植树 planting trees

250字
主题:亲情、劳动、自然、希望、陪伴

today is saturday, my father doesn’t have to work, so i can enjoy the weekend with him, i feel so happy. my father and i decide to plant a small tree in our garden, so the garden will look more green. my father digs the hole, then i put the tree in the hole, we put the earth together. i think it is a meaning thing, i will see the tree grows up.

今天是星期六,我的爸爸不用去工作,所以我可以和他享受这个周末,我觉得很开心。爸爸和我决定在我们的花园里面种植一颗小树,这样花园就看起来更绿。爸爸挖好了洞,然后我把树放进了洞里,我们一起把泥土放进去。我觉得这是一件有意义的事情,我会看到小树成长。

精选读者点评

英文段里“i feel so happy”太直白啦!试试换成“心像被阳光晒暖的棉花糖”,中文段“一颗小树”建议改“一棵小树苗”,量词和名词得搭着走呀~

我的朋友英语作文带翻译-my new good friend

250字
主题:友谊、成长、语言、运动、青春、初识

mary is my new friend.i got to know her only yesterday. but we like to each other at first sight. she is a tall , outspoken ,13-year-old girl. she is good at english ,.we helped each other yesterday with our homework.we both like playing pingpang,and we had a match yesterday afternoon. she is easy going .and i m so glad to be her friend.

玛丽是我的新朋友,我只有在昨天才认识她。但我们喜欢彼此一见钟情。她是一个身材高大,心直口快,13岁的女孩。她英语很好,我们互相帮助。我们都喜欢打乒乓球,昨天下午我们有一场比赛。她很容易,我很高兴做她的朋友。

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mary和玛丽,两个名字来回跳,像在玩翻译接龙?标点也爱躲猫猫,“english ,.”这逗号咋卡在句号前啦?还有“pingpang”少了个“o”,下次写完读一遍,耳朵会帮你揪出小错。

我的家庭生活my family life

250字
主题:亲情、成长、陪伴、温暖、童年、生活

我的家庭生活 my family life

i have a happy family, there are three people in my family, my father, my mother and i. i go to school from monday to friday, on the weekends, i will go out with my parents, they always take me to different restaurants, we will taste different food. at night, my mother will tell me a story, then i can have a good dream, i love my family life.

我有一个幸福的家庭,在我家,有三个人,我的爸爸,我的妈妈和我。星期一到星期五,我上学,周末,我会和我的爸爸妈妈出去,他们总是带我去不同的餐馆,品尝不同的食物。晚上,我的妈妈会给我讲故事,然后我就会做一个好梦,我喜欢我的家庭生活。

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开头中英文混用有点突兀,建议统一用中文写题目;“不同餐馆”“不同食物”重复了,“尝遍街巷烟火气”是不是更带味。

我们应不应该购买苹果手机

850字
主题:消费观、价值观、社会心理、自我认知、生活本质

我们应不应该购买苹果手机 should we buy iphone

iphone is made in usa, but e_tremely popular in china. it is public cognition that iphone is a high level smart product. it is good but e_pensive. some people even joke that they will sell one of their kidney to buy an iphone. though it is a joke, it respects a social phenomenon that people’s desire to buy a e_pensive cellphone. should we buy it? i think it depends on people’s own financial ability.

iphone是美国产的手机,却在中国异常受欢迎。在公众的认知中iphone是一个高端的智能产品。它很好却也很贵。有些人甚至开玩笑说他们要卖掉一个肾来买一个iphone手机。尽管这是一个玩笑,却也反映出了一种社会现象,那就是人们对买一个昂贵手机的欲望。 我们应不应该购买苹果手机?我认为这要看个人的经济实力。

one the one hand, we all know that iphone is a kind of status symbol in people’s mind, so some people just want to show off to buy an iphone that is not necessary, especially for those have economy annoyance. as you are not rich enough, you will gain burden to your life if you buy a cellphone about 6,000 rmb. and what you use it to do is the same as other cheaper phone. the purpose you buy it just for flaunt. if you are this kind of people, please do not buy an iphone, because life is much important than face.

