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五年级英语作文
my school is big and beautiful. there are two classroom buildings in my school. we have classes in the classroom. the classrooms are in the classroom building. there is a playground in my school. we have sports and play on the playground. there is a dining hall in my school. we eat lunch in the dining hall. there are a lot of trees and flowers in my school. i like my school very much.
我的学校又大又漂亮。学校有2栋教学楼，我们在教室上课，教室在教学楼。学校有一个操场，我们在操场上运动玩耍。学校还有一个食堂，我们在食堂吃午餐。有很多花花草草在我的学校，我非常喜欢我的学校。
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：写景作文、说明文
【形容词】
big、beautiful、lot、many、very
【好词好句】
1. my school is big and beautiful.
2. there is a playground in my school. we have sports and play on the playground.
3. there are a lot of trees and flowers in my school.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "a lot of trees and flowers"应为"a lot of trees and flowers"
• "we have classes in the classroom. the classrooms are in the classroom building."存在重复赘述，但属表达习惯，非语法错误，不列为错误
【写作亮点】
✓ 结构清晰，按空间顺序介绍校园设施
✓ 中英双语对照，体现语言学习特色
✓ 句式简洁，符合小学英语初学者表达水平
