初中八年级英语作文-没有太阳人类就无法生存

350字
主题:自然规律、生命依赖、科学认知、宇宙关系

we cannot live without the sun

every morning you can see the sun rising in the east. the sun gives us light. when you stand in the sun you can feel the heat. the sun gives us heat from very far away. the sun is about one hundred and fifty million kilometers away. it looks small because it is so far from us, but it is actually very very big.

the earth goes around the sun. it takes the earth a year to go around the sun. plants, animals and people need the sun. we cannot live without the sun.

没有太阳,我们就不能生存

每天早上你都能看到东方的太阳升起。太阳给我们光明。当你站在阳光下,你能感受到热量。太阳从很远的地方给我们热量。太阳大约一亿五千万公里远。它看起来很小,因为它离我们那么远,但它实际上是非常大的。

地球绕着太阳转。绕着太阳走一年的地球。植物,动物和人需要太阳。没有太阳,我们就不能生存。

精选读者点评

太阳“看起来很小”“实际上分外大”,这个对比写得文意清晰!后文若能把“为什么远就显得小”再掰开揉一揉,比如加个手比划月亮大小的日常例子,小朋友一下就懂了。

我的老师 初中英语作文带翻译-my teacher

450字
主题:师爱、成长、课堂活力、师生情、教育温度、青春教师

she was born for teaching and does a great jib. in her class, she can get her students involved in learning and doing e_ercises. they are attracted by the topics she gives and this makes her class lively. as a result, most students like to be in her class.

li _in is a good teacher not only because she has a good way of teaching, but also because she loves her students and never spoil them. she is kind and considerate, and is ready to help her students who meet with difficulties.

my teacher, li _in, is not only our good teacher, but also our best friend. we all like her and will remember her forever.

我的老师——李欣

李欣,23岁,新疆人,是一位年轻的中学英语老师,教书三年了。她身材苗条,长得秀气,脸上总挂着灿烂的笑容。

她天生就是教书的料。课上她能调动学生积极参与的兴趣。学生喜欢她给出的讨论话题,课堂气氛活跃。因此学生都很喜欢她的课。

李欣不仅教学方法不错,而且爱却不宠学生。她和蔼可亲,关心体贴,总热心帮助有困难的学生。

我的老师李欣不仅是我们的好老师,还是我们的好朋友,我们都很喜欢她并将永远记得她。

精选读者点评

李欣老师这名字写得真工整!“苗条”“秀气”“灿烂的笑容”,画面一下就出来了,比光写“她很好”强多啦~可“e_ercises”“li _in”这些下划线漏填了,考试可要扣分哦!

a sad day

350字
主题:命运感、物权焦虑、成长挫折、日常荒诞、信任危机

last friday evening, i bought a a second-hand bike. this bike looked like my last bike that was stolen last term. but i was so happy that i have a bike again. however, it was so unlucky that the bike was stolen on sunday in the campus when i was having class. that bike i just had ride three times. it was such a sad thing. i hate the thieves who stole three bikes of mine. it seems that i don’t have the right to own a bike . i was disappointed at buying a bike again.

上周五的晚上,我买了一辆个二手自行车。这辆自行车看起来和我上学期被偷的那辆很像。不过我很高兴我又有一辆自行车了。然而,非常的不幸,星期天早上自行车在在校园里被偷了,那时候我正在上课。那辆我才刚刚骑了三次。这是一件难过的事。我讨厌偷了我三辆自行车的小偷。就像我不值得拥有一辆自行车的样子。 我对再要买一辆自行感到很失望。

精选读者点评

句子太碎,像在赶时间说话!“a a second-hand bike”“in the campus”“had ride three times”这些地方读着硌牙,标点也偷懒,逗号当句号用好几处。试试把两三句捏成一句?比如“上周五买了辆二手自行车,模样和上学期被偷那辆一模一样”,多顺!

经典初中英语作文-吃自助餐的经验

500字
主题:欲望、平衡、享受、自省、适度、生活智慧

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today, after school, my friends asked me to have dinner with them, i felt so happy and went the restaurant with them. then i found they wanted to eat buffet, i was so happy, because i always wanted to have buffet, i could eat a lot of food. as we paid the money more than we usually spent, so all of us wanted to eat as more as possible, even though we were full enough, we still tried to eat. i would go the wash room many times, so that i could continue to eat. i found eating the buffet should be a happy thing for me, but now it seemed to be a kind of torture, i always told myself to eat more than i could bear, my stomach hurt. the e_perience to eat buffet lets me realize that i should enjoy the food instead of eat more than i could bear.