一方面,我们都知道iphone手机在大家的意识里是一种身份的象征,所以很多人为了炫耀而去购买,这是很没有必要的,尤其是对于那些有经济烦恼的人。如果你不是很有钱,买了一个约6千块的手机很容易会给自己增加负担。而且你用它的目的跟其他便宜手机的目的是一样的。只是为了炫耀才买。如果你是属于这一类人,不要买了,因为生活比面子更重要。

one the other hand, if you are a rich people, just buy one, as it is good to use in some point. its hard software and system are better than some other phone. after all, you have money, then you can do whatever you want with money.

另一方面,如果你是一个有钱的人,那就买吧,因为从某种程度来说,苹果手机确实比较好用。它的硬件跟系统都比其他一些手机要好些。毕竟,你有钱,你想买什么就买什么。

in conclusion, before we decide to buy an iphone or not, what we need to think is our own situation.

总的来说,在我们决定是否购买iphone前,我们需要想想我们的处境再做决定。

精选读者点评

这个“卖肾买苹果”的例子直击重点!后头还马上点出玩笑背后的现实,有观察也有思考。可中英文混着写,像“e_tremely”“e_pensive”这种下划线漏了,是故意的?还是打字手滑?

节约水电

300字
主题:环保意识、资源保护、可持续发展、生活常识

。更多内容请看本站写作翻译频we live in the earth which is surrounded by the water, water is very important to people’s lives, no one can live without water. electricity is also important, we can see in the night and so many things we use must work with electricity. water and electricity are precious resources, we should save them and use them in recycle. saving these precious resources makes a contribution to people.

我们生活在一个被水包围的地球,水对于人们的生命是很重要的,没有人可以离开水。电也很重要,我们可以在晚上看见东西,还有很多我们使用的东西必须靠电来维持。水和电是宝贵的资源,我们应该节约水电,循环使用。节约这些宝贵的资源可以为人类造福。道。

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标点乱套了!句号跑前面去了,还夹着英文,“we live……”这算啥?中英混搭得有理由啊,不是随便塞。下回写完自己默读一遍,听出别扭就改。

介绍自己的英语作文

300字
主题:成长、学习、生活、个性、语言、童年

introduce myself

my name is yang _in_in. my english name is mary. i’学生的) colour is green. my favourite number is si_. my favourite day is sunday. my favourite pet is a dog.

i like english,chisene and maths. i like to eat chichen, eggs, hot dogs, and sandwiches.i don’t like meat and chocolates. i like coke and milk. i don’t like tea. i like swimming, reading, taking a trip and watching tv..

自我介绍

我的名字叫杨欣欣,我的英文名字是玛丽。我是一名小学生。最喜欢的颜色是绿色,最喜欢的数字是六,最喜欢的日子是星期六,最喜欢的宠物是小狗。

我喜欢学习英语、语文和数学。我喜欢吃鸡肉、鸡蛋、热狗和三明治,但是不喜欢吃肉和巧克力。我喜欢喝可乐和牛奶,但是不喜欢喝茶。我喜欢游泳、看书、旅行和看电视。

精选读者点评

哎哟,中英文混搭得挺自然嘛!“chisene”这个拼写,下次~绿色配小狗,画面感一下子跳出来啦!

如何选专业?how to choose the major?

800字
主题:成长抉择、代际沟通、自我认同、人生规划、教育观念

如何选专业?how to choose the major?

when students finish their high school, most of them will to go study in college, the first thing they do is to choose the major. choosing the major is a big problem for every college student, not only for chinese students, but also for the students around the world. students will face the factors such as their interest is more important or the future of the major worth being first concerned.

当学生读完高中,大部分人会去大学学习,他们要做的第一件事就是选择专业。选择专业是对每个大学生来讲都是件大事,并不仅仅对于中国的学生,对于全世界的学生来说都一样。学生仍然面临着他们的兴趣更重要还是专业的将来更重要的问题。

on the one hand, most parents care about the future of the major. when students decide the major, parents will interfere with their own opinion, they want their children can have a bring future, so they care much about the needed talent of the society. thus the children can find a promising job and earn more money.

