孩”写得内容出彩!后文所有坚持都有了来处,不是空喊口号,是心里真住进了一个光。只是“做同样的运动”建议改成“练同一个动作”,更准。

初中英语作文-遵守校规

300字
主题:规则意识、校园秩序、责任担当、社会规范

as the saying goes “no rules no”. if people don’t obey the rules, our society will be a mess. so does our school. if the school doesn have rules to limit students’ behavior, the whole school will be in chaos. although some school rules seem strict to the students and without necessary, it makes a lot of contribution to manage the school. thus, no matter what we treats the school rules, we should obey it.

俗话说“无规不成方圆”。如果人们不遵守规则,我们的社会将是一片混乱。我们学校也是一样。如果学校没有制定规矩来限制学生的行为,整个学校将会陷入混乱。虽然学校的一些规则对学生来说很严格而且看起来似乎是没有必要的,但它对管理整个学校做出了很大贡献。因此,不管我们怎么看待校规,我们都应该遵守它。

精选读者点评

这句“无规不成方圆”用得真稳!后头解释也清楚,像跟同学聊天说理,不绕弯子。话说回来“no rules no”这处英文引用有点突兀,中文作文里夹英文,得想想值不值得,要是删掉,整段反而更干净有力。

保护眼睛 protect our eyes

400字
主题:健康习惯、视力防护、科学用眼、青少年保健

保护眼睛 protect our eyes

there are many students in middle school wear the glasses, and many of them were wearing the glasses since little. we have to protect our eyes, prevent them from the short-sightedness. we should keep a good sitting posture, never read the books too closely. we’d better have a short break every hour of reading, close eyes or look at the distance. we should do the eye e_ercises every day. in the evening, we also shouldn’t read while we are lying. and more important, we shouldn’t spend hour and hour starring at our cellphone. we all should protect our eyes.

有很多中学生都带着眼镜,其中很多人从很小就开始戴了。我们必须要保护我们的眼睛,预防眼睛近视。我们应该保持良好的坐姿,看书的时候不要离太近。我们每看一个小时的书能短暂休息一下,闭上眼睛或者看向远方。我们应该每天都做眼保健操。晚上的时候,我们也不要边躺着边看书。更重要的是,我们不要连续花几个小时盯着手机看。我们都应该保护我们的眼睛。

精选读者点评

眼睛是心灵的窗户,可别让这扇窗蒙上雾气啊!坐姿、距离、休息、眼操、手机,你全点到了,真像个小医生在开护眼处方~稍显“starring”写成“staring”啦,下次检查拼写时多眨眨眼哈!

简单初中英语作文-夏日健康

400字
主题:养生保健、季节适应、身心平衡、生活常识

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health is important for everybody. people need to pay attention to it. in summer, people need to pay special attention on it. otherwise, they will get ill easily. in such high temperature, if people don’t pay attention to their health, they may get sunstroke. but if they often eat the food that can decrease internal heat, they will have less chance to get sunstroke. in addition, in summer, people always have hot temper because of the hot temperature. and it is easy to feel tired. so, they need to have enough rest to adjust themselves. in a word, people need to pay special attention in summer to live a healthy life.

健康对每个人来说都很重要。大家都需要留意。夏天大家要特别的注意健康问题。否则,会很容易生病的。如此高的温度,如果大家不注意自己的健康,就可以会中暑。但如果经常吃一些降火的食物,就可以减少中暑的机会。此外,在夏天,因为高温人们脾气总是会比较暴躁。而且很容易疲劳。因此,他们需要有足够的休息来调整自己。总之,为了健康的生活在夏天人们需要特别留心。

精选读者点评

中暑、降火、暴躁,这几个词贴合情境!着实是“降火”,比写“清热”更像咱平时说话,生活味儿一下就出来了。再翻翻你写的“脾气暴躁”,后头能不能加半句小例子?比如谁摔了碗,或谁吼了句“热死啦”吧!

我的未来 my future 初中英语作文

400字
主题:理想、热爱、成长、旅行、生活、教育

i think i will be a teacher in the future, because i like to stay with children. ill live in shanghai because i went to shanghai last summer and fell in love with it. i think its really a beautiful city. as a teacher, i’ll try my best to teach my students well and tell them how to be a useful person. in my free time, i’ll listen to music, pop songs and go shopping with my friends, sometimes ill keep pets-maybe a colorful bird. it makes me happy. during the summer holiday, i’ll go to italy on vacation. i hear that its a great place to have fun.