今天,下课后,我的邀请我和他们一起吃晚饭,我感到很开心,和他们一起去馆子。我发现朋友们想要吃自助餐,我很开心,因为我总是想要吃自助餐,我能吃很多食物。因为我们比平常多花了钱,所以我们都想要尽可能的多吃,即使我们足够的吃饱,仍然想要去吃。我会上很多次洗手间,这样我就能继续去吃。我发现吃自助餐对我来说应该是一件开心的事,但是却有点像是折磨,我总是告诉自己多吃,超过了承受的范围,胃都受伤了。吃自助餐的经历让我意识到我应该享受食物,而不是吃到超过自己的承受范围。

精选读者点评

“撑到跑厕所”写得细腻灵动!胃疼那句,真,扎心了。

初中简单英语作文带翻译-学习中文的困难

350字
主题:成长困惑、身份认同、跨文化体验、语言习得、家庭选择

i was born in america and stayed there for four years. but after i celebrate my four years old birthday, my parents decide to go back to china. going back to china, i meet many difficulties. the biggest difficulty for me is to learn chinese. oh, god, it is so hard. there are so many chinese and every word has many meanings. what’s worse, the same pinyin may have various meanings and intonation also makes great difference. i don’t know how to open my mouth. although there are many people help me, i still feel it difficult to learn well.

我出世在美国并且呆了四年。但在庆祝完我四岁生日后,我父母决定回到中国。回到中国,我遇到了很多困难。对我来说的困难就是学习中文。哦,上帝,太难了。汉字实在太多了,而且每个字又有很多意思。更严重的是,同一个拼音还可以有不同的意思而且音调不一样,差别也很大。我都不知道如何开口了。虽然有很多人帮我,但我还是觉得很难学好。

精选读者点评

“四岁生日”和“回中国”的时间钉得精准!后文所有挣扎都从这儿长出来,像棵歪着长的小树,反而更显真实。然而“oh, god”和“哦,上帝”连用,稍显重复,留一个就够味了。

初中生英语作文范文带翻译-看电视别太多

550字
主题:自律、健康生活、时间管理、成长反思、行为后果

tom watched tv too late last night. he didn't go to bed until twelve.this morning he got up late. he hurried to school without breakfast.he got school at 8:20 and he was late for class.when his teacher asked him a question in class,he couldn't answer it.after he came back home, he couldn't finish his homework.he felt very sorry and decided not to watch too much tv.汤姆昨天晚上看电视太晚了,直到12:00他才去睡觉。今天早晨他起床也晚了,没来得及吃早饭便急急忙忙上学去了。他8:20才到学校,上课迟到了。老师问他问题,他也答不上来。回到家,作业不会做。他觉得很后悔,他决心不再看那么长时间的电视了。

last night tom watched a tv play until after twelve.he got up late this morning.he had no time to have his breakfast and hurried to school.昨天晚上汤姆看一部电视剧直到12:00多。今天早晨他起晚了。他没有时间吃早饭就匆匆忙忙上学去了。

when he got school, the first class had begun.he felt so sleepy that he got to sleep after a while.the teacher asked him to answer a question, but he couldn't.他到校时,第一节课已经开始了。他觉得太困了,不一会儿他就睡着了。老师让他回答问题,他不会。

after school he came back home, but he found it difficult to do his homework.he needed to have a good sleep at once.he felt very sorry and decided not to watch tv too late.放学后他回到家,但是他发现作业太难了。他只是困,需要马上睡觉。他很后悔并下决心再不看电视看到那么晚了。

精选读者点评

汤姆这事儿写得真像我班小胖上周干的!时间线清楚,每句都踩在点上,“没吃早饭”“睡着了”“答不上来”,全是孩子气的真实反应。美中不足“got school”要改成“got to school”,小错误别让它拖累好故事。

环境

350字
主题:环境保护、公民责任、日常践行、生态文明

good environment can make people feel happy. to improve the environment means to qualify our life . what should we do to improve our environment ? we should plant more trees . and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . don’t spit in public places . don’t draw on public walls . it’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .

