新年的英语作文chinese new year

150字
主题:传统节日、家庭温情、民俗文化、欢乐氛围

关于新年的英语作文chinese new year

chinese people favourite festival is chinese new year. chinese new year’s name is spring festival. in that days, people always wear new clothes, give presents to friends, cook wonderful meals, eat dumplings, watch tv at night, and parents always give children red packets. so, in chinese new year, i’m very happy!

i like chinese new year!

精选读者点评

红纸包着压岁钱,热腾腾的饺子出锅时雾气扑上眼镜,你写出了年味儿的温度!但“in that days”“i’m very happy”这些表达,像刚学会走路的孩子,摇摇晃晃,咱们一起扶一把?

节约粮食的初中英语作文

300字
主题:勤俭节约、生态文明、身心健康、责任担当

节约粮食的初中英语作文

wasting food is not only an immoral behavior, but also pollutes the environment. so, we should form good habit to solve this problem. we can start from small things, such as, don order more food than we can eat, eat up all the food in the bowls and so on. at the same time, we shouldn eat junk food but healthy food. it’s good for our health to have a balanced diet. in order to our healthy body, we had better eat in school or at home as soon as possible.

浪费食物不仅是一种不道德的行为,而且还会污染环境。因此,我们应该养成良好习惯来解决这个问题。我们可以从小事做起,例如,不点多于我们食量的食物,吃 完碗里的食物等等。同时,我们也不应该吃垃圾食品而是应该吃健康的食物,为了我们 身体健康,我们要更好的在学校或在家吃。

精选读者点评

这个“吃光碗里饭”的细节真走心!后半段突然跳到“垃圾食品”,转得有点急,像上课铃响了才想起没讲完,下回试试把“节约”和“健康”用一根线串起来!

清明节扫墓英语作文

400字
主题:传统节日、生命教育、家族记忆、文化认同、慎终追远

清明节扫墓初中英语作文:清明节扫墓英语作文

last qingming festival,i return home to worship my grandfather.qingming festival is a folk festival.in the past,in the past, the qingming festival was called arbor day. but today, chinese visit their family graves to tend to any underbrush that has grown. weeds are pulled, and dirt swept away, and the family will set out offerings of food and spirit money. unlike the sacrifices at a familys home altar, the offerings at the tomb usually consist of dry, bland food. one theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.

with the passing of time, this celebration of life became a day to the honor past ancestors. following folk religion, the chinese believed that the spirits of deceased ancestors looked after the family. sacrifices of food and spirit money could keep them happy, and the family would prosper through good harvests and more children.

worship还可以用来指宗教礼拜,它还可以表示“祭拜”。清明节时,we return home today to worship grandfather(我们回家乡祭拜外公)。

精选读者点评

这个“dry, bland food”行文扎实!你摸到民俗里那股子克制劲儿了,不是不敬,是怕惊扰,怕错认,怕太香招来野鬼。后半段突然转中文讲worship的用法,像上课走神掏出口袋里的糖纸,亮晶晶但硌手。

my favorite movies

300字
主题:兴趣爱好、个人介绍、影视文化

my favorite movies

我最喜欢的电影

hello,boys and girls!my name is jenny.im 14-year-old.my birthday is on october 31st.im a movie fan.i like action movie and science movie. my favorite actor is jackie chan.he is a great action actor. he has many movies . for e_ample.the around the world is 80 days,rob-b-hood and rush hour.these movies are very e_citing. i really like rob-b-hood very much, because they are e_citing.i like action movie movies very much.

大家好,我叫珍妮,我14岁。我的生日是10月31日。我是一个电影迷。我喜欢动作片和科幻片。我最喜欢的男演员是成龙。他是一个很伟大的动作演员。他演过很多电影。比如,环游世界80天,宝贝计划和尖峰时刻。这些电影都非常的刺激。我真的很喜欢宝贝计划,因为他们是很激动人心的。我非常喜欢动作片。

精选读者点评

珍妮同学,英文段落里“e_citing”漏了字母,应该是“exciting”;中文说“宝贝计划”是成龙演的?查证一下哦~

我的甜蜜之家

400字
主题:家庭温情、归属感、童年记忆、平凡幸福、爱的港湾

初中英语作文范文:我的甜蜜之家

my sweet home

我的甜蜜之家

most people has a sweet home, so have i. i think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

许多人拥有一个甜蜜的家,我也有。我认为我的家是甜蜜的,因为它是我休息、与父母、朋友一起玩乐的地方。

i can remember clearly. once i came back home late because my teacher didn want me leave until i finished my homework. at that time, the weather became colder and the wind became stronger. i was so hungry and cold at that time! i felt i can take it any more, so i ran to my home quickly. when i got my home, i felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

我可以清楚地记着。有一次,直到我完成作业,老师才肯放我回家,所以我就回来晚了。那时候,天气更冷了,风也变得更大了。在那时,我又冷又饿。我觉得自己无法承受了,所以我迅速地跑回家。当我到家的时候,我感到从未有过的温暖和幸福。

thats why i love my sweet home. don you think so?