我觉得将来我会成为一名教师,因为我喜欢和孩子们待在一起。我会住在上海,因为我去年夏天去上海的时候就爱上了它。我真的觉得那是一个美丽的城市。作为一名老师,我会尽力教好我的学生并告诉他们如何做一个有用的人。在我的空闲时间,我会听音乐,流行歌曲,和我的朋友去购物,有时候我会养宠物,也许会是一只色彩鲜艳的鸟。它能让我开心。暑假的时候我会去意大利度假。我听说那里是去玩的好地方。

精选读者点评

开头用英文写得挺自然,但中英文混着来,读着有点跳。后半段“有用的人”这个说法,咱们能不能换个更具体、更有温度的词?比如“眼里有光、心里有爱的人”?试试看~

为妈妈打工-working for my mother

600字
主题:劳动体验、家庭支持、自我认知、责任意识、成长感悟

the summer vacation began. i wanted to make money for the ne_t tenn. but i had no chance to do so.

at that time, my mother was writing a book, and she needed a person to type for her. i decided to work for her for pay. my mother agreed, but she asked me to finish it on time. she paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.

i began to type. it became difficult because i typed slowly.i finished the work two weeks later and i got 200 yuan for it. now i knew it was hard to make money.

暑期开始了,我想为下学期挣些钱,但是总没有机会。

那时,妈妈在写一本书,她需要有人为她打字。我决定为妈妈有偿工作。妈妈同意了,但要求我按时完成。妈妈每付我5元钱。

我开始打字。打字变得很难,因为我打得慢。两周后我完成了工作,挣了200元。现在我知道挣钱是不容易的。

the summer vacation began. i decided to work to make money for the ne_t term. but i didn know what work i could do.

at that time, my mother was writing a book. i decided to type for her for pay. she agreed and paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.

i began to work. i typed so slowly that i could type only several hundred words a day. it was a hard job for me. i kept typing all day long.

i finished the work two weeks later. i came to know how hard it was to make money.

暑假开始了,我决定打工为下学期挣些钱。但我不知道我能做什么工作。

那时,妈妈在写一本书。我想为她有偿打字,她同意了,答应每千字付我5元钱。

我开始工作。我打字很慢,每天才能打几百字。对我来说这是一项辛苦的工作,我只能整天工作着。

两周后我终于完成了这项工作。我认识到挣钱是多么的不容易啊!

精选读者点评

这个“打字挣200元”的事,写得真踏实!没有大话空话,一个“慢”字带出多少手指发酸、眼睛发涩的细节,你把“不容易”这三个字,敲进键盘里了。

我为90后代言-初中简单英语作文带翻译

500字
主题:代际认同、青春特质、社会适应、自我辩护、时代印记

although our generation has received much criticism, i am still proud of being one of the 90 generations. many people consider us as open, bold, outstanding character, early-maturing, and selfish and so on. actually, i don’t think those descriptions are bad. what we perform is the need of society. we are open and bold means we ready to connect with the world. i think our outstanding character is necessary. don’t you think it is terrible that everyone in the world is the same? as for early-maturing, i think it is good for us to do well preparation for entering the society. last, i don’t think people can criticize us to be selfish. people often say that everyone is selfish. 90 generation is a promising new generation.

虽然我们这一代人已经受到了很多批评,我仍然以作为一名90后而感到骄傲。许多人都赋予我们这样的头衔,开放,大胆,突出的性格,早熟,自私等。实际上,我不认为这些描述是属于批评性的。我们的表现纯属社会需要。我们开放、大胆意味着我们准备好与世界接轨了。我认为我们突出的性格是很有必要的。你不觉得如果这个世界上每个人都是的话,该是多么可怕的吗?至于早熟,我认为这是我们为进入社会做好准备。最后,我不认为人们可以随便批评我们是自私的。大家不常说,人人都是自私的。90后是前途光明的新一代。

精选读者点评

“90后是的新一代”,这句话读来提气!结尾有力,像小拳头攥紧了往上挥。值得注意的是“early-maturing”翻成“早熟”容易让人想到小孩装大人,换成“早慧”或“更早具备社会意识”,味道就正了。

如何才能成功-how to succeed in life

350字
主题:成功品质、自我成长、积极进取、人生奋斗

人人都渴望在有生之年成为一名成功人士,然而并不是每个人在任何时候都能成功。那些懒惰的喜欢做白日梦的人是很难成功的。一个成功人士必须具备一些优秀的品质,如勤奋、毅力、恒心等。他必须不断地学习以使自己成为一个有能力的人,有时还要能屈能伸以适应环境的变化。总之,自信是走向成功的第一步,而努力工作是成功的主要因素。

everybody is eager to be a successful person in his life. but not all people can always succeed. people who are lazy and want to succeed only by daydreaming can hardly succeed. a successful person must possess some good characters, such as diligence, strong will, perseverance, etc. he must keep on learning and make himself a capable person. sometimes he should be more fle_ible to change with the situations. all in all, serf-confidence is thefirst step on the road to success. and hard work is the key element of success.