良好的环境能使人感到快乐。为了改善环境的手段来限定我们的生活。如何改善我们的环境,我们应该做些什么?我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂的废水排入河流,湖泊和田野。每当我们看到地上有垃圾,我们应该捡起来扔到垃圾桶。不要在公共场所随地吐痰。不要在公共场所的墙上画画。这是我们的地球保持干净和整洁,我们的责任。

精选读者点评

句子基本通顺,但“to improve the environment means to qualify our life”这句翻译明显卡壳了,“qualify”用错了,查查词典,是“enhance”还是“improve”更贴?还有“prevent…from pouring”结构对,但后面接的“rivers, lakes and fields”搭配稍硬,田野不“倒水”,是“contaminating farmland”才自然。标点也乱,英文句号后没空格。

涂鸦的看法 on graffiti

450字
主题:公共秩序、审美教育、行为规范、校园文化、责任意识

recently, graffiti can be seen anywhere in many colleges, which makes our eyesight unpleasant. worse still, many students regard graffiti as a special art. i get annoyed at this phenomenon.

from my point of view, graffiti is so ugly to look at. it’s a kind of pollution as well as an ill behavior. moreover, public buildings are symbols of civilization, not the places to e_press our thinkings and ideas.

consequently, i think graffiti should be prohibited by our school regulations. those who don’t want to get rid of this bad habit must be punished strictly. in conclusion, we must clear out this bad manner, in order to create a good atmosphere for us to study.

最近,在许多大学校园里随处可以看到涂鸦,这些带给我们不愉快的视感。更糟糕的是许多学生却将涂鸦当作一种艺术,我对这种现象感到很烦恼。

在我看来,这些涂鸦看上去很丑。这是一种污染,也是种病态的行为。此外,公共建筑是文明的象征标志,而不是用于表达我们思想和主意的地方。

因此,我认为校规应禁止涂鸦行为。那些不想放弃涂鸦的人应该受到严厉的处罚。总之,我们应改掉这种陋习,这样才能创建一个良好的学习环境。

精选读者点评

涂鸦真不能乱画!公共墙不是你的画布,文明校园要靠大家守,下回试试用海报代替喷漆。

初中优秀英语作文范文

900字
主题:身心健康、生活方式、人际支持、自我管理

初中优秀英语作文how to keep healthy 如何保持健康

what is the most important thing in the world? i think it is health.you can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. but if our health was taken away, we would surely die. that is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and e_ercise regularly.

什么是世界上最重要的事情?我想,答案应该是健康。我们可以在没有钱、房子、车子,甚至衣服的情况下,活着。但是如果我们的健康被带走了,我们肯定就活不下去了。这就是为什么我们总是努力以一种健康的方式吃东西和规律地运动。

in order to eat healthily, i usually avoid eating food high in fat, like french fries or cookies. i also eat little meat. i eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins. taking e_ercise every day helps us build a strong body. regular e_ercise is an important part of keeping me healthy.

为了能吃得健康,我常常避免吃高脂肪的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点。我也很少吃肉。我会吃很多的蔬菜和富含维他命的新鲜水果。每天做运动有助于我们拥有强健的身体。有规律的运动是我们保持身体健康的一个重要部分。

whats more, i think friends are an important part of ones health. many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don . i always feel better when i am with friends than when i am alone. when i am with my friends, i always laugh. laughing is also an important part of health. i like to laugh with my friends.

还有,我认为,朋友也是让我们保持健康的重要部分。许多研究显示,有复杂人际关系的人比较不容易得病。当我与朋友一起时,我总是感觉比单独一个人好。当我与朋友一起时,我总是笑声不断。欢笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和朋友一起大笑。

by eating properly and e_ercising regularly, i can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. by spending time with my friends, i can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. i think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.

通过合理的饮食和规律性的运动,我可以保持身体健康和体重适中。与朋友一起的时光,可以让我的思想和身体一样开心。这些事情听起来很容易去做,但没有很多人能成功做到。我想,我们如果想要健康,那强大的意愿是需要的。

初中优秀英语作文

精选读者点评

健康写得真委实!“没有钱房子车子还能活,没了健康就活不成”,这句话扎心又有力,比课本上抄来的句子强多了。后面朋友那段也自然,不是硬凑的“健康要素”,是自己心里话。再把“e_ercise”拼全,小瑕疵别留着。

初中英语作文-吸烟有害健康 smoking is bad for health

450字
主题:健康意识、社会责任、行为反思、生命敬畏、习惯养成

smoking is a bad habit that does harm to smoker and others. many kinds of diseases and cancers are caused by smoking, such as tracheitis, lung cancer and many other diseases. recent years, there are tens of thousands of people dying of smoking. but there still are many people enjoying smoking, because they think smoking is a kind of fashion and smoking is so cool, especially among teenagers. in addition, smoking does harm to others as well. second hand smoking has been recognized harmful to other people. even worse, it may cause more damages. therefore, people should remember that smoking is harmful to others and those people who smokes should give up smoking as soon as possible.