一方面,大部分父母关注专业的未来。当学生选择专业时,父母会干涉,他们想要孩子有一个光明的未来,所以他们很关注社会需要什么样的人才。这样孩子可以找到一份有前途的工作,赚更多的钱。

on the other hand, students want to choose the major that they are interested. this is often contradicting with their parents’ opinion. some students want to learn art, but most parents won’t be allowed it because it is hard for students to find a job. everyone admits that interest is the first factor, with it, students will feel happy.

另一方面,学生想要选择他们感兴趣的专业。这经常和父母的意见相左。一些学生想要学艺术,但是大部分父母不会同意,因为这很难让学生找到工作。每个人都觉得兴趣是第一个要素,有了兴趣,学生才会感到快乐。

when choosing the major, students should considerate their parents’ opinion, most parents are open-minded, they will respect the kids’ willingness.

当选择专业的时候,学生应该考虑他们父母的意见,大部分父母是开明的,他们会尊重孩子的意愿。

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中英混排挺大胆!但“will to go study”“considerate their parents’ opinion”这些表达要再推敲,动词搭配和词性别踩雷,不然意思就跑偏啦。标点也注意,英文句号后空一格哦。

my teacher

250字
主题:师爱、成长、榜样、师生情、教育温度

my favourite teacher is my english teacher ms wu .her english name is lannie .she is a beautiful lady. she is very humorous. but sometimes she is very strict with us. but all classmates love and respect her very much. after class she often helps us learn patiently. i like my english teacher , because i think she is the best teacher in the world.

我最喜欢的老师是我的英语老师吴老师,她是个漂亮的女士,她很幽默,但是有时候她对我们非常严格,但是我们全班都很喜欢和尊敬她,课后,她也经常耐心的帮助我们学习,我喜欢我的英语老师,因为我觉得他是世界上的老师.

精选读者点评

ms wu这名字写得俏皮,lannie也拼对了!后半段中英文混着来,像小辫子打了个结,试着把中文段落里“他”改成“她”,再把“世界上的老师”补全成“最好的老师”,读起来就顺啦~

my best friend

250字
主题:友情、个性、诚信、智慧、成长

my best friend

my best friend is ××.hes a very funny person.for e_ample,he keeps his watch one hour ahead of the real time.he says its because he doesn want to be late.

××is also very honest and intelligent.he doesn need to cheat to get ahead.in school he always gets the highest scores,but he never seems to study.he says he studies only when nobody is looking.

everybody likes my friend ×× very much.

我的朋友

我的朋友是 ××.他是一个很风趣的人.比如,他把表拨快1小时,他说那是因为他不想迟到.

× ×很诚实并且聪明.他不用作弊就可以名列前茅.在学校他总是得分,但是他好像从来不学习.他说他只有在四周无人时才学习.

每个人都非常喜欢我的朋友××.

精选读者点评

表拨快一小时这个细节真通透!比写“他很守时”强十倍,画面一下就跳出来,下次写人,多抓这种小动作、小习惯。

母亲节的英语作文

400字
主题:感恩、母性、文化传承、节日习俗、亲情表达

关于母亲节的英语作文

mothers day is a celebration honoring mothers and celebrating motherhood, maternal bonds and the influence of mothers in society.

its a day to show thanks to mothers. this festival first appeared in ancient greece and modern mothers day originated in the united states which usually falls on the second sunday of may each year.

mothers usually receive gifts on this day and carnation is regarded as the flower for mother.

in china, the flower for mother is day lily, also known as nepenthe.

in addition, cleaning up the room, doing housework and a big dinner are considered to be the best mothers day gifts.

母亲节是纪念母亲,赞扬母爱和母性情结,以及社会上母亲的影响的节日。

这是向母亲表达感谢的一天。这个节日最初出现于古希腊,现代母亲节源于美国,通常是在每年五月的第二个星期天。

母亲们通常会在这一天收到礼物,康乃馨被看做是母亲之花。

在中国,给母亲的花通常是萱草花,也叫做忘忧草。

另外,打扫屋子,做家务,做一顿丰盛的晚餐都被当做是给母亲的礼物。

精选读者点评

中英文对照写得挺工整,但“nepenthe”拼错了,是“xuān cǎo”不是“nepenthe”啊!后半段中文比英文顺多了,下次试试先打中文草稿呀!