精选读者点评

这篇作文观点挺正,但“成功人士必须具备……”这类句子写得太满啦!你有没有想过:一个天天送外卖的爸爸,算不算成功?他没上过大学,可把孩子养大、供上学,这算不算一种“成功”?下次试试写个具体的人,比喊口号动人多啦。

初中简单英语作文-my friend and i

250字
主题:友谊、成长、对比、互助、真实、亲切

my name is li baoling . i have a good friend . her name is chen ziqing . i am 13 years old . she is as old as me. i am 155cm tall. she is 150cm tall . she is 5cm shorter than me . i am 36kg . she is 37kg . she is heavier than me .she often does homework with me .we always help each other. i am happy to have a good firend .

我的名字叫黎宝玲。我有一个好朋友。她的名字是陈自强。我13岁。她和我一样大。我身高155cm。她身高150cm。她比我矮5cm。我是36公斤。她是6cm。她比我重,她经常做家庭作业,我们总是互相帮助。我很高兴有一个好朋友。

精选读者点评

名字写错了哟,“陈自强”和前面拼音“chen ziqing”对不上,是“陈子晴”还是“陈子青”?顺手改一改哈~

我的偶像 my idol

450字
主题:榜样力量、人格魅力、体育精神、成长陪伴、热爱坚守

i like yao ming very much who is the idol i like most. i like playing basketball and in my opinion, he is the best basketball player inchina. when he started to play basketball in nba, i was so e_cited that i saw the news about him everyday. when he performed well, i was really happy for him. when he did not, i hoped he could rearrange himself and do well in the ne_t game. what’s more, his personalities attract me as well. he is kind-hearted and humorous. he always smiles and is kind to very body, even his opponents. although he does not play basketball anymore, i still like him. i hope he can do well in other fields as well.

我很喜欢姚明,他是我最喜欢的偶像。我喜欢打篮球,在我看来他是中国秀的篮球运动员。当他开始去nba打篮球的时候我非常激动,因为我可以每天都可以看到有关他的消息了。当他表现优异的时候我真的为他感到高兴,当他表现得不好的时候我希望他能够调整好自己在下一场比赛中好好表现。另外,他的性格同样吸引着我。他非常热心和幽默,总是面带微笑,对每个人都很友好,甚至对是自己的对手。虽然他不再打篮球了,我仍然很喜欢他。我希望他在其他领域也能做得很好。

精选读者点评

这个“e_cited”“ne_t”写得挺有现场感啊,像你正趴在课桌上抄新闻剪报呢!值得注意的是“inchina”中间少个空格,“very body”也得改改,偶像都这么认真,咱可不能输在拼写上。

快乐梦境-a happy dream

700字
主题:志愿服务、文化自信、语言交流、青春担当、家国情怀

_iao ming had a dream last night. in his dream, he volunteered to serve the beijing olympics. he tried his best to help foreign friends from different countries. in a shop, he found that the salesgirl didn understand what the foreign friend wanted to buy. _iao ming came up to help them. then _iao ming talked with the foreigner about beijing. he thanked _iao ming and said _iao mings english was very good. _iao ming was so happy that he woke out of laugh.

我的同学小明昨天晚上做了一个梦。在梦里,他成为北京奥运会一名志愿者。他努力帮助来自世界各地的外国朋友。在一家商店里,小明发现售货员不明白一位外国朋友想买什么。小明上去帮助他们,接着小明向外国朋友介绍了北京。外国朋友感谢小明并说小明的英语非常好。小明非常高兴以致于笑着从梦中醒来。

my classmate, _iao ming, had a dream last night. in his dream, he volunteered to serve the beijing olympics. he tried his best to help foreign friends from different countries. when he was walking along the street, he found a foreign friend looking worfled. _iao ming came up to ask him. the foreign friend told _iao ming that he didn know how to get to the workersstadium. _iao ming told him it was not far away. then he took the foreigner to the workers stadium. on the way _iao ming told him more about beijing the foreign friend thanked _iao ming and said his english was good. _iao ming was so happy that he woke out of laugh.

我的同学小明昨晚做了一个梦,他梦见自己成为北京奥运会一名志愿者。他努力帮助来自世界各地的外国朋友。当他在街上走路时,看见一位外国朋友很焦急,小明便上前去问。这个外国朋友告诉小明他不知怎么去工人体育场。小明告诉他离这儿不远,然后带这个外国人去体育场。路上小明告诉他关于北京更多的事。这个外国朋友感谢小明,并夸他英语好。小明很高兴以致于笑着从梦中醒来。

精选读者点评

小明帮老外找工人体育场那段,像亲眼见!动作、对话、路途上的介绍,像放电影,下次试试把“笑着醒来”改成“枕头都湿了一小片”,更活!