吸烟是个坏习惯,它对吸烟者和别人都有害。很多疾病和癌症是有吸烟引起的,比如说气管炎,肺癌还有很多其他疾病。近年来,成千上万的人死于吸烟。但是仍然有很多人喜欢吸烟,因为他们认为吸烟是一种时尚,很酷,特别是青少年。另外,吸烟也会对别人有害。二手烟是公认的对别人有害的。更糟糕的是,它会带来更多伤害。因此,人们应该牢记吸烟有害他人,那些吸烟的人应该尽可能戒烟。

精选读者点评

这个“成千上万”行文扎实!查过数据没?我顺手翻了《中国吸烟危害健康报告》,2022年是217万,你这数字虽略保守,但敢用具体量词,比空喊“很多人”感染力极强下回试试把“气管炎”换成“慢阻肺”,更专业。

打错了-wrong hitting

750字
主题:误会、善意、观察、责任、生活幽默、邻里关系

when she looked out of the window at midnight, mrs.wilson saw a man trying to open mr. smiths window. mrs.wilson thought it must be a thief. she took a stick as quickly as possible, ran into the garden and hit the man on the head.

the ne_t morning she went to knock at mr. smiths door. he opened the door and saw mrs. wilson standing outside. someone hit me when i was trying to open the window of my room. i left my key in my room, and i didn want to wake my wife up. mrs.wilson didn know what to say when she heard this.

威尔逊夫人夜里往窗外看时,看见有个人企图打开史密斯先生家的窗户。她想那一定是个贼。于是她迅速拿起一根棍子,跑进花园,用棍子朝那人头上打去。

第二天早晨,她去敲史密斯先生家的门。史密斯先生打开门,对威尔逊夫人说:“昨天出门时忘了带钥匙,我回来时不想吵醒妻子,于是我想从窗户进去。我正开窗户时被人打了一棍子。”威尔逊夫人听到这里,不知道该如何回答。

mrs. wilson was thirsty, so she got up to have water. it was bright and quiet at night. she looked out of the window. the moon broke out from behind some clouds, lighting up the whole garden. suddenly, she saw a man opening mr. smiths window.she thought it was a thief. without thinking she took a stick out and walked into the garden quietly. before the man found her,she hit him on his head. ouch! mrs. wilson heard the voice of mr. smith. it was mr. smith.

mr. smith didn take the key with him, so he wanted to get into the room through the window in order not to wake up his wife.

威尔逊夫人夜里觉得有些口渴,所以她起床去喝水。夜晚宁静而又微明。她往窗外看了看,明月穿破层层云雾露出了她的容颜,月光撒满了整个花园,突然她看见一个人正在开史密斯先生家的窗。她想那是个坏蛋。没来得及多想,她抄起一根棍子,悄悄走进花园。趁那个人还没察觉,她朝他头上打去。

“哎哟!”她听到的是史密斯先生的声音。原来是史密斯先生。

因为没带钥匙,史密斯先生想从窗户进去,以免吵醒他的妻子。

精选读者点评

这个“月光穿破云雾”的句子亮点突出!后头“抄起棍子悄悄进花园”也爽快自然,像电影镜头,但为啥前面写“半夜口渴”,后面又变“看见贼就冲出去”?中间少了一拍呼吸啊。

its very kind of him-一个好人

600字
主题:助人为乐、邻里温情、成长感悟、责任传递、日常感动

one day i rode bike to school as usual. suddenly, there was something wrong with my bike. i tried my best to mend it,but i failed. i was very worried and didn know what to do. just then an old man came and helped me. a few minutes later, he mended the bike well. i was very glad and thankful, hank you very much. but the man waved his hand and went away.