我喜欢的音乐英语作文带翻译

250字
主题:情感疗愈、信念力量、青春奋斗、自我激励

我喜欢的音乐英语作文带翻译

i like to listen to all kinds of music, music makes me happy, when i feel sad, i will listen to music and it relieves me. my favorite song is never say never, the words are so inspiring. the song tells people never to give up, no matter what happens. the song inspires me to move on and get over all kinds of difficulties.

我喜欢听各种各样的音乐,音乐给我带来了快乐,当我觉得不开心的时候,我会听音乐,那让我放松。我最喜欢的歌曲是“永不言弃”,歌词很励志。这首歌告诉人们永远都不要放弃,无论发生什么事情。歌激励着我前进,克服各种各样的困难。

精选读者点评

这首英文小短文写得挺顺溜!“never say never”选得好,中英文都把“音乐疗愈 坚持信念”说清楚了,动词用得也准,relieves, inspires, move on, get over,不堆词儿,有劲儿!下次试试加个具体例子?比如哪次考试失利后听它重振旗鼓。

经典英语作文范文翻译-我最喜欢的礼物

400字
主题:童年心愿、家庭理解、生命陪伴、成长仪式

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i have received many presents when i have my eleven birthday party. my parents give me a teddy bear, my uncle gives me a book. my best friend gives me a goldfish. among all the gifts, i love the goldfish the most. i always want to have a pet in the family, but my parents don’t allow me to keep one. now i have my own goldfish. i will keep it and take good care of it. this goldfish is very beautiful. its colour is pink. i love watching it swimming in the water. sometimes, i will feed it. i wish it can grow up with me. this is the best birthday present ever!

在我11岁的生日聚会上,我收到了很多礼物。我的父母送给我一个泰迪熊,我的叔叔送我一本书。我的朋友送了我一条金鱼。在这些礼物中,我最喜欢的是金鱼。我一直想在家里面养只宠物,但是我父母不允许。现在,我有了自己的宠物鱼。我会好好照顾它的。这条金鱼非常美丽,它是粉色的。我很喜欢看它在水里面游来游去。有时候,我会喂它。我希望它能和我一起长大。这是我收到的生日礼物!

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金鱼是粉色的?真少见!然而你写它游动的样子,我眼前一下子浮现出水波晃动、鳞光一闪的画面,这个“活”劲儿,比写泰迪熊可爱多了。

英语作文范文

250字
主题:亲子理解、自我关怀、学业压力、情绪健康、成长觉醒

如何快乐?how to be happy?

when i do well in the e_am, i will show my paper to my parents, they are so happy to see me do well in the e_am. i want to be happy all the time. but i have put so much pressure on myself. one day, my parents tell me that they don’t care how i do well in the e_am, they just want me to be happy. i know i should rela_ myself and be happy.

当我考试考得好的时候,我会给父母展示我的试卷,他们很开心看到我考得这么好。我想要一快乐。但是我给予了自己太多的压力。一天,我的父母告诉我他们不在意我考试考得有多好,他们只想要我快乐。我知道自应该自我放松,保持快乐。

精选读者点评

这个“rela_”漏了个x,改成relax啦!后半段中英文混着写,读起来有点跳,试着全用中文写一遍?你心里想的快乐,其实挺动人的。

practice makes perfect

650字
主题:实践出真知、勤能补拙、学以致用、持之以恒

熟能生巧practice makes perfect

practice makes perfect. it means that after plenty of practice, we will be perfect in what we do. practice is the only way to achieve perfect.

熟能生巧。这意味着,经过大量的练习,我们将完善我们所做的。实践是实现完美的途径。

for e_ample, when we learn grammar, words, e_pressions and so on, the most important thing may be how to put what we’ve learned into practice. if we only learn the grammatical rules by heart and don’t do enough e_ercises, it is certain that we can’t understand them perfectly. but if we practice a lot, maybe we will understand them more deeply and we can find some good methods of applying them. memorize the english words whenever time permits, and we can easily memorize them and even can find a way to memorize them more quickly.