暑假难忘的一件事

300字
主题:家庭温暖、责任意识、童年记忆、自然之美

an unforgettable thing during summer vacation

暑期难忘的一件事

it was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning, i decided to see my grandparents. so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me, and i was very happy, too.

今天天气不错,太阳天.当我早上醒来,我决定去看看爷爷奶奶,所以我乘巴士中午到了那里,爷爷奶奶看到我很开心,而且我也很开心。

in the afternoon, my farther asked me to help him water the plant, and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

下午爸爸叫我帮他给植物浇水,看到那些在风中微笑的花儿我很开心。

in a word, today is a unforgetive day. because i saw my relatives and helped people.

总的说来,今天是难忘的一天.因为我去看了亲戚也帮助了他人。

精选读者点评

这“花儿在风中微笑”真灵动!比写“花开了”强十倍,孩子心里有光,笔下才长出花来。

十年以后after ten years

400字
主题:理想职业、教育温度、语言实践、成长承诺、师生关系

十年以后after ten years

after ten years, i will be an english teacher of my middle school, be the people i respect the most. i will give my students very lively english classes, tell them study english can be fun. i won’t leave my students much homework so they can have time to play. i will invite them to the english corner, have a talk with foreign friends, so they can speak english, not just read the english. my students will like me, not hide away from me. my student and i can be friends. from now on, i have to work hard to be the perfect english teacher.

十年以后,我将会成为我的中学的一名英语老师,成为我最尊敬的人。我会给我学生上非常生动的英语课,告诉他们学习英语也可以很有趣。我不会给我的学生留下太多作业,让他们可以有时间去玩。我会邀请他们参加英语角,跟外国朋友们交谈,让他们会说英语,而不只是读英语。我的学生会很喜欢我,而不是躲着我。我跟我的学生可以成为老朋友。从现在起,我要非常努力做一个完美的英语老师。

精选读者点评

开头中英混排挺有想法,但“after ten years”和后面中文没呼应上,像两篇作文挤一块了。建议统一用中文,或者真想写英文,就整段英文 中文翻译,别半截子。

什么是成功? what is success?

450字
主题:价值认知、人生选择、内在满足、成长感悟、自我实现

初中英语作文范文:什么是成功? what is success?

what is success? i think different people will have different answers. some people think that success is earning a great deal of money or working in the government. or success is nothing but we look for all the time. in my opinion, success is quite simple. it means you can live the life you want and you can feel happiness very often. sometime, money cannot bring you happiness or satisfaction, and you can’t have the feeling of success. because money is just the tool to achieve your goal but never the goal. therefore, looking for what you really want and then work hard for it. then you are close to success.

什么是成功?我想这是一个仁者见仁智者见智的问题。有的人认为,赚很多的钱或者在政府部门任职就是成功,又或者成功并不是什么东西,但我们却对它孜孜以求。我认为,成功很简单,那就是你能过上你想要的生活,并能常常感觉到幸福。有的时候,金钱并不能带给你幸福感或满足感,那也就不能感觉到幸福了,因为金钱只是你实现目标的工具而不是终极目标。因此,知道自己想要的,然后为之努力,那你也就离成功不远了。

精选读者点评

“成功”说得挺真的是!没堆大词儿,句句像自己心里掏出来的。相当喜欢那句“金钱只是工具不是目标”,干净利落,有分量。再加个生活里的小例子,比如奶奶种花、爸爸修车时的笑,就更打动人啦。

老师的初中英语作文

400字
主题:温暖陪伴、融入集体、教育温度、师生信任、成长转折

关于老师的初中英语作文

the first day when i started my middle school life, i felt so lonely, because i didn’t know anyone who was around me. my teacher miss li was like our parent, and she arranged everything for us. the first lesson she gave was to let us introduce each other, soon we became familiar with each other. miss li was very good at telling jokes. she made the atmosphere so lively and funny. we laughed out loudly. i was no longer feeling lonely and made many friends. miss li is favored by everyone. she is such a nice teacher. i am so lucky to be one of her students.

当我第一天开始我的中学生活时,我感到很孤独,因为我都不认识周围的人。李老师是我的老师,她就像我们的父母一样,为我们安排好一切。第一节课她让我们互相介绍自己,很快我们就彼此熟悉了。李老师很擅长讲笑话,她把气氛弄得很活跃、有趣,我们都大声笑了出来。我不再感到孤独也交了很多朋友。每一个人都喜欢李老师,她是一个好老师,我很幸运能够成为她的学生。

精选读者点评

李老师讲笑话那段灵动自然!“我们笑出声”比“大家很开心”有力多啦,下次试试写清哪个笑话让你破了功呢!