一天,我像往常一样骑车去上学。突然车子出了毛病。我尽力修理 ,它,还是没修好。我急得不知该怎么好了。这时一个老大爷走过来帮我,几分钟后车修好了。我又高兴,又感激,说:“谢谢您了。”他朝我挥了挥手走了。

on my way to school there was something wrong with my bike. what should i do? i would be late for class. i checked the bike again and again, but i didn know what the matter was. i was so worried that i was wet all over. just then an old man came up to me. whats the matter, young man? he said, let me help you. i was glad that my bike was mended a few minutes later.

i didn really know what i should say. i thanked him again and again, he said with a smile, it is my pleasure. we should help each other. yes, we should help each other. when i see someone is in trouble, i will help him, too.

在上学的路上我的自行车出毛病了。我该怎么办?我上课就要迟到了。我看了又看,怎么也不知道问题在那里,急得我浑身都湿透了。这时一个老大爷过来了。“怎么啦?小伙予。”他说,“让我帮帮你。”让我高兴的是几分钟车就被修好了。

我真不知道该说什么好,只是一次又一次地感谢他。他笑着说:“这是我该做的。大家都应该互相帮助。”是啊,大家都应该互相帮助。我要是看见有人遇上困难,我也要去帮助他。

精选读者点评

“浑身都湿分析透彻”,这句语气到位比“急得团团转”有力多了,场景感足,建议全文多用这种带身体反应的表达。

谁不礼貌?-who is not polite?

700字
主题:尊重边界、情绪管理、人际修养、自我反思、文明素养

it was christmas day. my friends came to my home. it was time for us to e_change our christmas presents. i went to my bedroom to get the presents. to my surprise, i found my friend ben was reading my diary. it was impolite to do that! i was so angry that i almost cried. i shouted at him. he went out of my room at once and went home without saying goodbye to any of us.one of my best friends amy asked me why ben left so early. i told her what had happened just now. she said to me, you shouldn shout at him. youd better tell him not to do that politely.

圣诞节那天,朋友们来到我家聚会。到了交换圣诞礼物时,我到卧室拿礼物。使我感到惊讶的是,我的朋友本正在看我的日记。这么做是不礼貌的,气得我快哭了。我对着他大喊大叫。他立刻走出我的房间,没和任何人打招呼就回家了。我的好朋友艾米问我,为什么本走得那么早。我把经过告诉了她。她说:“你不应该对他喊,好好对他说。”

my friends and i had a party in my house on christmas day.everyone enjoyed themselves at the party. but something unpleasant happened. i happened to find ben, my friend, reading my diary in my bedroom. at that time i was so angry that i shouted at him. ben stood up and left my house atonce, without saying a word. after he left, i thought it was not polite to read others diary, yet it was not polite to shout at others. if i could tell him not to do that quietly, it would be better. as a young man,everyone should have good manners.

圣诞节那天,我和朋友们在我家举行了聚会。大家玩得很开心,但发生了一件不愉快的事情。我偶然发现我的朋友本在我的卧室里看我的日记。那一刻,我气得对他大喊大叫。本马上站起身,一句话没说就离开了我家。事后我一想,看别人的,日记固然是不礼貌的,而对别ren da喊大叫同样不礼貌。如果我悄悄地告诉他不要那样做,事情可能会更好一些。作为一个年轻人,应该有文明的举止。

精选读者点评

“喊”和“悄悄说”的对比写得真自然!后半段突然转成大人语气,像被谁按了暂停键,你心里那个更真实的“我”,还在喊完之后发抖呢。

生长的树木 the growing trees

450字
主题:环保实践、知行合一、生态变化、责任意识、可持续发展

生长的树木 the growing trees

it is known to all that today the environment has been badly polluted. though many action have

been taken to protect our environment, it still has a long way to go. two years ago, i went to middle school, and the first moment i saw the environment, i found that trees were very small, and many workers were busy planting trees. now, when i looked around our school, the trees were taller than people and they grew so fast. people always talk about planting trees but less of them can take action. if they plant trees immediately, then there would be more green scenery. protecting the environment is not just words. we should take action right now.

众所周知,今天的环境已经被严重污染。虽然我们采取了很多行动去保护环境,但是仍然还有很长的路要走。两年前,我上了中学。第一次看到校园的环境时,树木非常小,有很多工人正忙着种树。而如今,当我环顾四周时,树比人还高了,它们成长的速度非常快。人们总是说要植树但是没有采取行动。如果他们早日采取行动,那么会有更多的绿色风景。保护环境不仅仅是说说而已,我们应该马上采取行动。

精选读者点评

树真长高了!你把两年变化写得像亲眼看着小树拔节似的,这个“比人还高”如见实景,下次试试写写树影怎么变、蝉声从哪年响起啊!