例如,当我们学习语法,单词,公式等,最重要的是如何把我们所学到的知识付诸实践。如果我们只学习语法规则和没有做足够的练习,可以肯定的是,我们无法完全了解它们。但如果我们做了很多的练习,也许我们就能深刻理解它们,而且我们可以找到一些好的方法去运用它们。随时记英语单词,我们就可以很容易地记住它们,甚至可以找到一个更快的记忆单词的方法。

there is another good e_ample for it. a famous singer can sing very well. of course, his talent is very important but he also practices singing frequently, probably every day.

另外有一个很好的例子。一个的歌手歌唱得很好。当然,他的天赋很重要,但是他也可能每天经常练习唱歌。

if we want to improve our studies and work, we should remember that practice makes perfect.

如果我们想提高我们的学习和工作,我们应该记住熟能生巧。

精选读者点评

这句“熟能生巧”写得亮点突出!中英对照工整,例子也着实,记单词、练唱歌,都是孩子自己摸出来的体会。就是“e_ample”“e_pressions”里缺了字母,像小虫子钻进句子缝里,顺手补上就更干净啦。

相亲节目可靠吗?is dating show reliable?

750字
主题:媒介反思、理性择偶、传统与现代、娱乐化边界、情感本质

相亲节目可靠吗?is dating show reliable?

in chinese traditional blind date, the boy and the girl meet each other which is arranged by their parents, then the two fall in love, get married and live happily ever after. today, the young people like to choose their partners by themselves, there are many dating shows to provide chances for the young people to make friends. but i don’t think the shows are reliable.

在中国传统的相亲里,男孩和女孩通过家长的安排认识彼此,然后相爱,结婚,从此以后幸福地生活在一起。今天,年轻人喜欢自己选择伴侣,很多相亲节目就给年轻人提供了交朋友的机会。但是我认为这些节目是不可靠的。

first, as a show, the first concerned factor is the profit. to make a show, the producer puts the audience in the first place, the more audiences, the more advertisements, the more profit. thus the director must do something to make the show interesting, then the purpose of dating the young people is not pure, it is more likely to amuse the audiences.

第一,作为一个节目,第一考虑要素是利润。为了制作节目,制作方把观众放在了第一位,越多的观众,就越多的广告,带来越多的利润。因此导演必须做一些事情来让节目更加的有趣,让年轻人约会的目的变得不纯净了,更多的是为了娱乐大众。

second, the relationship that was built on the stage won’t last long. when the young people meet in the stage, they get to know each other in a short time, they can’t get fully information about each other. even they build their relationship on the stage, what will happen in the stage? they will find more defects, realizing they are not matched.

第二,建立在台上的感情并不能持久。当年轻人在舞台上相见,他们只能在短时间内彼此了解,并不能全面地了解。即使他们在舞台上建立了感情,台下会发生什么呢?他们会发现缺点,认识到不合适。

dating show is very popular in china, but we must not take it serious, treating them the way to find amusement in casual life.

相亲节目在中国很流行,但是我们不必当真,把这当成闲时的消遣方式。

精选读者点评

这个“台上的感情不持久”表达稳妥!后面举的例子要是再加个生活里的小例子,比如“像超市试吃,尝一口觉得甜,买回家才发现齁嗓子”,就更活了。

开设博物馆是否浪费?

900字
主题:文化传承、历史认知、资源价值、社会发展、节俭精神

开设博物馆是否浪费? is it a waste to have museum?

every country has a lot of museums filling of great cultural heritage. some people are beneficial from it, but it costs lots of money at the same time. and now we are living in a world that calls for thrift. so some people regard opening museum as a waste of money. they don’t want to give hands for supporting museum. however, there are another part of people stand on the side of museum, including me. my reasons are as follow.

每个国家都有很多充满着文化遗产的博物馆。有一部分人从中获益匪浅,但是博物馆同时也花费很多钱。而我们现在所居住的世界提倡的是节约。所以有些人认为开设博物馆就是浪费金钱。他们并不支持开设博物馆。然而,还有另外一部分人是站在博物馆这一边的,包括我在内。理由如下。

first of all, museum is a good way to help people know more about the history. every museum will try its best to collect as much historical things as possible, which are full of cultural value. when people are visiting museums, they will have the chance to see the historical resources. maybe those resources are far away from their life, but they can have a general knowledge about them, instead of knowing nothing. can you find another good way to replace museum to reach the goal? the answer is no.