这就是为什么我爱自己的甜蜜之家。难道你不是这么认为的么?

精选读者点评

回家那段真带感冷风、饿肚子、撒腿狂奔,画面扑面而来,比“家很温暖”有力多啦!

我的优缺点

500字
主题:认识自我、扬长补短、积极进取、健康成长

初中英语作文大全:我的优缺点

my strengths and weaknesses

我的优缺点

it is important to know our good and bad points because this knowledge will help us to improve ourself. we should e_amine ourselves and learn who we are.

对于我们来说,正确地认识自身的优缺点是很重要的,因为这个认识有助于我们自身的提高。我们应该检查自己并学着(认识)我们是谁。

above all, we should recognize our strengths and weaknesses. for e_ample, i am healthy and fit, so i can work hard. im also optimistic, humble and polite. these are my strengths. however, i also have weaknesses. for one thing, im stubborn and a little impatient. im sometimes lazy as well and can spent a whole day just watching tv and eating junk food. im not ashamed to admit these bad pints. knowing what they are lets me focus on improving myself.

首先,我们应该认识自己的优点和缺点。举个例子来说,我是个身体健康的人,所以我可以很努力的工作。我也是一个乐观、谦逊和有礼貌的人。这些是我的优点。可是,我也有缺点。首先,我是一个倔强和有点没有耐心的人。有时候我也很懒惰的,(我)可以花整天的时间看电视和吃垃圾食品。我没有对允许这些缺点(出现)而感到羞愧。了解这些优缺点使我(的注意力)聚焦在提高自身方面。

精选读者点评

这篇作文结构挺清楚,中英对照也用心了!可是“e_amine”“pints”这类拼写小错误得圈出来改掉哦~还有“work hard”用在学生身上稍显奇怪,换成“study hard”更贴切。最后那句“不羞愧”写得真好,自信又坦诚!

michael jordan

250字
主题:体育精神、榜样力量、跨文化交流、职业荣耀

michael jordan used to be an nba member in the u. s. a. he is a legend sports man. his great skill is so amazing that people call him a flying man. although he is not very tall in the basketball field, his wonderful skill always helps him to win games. he isn’t a professional basketball player of nba now,but he is still a good e_ample in nba. a few weeks ago, he came to visit china. so many of his fans followed his track in beijing in order to have a look at this great sports star.

注释:

1) a legend sports man传奇体育人物

2) a flying man飞人

3) in the basketball field在篮球界

4) a professional basketball player职业篮球运动员

5) in order to have a look at this great sports star为t一睹这位伟大的体育明星的风采

精选读者点评

jordan这名字写全啦!但“u. s. a.”中间的点别乱加,还有“e_ample”拼错了,是example哦~

时间的分配

800字
主题:惜时、成长、责任、人生选择、自我管理

初中英语作文大全:时间的分配

allocation of time

时间的分配

maybe you always ask how can i get more and more time? now, i can tell you a story.

可能你们总是会问:“我如何能得到更多的时间?”现在,让我来给你讲个故事吧。

once upon a time, there were many people in a village which named gold time. and there was an old man in the village. villagers called him ime man. because he could move time to a lot of places. sometimes he moved it to the top of the desk. sometimes he moved it to the playground. there were many people on the playground. some did e_ercises. some played football. and he moved it to peoples home. they were having a birthday party. and the other people were cooking. in spite of this, many people still said, i haven got enough time! time man, give me enough time! time man was very angry. he couldn bear it. then, he killed himself. it was 12:00 p.m. so now we have 24 hours a day.

从前,这儿有一个叫“黄金时间”的村落。这里还有一个老人住在村子里,村民称他为“时间先生”。因为他可以把时间移到很多地方。有时,他把时间移给桌面。有时,他把时间移给运动场。运动场上有很多人,有些人做着运动,有些人踢足球。他还把时间移到一些人的家里,他们正开着一个生日派对,其他人则是煮着东西。尽管如此,一些人仍旧说:“我没有足够的时间!时间先生,给我足够的时间吧!”时间先生非常生气。他不能够忍受了。然后,在晚上12点,他自杀了。所以现在,我们每天都拥有24小时。

if you think time is not enough, you must hurry up to do every thing quickly. and don waste time. if you can do every thing well, i think you must be best.do you know? mr. lu said, we only can get 24 hours one day. it brings somebody gold. and it also gives somebody lazy and unhappy. i only want tell you,don waste time.

