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although our country resources, abundant natural resources. but, you know? all these are not enough, more important is to pay attention to environmental protection!
i think the government should advocate environmental protection, more involved in environmental protection, contribute to environmental protection, organize environmental protection is the most critical. you said, is it?
first of all, should tell the public, to pay attention to every green thing, actively do environmental protection work, don throw rubbish, see garbage to pick up in time. second, want to throw the waste battery is the problem to solve, i should take this matter to do better, in some places put some recycle used batteries, for people to take every day. as a result, whether living in remote areas, or live in the bustling place, can easily dispose of used batteries, never going to happen that people don know how to deal with waste battery threw the waste batteries into the dustbin. finally, the government should increase the position of a environmental protection worker, let more people involved in the environmental protection work.
in order to environmental protection, take action!
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作文类型:倡议书、应用文
【文字校对】
• "although our country resources, abundant natural resources."应为"our country has abundant natural resources."
• "but, you know?"应为"but do you know?"
• "don throw rubbish"应为"don't throw rubbish"
• "don know how to deal with waste battery threw the waste batteries into the dustbin"应为"don't know how to deal with waste batteries and throw them into the dustbin"
• "a environmental protection worker"应为"an environmental protection worker"
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✓ 分条陈述建议,结构清晰,逻辑递进
✓ 聚焦生活细节如废电池回收,体现观察力与现实关怀
✓ 结尾口号简洁有力,富有行动号召性