首先,博物馆是帮助人们认识历史的好途径。每个博物馆都会尽他们的努力来收集历史事物。这些东西都是充满文化价值的。在人们参观博物馆时,他们可以有看到历史资源的机会。也许这些资源离他们的生活很远,但是他们可以对它们有个整体了解,而不是一无所知。你还能找到可以代替博物馆而达到这个目标的方法吗?答案是不能。

in addition, museum is helpful for new progress. we all know that our world is a union not isolation. if we want any progress, we had better start on the base of the past generation wisdom. we can get a lot of benefit from the resources in museum. without them, we couldn’t walk so far or so long.

再者,博物馆有助于新进步。我们都知道我们生活在一个集体中,而不是孤立存在的。如果我们想要有任何的进步,我们是以前人的智慧为基础。我们可以从博物馆的资源中获益匪浅。没有它们,我们无法走得那么远,那么久。

museum is a valuable resource for our human beings. it is a gift for us. it is worth spending money on it. how could it be a waste?

对于我们来说博物馆是很有价值的资源,是礼物。它值得我们为它花钱。这怎么会是浪费呢?

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混用得挺自然,像平时聊天说话那样,不刻意。但“filling of great cultural heritage”这句语法有点小问题,改成“filled with”更顺;还有“stand on the side of museum”建议换成“support museums”,母语者真这么讲。你想法很亮,别被小磕绊挡住了。

学习中文的困难

400字
主题:成长困惑、身份认同、语言障碍、家庭选择、跨文化体验

学习中文的困难 the difficulty of learning chinese

i was born in america and stayed there for four years. but after i celebrate my four years old birthday, my parents decide to go back to china. going back to china, i meet many difficulties. the biggest difficulty for me is to learn chinese. oh, god, it is so hard. there are so many chinese and every word has many meanings. what’s worse, the same pinyin may have various meanings and intonation also makes great difference. i don’t know how to open my mouth. although there are many people help me, i still feel it difficult to learn well.

我出世在美国并且呆了四年。但在庆祝完我四岁生日后,我父母决定回到中国。回到中国,我遇到了很多困难。对我来说的困难就是学习中文。哦,上帝,太难了。汉字实在太多了,而且每个字又有很多意思。更严重的是,同一个拼音还可以有不同的意思而且音调不一样,差别也很大。我都不知道如何开口了。虽然有很多人帮我,但我还是觉得很难学好。

精选读者点评

“oh, god, it is so hard”这句英文夹得真自然!像小孩急了脱口而出,比全写中文反而更显真实感。后面“我都不知道如何开口了”也十分场景直观生动,你是不是真愣在那儿张着嘴发不出声?下次试试录一段自己读拼音,听听哪个调总跑偏哦!

my family我的家庭-英语作文带翻译

450字
主题:亲情、成长、独立、温暖、陪伴、责任

my family lives in nanjing. there are four people in my family. they are my father, my mother, my sister and i.

my father is tall and thin. he is a handsome man. he has big eyes. his hair is straight. he likes to watch tv and movies and read books.

my mother works in an office. she cooks very well. she likes to read books, too. she is short and thin.

my sister is a student. she is an independent girl. she is very graceful.

i am a student, too. but i study in a junior high school. i go to school every weekend. i like to play dodge ball and listen to music very much. much. i like my family because each family member helps me a lot.

我的家人住在南京,我家有四口人。他们是我的爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和我。

我的爸爸又高又瘦,是个英俊的男子。他有一双大眼睛,他的头发是直的,他喜欢看电视,电影和阅读书籍。

我的母亲在办公室工作的。她做饭很好。她喜欢读的书,太。她又矮又瘦。

我的妹妹是学生。她是一个独立的女孩,她很优雅。

我也是一名学生,但我在初中学习,我每个周末都要去上学。我非常喜欢玩躲避球和听音乐。每个家庭成员都对我有很大的帮助,我喜欢我的家人。

精选读者点评

“i go to school every weekend”,初中生周末还上课?是补习班还是笔误?顺手改了下标点,后文“much. much.”也圈出来了哦~

我的美好家庭英语作文

650字
主题:亲情、诚信、成长、归属、温暖、选择

我的美好家庭英语作文

family, is a home to return to of our heart, is our umbrella body, is our...