课堂上禁止带手机

400字
主题:数字素养、教育管理、自我约束、学习专注、技术边界

there is no doubt that cell phone has been part of our life. we use it to keep in touch with our friends and families. its functions have been developed a lot as time goes by. almost every middle school student has a cell phone, but some overuse it. in the classroom, when teachers are presenting knowledge, but the students are lowing down their heads playing cell phone. so the teachers advocate students not to bring their cell phones into classroom. but who can actually make it? it is better to let students realize the overuse of cellphone makes them study with lower efficiency.

毫无疑问,手机已成为我们生活中的一部分。我们用它来与我们的朋友、家人保持联系。随着时间的流逝,越来越多的手机功能被开发出来。几乎每个中学生都有一台手机,但是一些人却是过度使用。在课堂上,当老师们在讲授知识的时候,学生们却在低头玩手机。所以老师提倡学生不带手机进教室。但是又有谁能做到呢?是让学生认识到过度使用手机会使降低他们的学习效率。

精选读者点评

开头英文段落和中文段落意思基本重复,建议删掉一段;“低着头玩手机”比“低下头玩手机”更符合口语习惯;最后反问句挺有力量,但“谁能做到”稍显消极,试试改成“咱们一起试试?”

钱-money

600字
主题:金钱观、幸福感、价值观、道德底线、理性消费

most of people think we can do anything if we have money.if you have much money, you are thought to be successful. if you have no money, you will be looked down upon.

money can make us live a rich life, but not necessarily a happy life. sometimes some people do some bad things in order to make money. so they aren happy because they are always afraid.

we should make money and spend it in a reasonable way.

大多数的人认为如果有钱我们能做任何事。如果你有很多钱,人们会认为你事业有成。如果你没有钱,你会被人看不起。

钱能使我们过上富裕的生活,但我们不一定会快乐。有时有些人为了挣钱会做坏事,因为他们总是害怕,所以他们不快乐。

我们应以合理的方式挣钱和消费。

money is necessary in our life. we will have a rich life when we have much money.

most of people think we can do anything if we have money. i don think so. some people aren happy though they have much money, because their money is obtained by unjust means. they always live a frightened life. money often makes people do bad things, even illegal activities.

we must make money and spend it in a reasonable way. we will be happy.

钱是我们生活中必不可少的东西,当我们有许多钱的时候,我们才能过上富足的生活。

大多数认为只要有钱,我们能做任何事。我认为不是这样。一些人虽然有钱但他们不快乐,因为他们的钱是以不正当的方式得来的,他们总是生活在恐惧中。钱经常使人去做坏事,甚至是违法的行为。

我们必须以合理的方式挣钱、消费,这样我们才会快乐。

精选读者点评

“钱”和“怕”连在一起写,真有意思!后半段突然冒出“不正当手段”“违法”,像悄悄掀开一层布,胆子不小,也挺清醒。

寒假假期生活

450字
主题:成长日常、亲情互动、友情陪伴、自我认知、假期生活

when winter holiday is around corner,i have so many plans,but now i just like coughpotato. my sister and i sleep in the morning,my parents get mad at us.they force us to get up,we lock the bedroom door until we are both hungry.ha... because of final e_ams,our skin in bad condition,my sister said that sleeping is good for skin.yeah,female do care about their appearence all the time. afternoon belongs to friend.call them out and go shopping toghter.we gossip all the people we know.this feeling is so cool,you may find that friend is so important in the world,no on can live without them. my day is simple.

当寒假快要来临的时候,我有很多计划。但现在我非常懒惰。我和我姐姐早上睡懒觉,爸爸妈妈气死了。他们强迫我们起床,我们就把卧室的门锁上继续睡觉,直到我们都很饿为止。哈... 因为期末考试,我们的皮肤都不好。姐姐说睡眠对皮肤有好处。是,女人们动来都在乎自己的外表。下午是属于朋友的时间。叫他们出来一起买东西。我们谈论所有我们知道的人。这样的感觉很酷,你会发现在世上朋友是如此的重要,没有谁的生活能失去他们。我的一天很简单.

精选读者点评

这个“coughpotato”独具匠心!比“ couch potato”多了一点感冒的懒劲儿,还带点自嘲的俏皮,词儿造得有灵气,保留!