如果你认为时间不够,那你必须赶快做所有事。并且不能浪费时间。如果你能把所有事做好,我认为你是完美的人。鲁先生曾说过,“我们每个人每天只拥有24个小时。时间可以给人们带来黄金。同时它也可以给人们带来懒惰和不幸。我只能告诉你‘不要浪费时间’。”

精选读者点评

时间先生自杀那段写得真吓人!12点自尽变24小时,脑洞像闪电劈开,但“move time to desk”这说法,desk是时间的容器吗?下次试试“place time on the desk”吧!

my view on cheating in exam

450字
主题:诚信教育、学习态度、价值观、学业诚信、成长责任

初中英语作文大全:my view on cheating in e_am

as students, we all want to get high scores in e_ams, which requires us trying our best to work. however, some students do not work hard in usual but they still e_pect good performance. therefore, some of them choose to cheat in e_ams. i don’t think it’s a good way. firstly, it’s not right to cheat, which is a personal quality problem. secondly, scores do not mean everything. although you get higher scores by cheating, you can’t get knowledge. finally, cheating will have a bad impact on you. teachers and students may look at in different views. therefore, i don’t agree to cheat in e_ams. we all should be honest.

作为学生,我们都想在考试中得到高分,这就要求我们要尽的努力去学习。但是,有的学生平时不努力学习,又想要高分,于是他们就在考试中作弊。我不认为这是一种好行为。首先,作弊是不对的,这关乎个人品质问题。其次,分数并不意味着一切。虽然通过作弊能获得更高的分数,但并没有获得知识。最后,作弊会对个人产生不好的影响,老师和同学可能会异样看待你。因此,我不赞成在考试中作弊,我们都应该诚实。

精选读者点评

这个立意很稳!“分数≠知识”这句点得妥帖,比光喊“要诚实”有分量。美中不足第二段英文里“e_pect”少了个p,“e_am”也该是exam,小错误别让老师扣冤枉分啊!

我的班级

400字
主题:集体生活、语言实践、同伴关系、课堂文化、成长体验

my class

here are forty-two students in my class, with 25boys and 17girls. it’s an active class, and the reason may be that the boys are more than girls. the classroom atmosphere of our class is very good, because we interact with teachers quite often. our classmates are all united and helpful to each other. we often organize some activities to enhance the relationship between classmates and our regular activity is the english day in every two weeks that we can only speak english during recess. maybe it sounds a little difficult but it really funny and classmates enjoy it very much.

我们班有42位学生,其中男生25位,女生17位。我们班很活跃,可能是男生比女生多的缘故。我们班的课堂氛围很好,因为我们经常与老师互动。我们班上的同学都很团结而且互相帮助。我们经常组织一些活动增强和同学之间的关系,我们的惯例活动是每两周一次的英语日,休息的时候我们只能说英语。也许听起来有点困难,但是真的很有趣,同学们都很喜欢。

精选读者点评

男生多,课堂就热闹?这个想法挺有意思!话说回来“可能”“也许”用得有点密,试试把其中一个换成肯定句,比如“男生多,大家发言更抢着来”,读着更有劲儿~

感动 be moved

400字
主题:友情、善良、关怀、成长、信任、温暖

we often have moving e_periences in our daily life. they help us walk along the right road. i still remember that day. i was taking the final e_am when i found i didn’t have my eraser with me. i was so worried that i almost cried. just then, mike, a boy ne_t to me, understood what was happening. he quickly cut his eraser in half and handed me one part. with tears in my eyes, i finished the e_am. i’m deeply moved by what mike did. he is a real friend. he cares others a lot. i want to learn from him to be the person in need.

我们经常在我们的日常生活中有令人感动的经历。他们帮助我们沿着正确的道路走。我还记得那天。当我发现我没有带我的橡皮时,我正在参加期末考试。我是如此担心,我几乎哭了。这时,迈克,我旁边的男孩,明白发生了什么事情。他很快把他的橡皮切成两半,递给我一个零件。在我的眼中,我完成了考试。我被深深地感动了迈克做什么。他是一个真正的朋友。他很关心别人。我想从他身上学习到有需要的人。

精选读者点评

橡皮切半这个细节亮点突出!考场上的光,比啥都暖。就是“walk along the right road”“in need”这些表达,得换成咱平时说话的味儿,比如“走正道”“帮一把”,试试?