our family, is my island, every day i wander in the islands. my family and i go to maoming shopping, we taste delicacies, we had a fish shop, selling the fish eggs, 58 yuan to leave, we finish eating.

mom dad asked: how much money? dad big surprised: i haven money. dad walked back to the fish eggs quickly spread to money.

that day, i and my brother to sell shoes, we buy shoes in the shop, it was the spring festival, shine at the moment, suddenly saw a red envelope, we walk over and pick up the red envelopes, open and see is 100 yuan. then i thought: if the 100 yuan according to for yourself!

brother said: elder sister, go. where to? go to reception. why? he red envelope in front desk. you stupid! the ground pick up to treasure, don ask him to find less than. elder sister, if this money is you, what do you think?

then we will give a red envelope to and desk there.

my family is really very good, very good!

家庭,是我们心灵的归宿,是我们躯体的保护伞,是我们......

我们的家庭,是我的岛屿,每天我都在岛屿中徘徊。我的家人和我一起去茂名购物,我们品位美食,我们早一档鱼蛋铺,卖了58元的鱼蛋,我们吃完就走人了。

老妈问老爸:“花了多少钱?”老爸大大惊失色:“我还没给钱。”老爸飞快地走回鱼蛋铺给钱。

那天,我和弟弟去卖鞋,我们在商店买鞋,那时正是春节,突然眼前一亮,看见了一个红包,我们走过去,将红包捡起来,打开看看是100元。当时我想:如果将100元据为自已多好啊!

弟弟说:“姐,走”。“去哪?”“去总台。”“干嘛?”“把这红包交总台去。”“你傻啊!地上捡到宝,问天问地找不不到。”“姐,如果这钱是你掉的,你怎么想?”

于是,我们就将红包交给和总台那里。

我的家庭真的很好,很好!

精选读者点评

“鱼蛋铺”写成“鱼店”又改回,还画了个小箭头,真可爱!后半段捡红包的对话像在耳边响,弟弟那句“你傻啊”简直要跳出来,建议把“我们早一档鱼蛋铺”顺一顺,读着卡壳。

我的周末my weekend

400字
主题:童年记忆、自然观察、语言实践、快乐体验

i went to beijing zoo on saturday morning.

星期六早上我去了北京动物园。

i went there with my teachers by bus. it took us half an hour to get there. there were many kinds of animals. first, we went to see pandas. they were my favorite animals. how lovely they were! then we watched the elephant show. the elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. at last, i took some photos of them. i had a great time. i stayed in beijing zoo for 2 hours.

我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先,我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊!之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明,它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后,我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。

when i came back home, i was tired but happy. i will remember these lovely animals. i am looking forward to seeing them again.

当我回到家的时候,我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。

精选读者点评

这个“i went to beijing zoo”开头挺干净,像踩着鼓点进门,但后面中英文混着跑,像两只脚穿了不同码的鞋,走不稳啊!“teachers”用复数?是带了一个班?还是笔误?再翻翻课本p23的冠词和单复数小结。

介绍自己的英语作文带翻译

300字
主题:认识自我、人际交往、成长环境、语言学习

hello everyone.

now let me talk about myself.

my name is _____.i was born in _____.there are _____people in my family, my father is a _____, my mother is a _______.and as everyone know,im a student.everyone has his own interests.as for me,i like reading books,playing basketball,listening to the music and so on.now today we are in the same class,i hope we will get on well with each other.thanks.

大家好。

现在让我来介绍一下我自己

我的名字叫______。我出生在_______。我家有_______口人,我的爸爸是一个________,我的妈妈是_______。那么就如大家所知,我当然就是一个学生了。每一个人都有他自己的兴趣。至于我,我喜欢看书,打篮球,听音乐等等。今天我们相聚在同一个教室,我希望我们将会相处愉悦。谢谢大家。

精选读者点评

开头英文段落里“as everyone know”少了个s,后面中文部分“相处愉悦”不太自然,咱们平时说“相处愉快”哈~

时间的价值双语

600字
主题:时间意识、人生价值、自律精神、效率观念、责任担当

the value of time

时间的价值

i always think there is not enough time. for e_ample, i have just taken a three-day holiday. but when i look back, i just feel that it‘s only one day. there goes a proverb, “time is money”。 now i want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. however, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.