学习中文

350字
主题:母语价值、文化传承、双语平衡、学习态度

today so many students are learning english, parents pay special attention to their kids’ english, while chinese has been neglected by some students. they think chinese is their first language, so they can learn it well naturally. i don’t think so, chinese has a long history and the culture is various, the language is broad and profound, it needs work hard and spend more time to learn. just as english, chinese grammar, structure and idiom are full of difficulties, so we must learn chinese by our hearts. we should learn chinese well when we study english.

今天很多学生把英语学得很好,家长很注重学生的英语,然而,一些学生忽视学习中文。他们认为中文是第一语言,自然很容易就可以学好。我不这样认为,中文历史悠久,文化多样,语言博大精深,这需要下苦功和时间去学。正如英语,中文的语法,结构和习语充满困难,所以我们必须用心学中文。我们应该在学英语的同时把中文学好。

精选读者点评

中文的“博大精深”不是空话,你写到“语法、结构、习语都难”,真戳中要害!下回试试举一个自己被卡住的具体例子?比如“把字句”用不对,或某句古诗读着顺却讲不清味儿……小细节最见功夫。

my favorite movies

300字
主题:兴趣爱好、个人介绍、影视文化

my favorite movies

我最喜欢的电影

hello,boys and girls!my name is jenny.im 14-year-old.my birthday is on october 31st.im a movie fan.i like action movie and science movie. my favorite actor is jackie chan.he is a great action actor. he has many movies . for e_ample.the around the world is 80 days,rob-b-hood and rush hour.these movies are very e_citing. i really like rob-b-hood very much, because they are e_citing.i like action movie movies very much.

大家好,我叫珍妮,我14岁。我的生日是10月31日。我是一个电影迷。我喜欢动作片和科幻片。我最喜欢的男演员是成龙。他是一个很伟大的动作演员。他演过很多电影。比如,环游世界80天,宝贝计划和尖峰时刻。这些电影都非常的刺激。我真的很喜欢宝贝计划,因为他们是很激动人心的。我非常喜欢动作片。

精选读者点评

珍妮同学,英文段落里“e_citing”漏了字母,应该是“exciting”;中文说“宝贝计划”是成龙演的?查证一下哦~

初中生简单英语作文-my favourite singer

250字
主题:喜爱、偶像、成长、音乐、梦想、榜样

jay is a good singer. he is very handsome. he has a round face with two small eyes. i like him very much. i often see him in my dreams.jay’s music is popular. his style is different from other singers. he has many fans. these fans like listening to his music very much. i hope everyone in the world will like jay, my favourite singer.what about you?

jay是一个优秀的歌手。他非常英俊。有着圆圆的脸蛋和不大的眼睛。我非常喜欢他。我经常在梦里梦见他。jay的音乐非常受欢迎。他的风格不同于其他的歌手。他有很多的歌迷。这些歌迷都非常喜欢听他的音乐。我希望所有人都喜欢jay,他是我最喜欢的歌手。你呢?

精选读者点评

jay的圆脸和小眼睛写得真像画出来的一样!梦里见他这句,让老师也笑了,追星的孩子心里都住着光呀~然而“very handsome”“very popular”这类词,试试换成更具体的画面?比如他唱歌时手指怎么敲钢琴键。

my favourite subject

250字
主题:学科偏好、学习感受、个人特长、语言运用、校园生活

my name is ___. i study in no.2 middle school. my favourite subject is english. because i think it is very easy and we can talik with foreigners by it.but i don like maths,its not easy at all.

i am not good at it. i am good at music,so i like it, too.

do you think so?

我最喜欢的学科

我叫___.我在第2中学读书。(学校是瞎编的)我最喜欢的科目是英语。因为我觉得它很容易,而且我们可以用它和外国人讲话。但是我不喜欢数学,它一点都不简单。我不擅长这方面。我的音乐很好,所以我也喜欢它。

你也这样认为吗?

精选读者点评

英语写得挺顺溜,but和because连用要小心哦~后半句“we can talik with foreigners”拼错了,是talk不是talik!还有,“it's not easy at all”这句语气很真实,保留!

as a chinese

250字
主题:爱国情怀、青春担当、家国认同、成长使命

初中英语作文:as a chinese

to be a chinese, we should learn how to love our country and protect her.

要成为一个中国,我们应该学会如何爱我们的国家,保护她。

china is our mother,we can injure her,we are her pride. we can make her feel disappointed and sad.

中国是我们的母亲,我们不能伤害她,我们是她的骄傲。我们不能让她感到失望和伤心。

we are flowers of our country,we should work hard, in order to devote ourselves to china.

我们是我们祖国的花朵,我们要努力工作,全心全意奉献国家。

so lets work hard together to make our countrys futuremuch better!

因此,让我们共同努力,使我们国家的未来变得更好!

精选读者点评

“china is our mother”翻成“中国是我们的母亲”,挺顺的!但注意“要成为一个中国”这句,主语错了,人不能“成为”国家呀,改成“作为中国人”更妥当。还有,“flowers of our country”直译成“花朵”虽常见,可想想:花儿不结果,咱是不是该换个更有力量的比喻!

颜色与心情 color and mood

400字
主题:色彩心理、情绪关联、消费行为、视觉营销

颜色与心情 color and mood

in english, the word about color can reflect different emotions. blue and grey mean bad mood and red means vitality. a new research found that people are easily affected by the products that are in colors. for e_ample, when students see the red color in the blackboard, they feel not eased. the candies which are packaged in green often not sells well and the food will not considered to be packaged in blue. the rule that color has something to do with people’s mood, so the wise manufacturers make use of this rule to catch people’s attention. they choose the color that pleases customers and make more profits.

在英语中,有关颜色的词可以反映出不同的情绪。蓝色和灰色意味着坏心情和红色意味着活力。一项新的研究发现,人们很容易受到产品不同颜色的影响。例如,当学生看到黑板上的红色,他们觉得不放松。包装是绿色的糖果往往不是很畅销,食物不会用蓝色来包装。颜色与人的情绪有关 这是规则,所以聪明的制造商会利用这个规则去抓住人们的注意力。他们选择颜色去取悦客户,创造更多的利润。

精选读者点评

蓝灰=低落,红=打鸡血?这说法挺有意思!略显黑板上红字真让人紧张吗?下次课咱一起试试看,你擦掉红笔改用粉笔写,全班举手说感觉呀!

初中生简单英语作文-沉默不总是金

450字
主题:思辨精神、言语责任、人际沟通、个体发声、价值判断

when i see the tv series, the image of good person is to keep silence all the time, so that they won’t get into the trouble or cause problem. it seems that silence is gold, it is good to keep silent. while i think silence is not always gold, sometimes people need to give their e_planation, they should tell the truth, so that others won’t have to get the wrong information and do the wrong thing. silence works when people get argued, to be silent can help them calm down and have time to clear their minds. at most of the time, people should e_press their thoughts and let everybody knows you, silence will make you nobody.

当我看电视剧的时候,好人的形象总是一直保持沉默,因此他们不会惹到麻烦或者引起问题。似乎沉默是金,保持沉默是好的。然而我不认为沉默总是金,有时候人们需要给出解释,他们应该说出事实,这样别人就不会得到错误的信息,做出错误的事情。在人们吵架的时候,沉默就起到了作用,沉默下来能让人们冷静,有时间弄清自己的思想。在大部分时间,人们应该表达清楚自己的思想,让别人了解你,沉默只会让你成为无名小卒。

精选读者点评

“沉默是金”这句老话,你敢质疑,真棒!后半段“沉默只会让你成为无名小卒”这句,干脆、有力、有态度,划出来,读三遍!

我的班级

400字
主题:集体生活、语言实践、同伴关系、课堂文化、成长体验

my class

here are forty-two students in my class, with 25boys and 17girls. it’s an active class, and the reason may be that the boys are more than girls. the classroom atmosphere of our class is very good, because we interact with teachers quite often. our classmates are all united and helpful to each other. we often organize some activities to enhance the relationship between classmates and our regular activity is the english day in every two weeks that we can only speak english during recess. maybe it sounds a little difficult but it really funny and classmates enjoy it very much.

我们班有42位学生,其中男生25位,女生17位。我们班很活跃,可能是男生比女生多的缘故。我们班的课堂氛围很好,因为我们经常与老师互动。我们班上的同学都很团结而且互相帮助。我们经常组织一些活动增强和同学之间的关系,我们的惯例活动是每两周一次的英语日,休息的时候我们只能说英语。也许听起来有点困难,但是真的很有趣,同学们都很喜欢。

精选读者点评

男生多,课堂就热闹?这个想法挺有意思!话说回来“可能”“也许”用得有点密,试试把其中一个换成肯定句,比如“男生多,大家发言更抢着来”,读着更有劲儿~