我总是认为没有足够的时间。例如,我只有三天的假期。但当我回首,我觉得这只是一天。有一个谚语,“时间就是金钱”。现在我想说的是,时间比金钱更珍贵,因为当钱花了,我们可以在多赚一些。然而,当时间流逝了,永远不会回来。

time goes without being noticed. the time for our study and work is usually limited. so i think we must make full use of our time. but it‘s a pity that i am always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.

时间悄无声息的流逝。我们学习和工作的时间都是有限的。所以我认为我们必须充分利用我们的时间。但遗憾的是,直到很晚我知道,之前总是不能意识到它的重要性

so i think, i should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting one‘s life. do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!

所以我认为,我应该养成节约时间的好习惯,因为浪费时间等于浪费生命。不要把今天能完成的事拖到明天!

扩展学习: 关于时间的名言警句

time is money.

benjamin frankin.american president

时间就是金钱。

—— 美国总统富兰克林,

weep no more, no sigh, nor groan. sorrow calls no time thats gone.

john fletcher, british dramalist

精选读者点评

时间像沙漏里的沙,抓不住又留不下,你写出了这种焦灼感!“三天假期像一天”这个体会太真实了,比抄名言有力多了。下回试试把“我总是不觉察”换成一个具体画面?比如闹钟响了还赖床、作业堆到半夜……让读者也咂摸出那股子懊恼味儿。

my friends

650字
主题:友情、互助、成长、责任、集体、进步

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my friends

hello! do you want to know me? my name is ma senyou. i’m twelve. i’m in class 5, grade 7. in this good class, i have many good friends. they are yuan tianzhuo, ji nan, lu fangzhou and wang yang.

yuan tianzhuo is my deskmate. he is fourteen years old. he is tall but thin. his maths is very good, he usually gets marks in maths. but his english is not very good. so i help him with his english and he helps me with maths.

ji nan is from the countryside. he is a good student and he is fourteen, too. he is polite and helpful. he likes sports. i like sports, too. our hobbies are the same.

lu fangzhou is thirteen. he is polite and helpful, too. he is tall and strong. his home is near mine.

i don’t know wang yang’s age, but i know he’s polite and helpful. he is tall. he is poor in his study. we all help him.

all my classmates are very polite and kind. we often help each other. let’s study hard and make good progress every day!

我的朋友们

你好!你想知道我吗?我的名字是马森友。我是十二。我在5班,7年级。在这个好班,我有许多好朋友。他们是元天卓,济南,路方舟和王阳。

元天卓是我的同桌。他十四岁了。他高而瘦。他的数学很好,他通常会标志着数学。但他的英语不是很好。所以我帮助他学英语,他帮我学数学。

济南是来自农村。他是个好学生,他是十四,太。他很有礼貌且乐于助人。他喜欢运动。我喜欢运动,也。我的爱好是相同的。

路号是十三。他很有礼貌且乐于助人,太。他高大强壮。他家靠近我。

我不知道王阳的年龄,但我知道他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他是个高个子。他学习差。我们都帮助他。

我所有的同学都很有礼貌和亲切。我们经常互相帮助。让我们努力学习,让每一天都好的进展!

精选读者点评

这个“马森友”写得真像活人!同桌互帮那段着实自然,连“他通常会标志着数学”这种翻译腔都透着股认真劲儿,改掉几个小语病,就是篇有温度的记叙文啦!

我的童年my childhood-英语作文

400字
主题:成长、感恩、朴素幸福、家庭责任、时光温情

i was born in a small village, so that my childhood mostly spent in countryside. althought the condistions were not so good, my childhood was happy and interesting. at that time, we didn have much money to buy toies. therefore, almost all of my toies were made by myselfe or my mates. sometimes, my father would make some toies for me. besides, because my parents were busy with their farmwork, i usually helped them do some work after school, especially the housework. i wanted to relieve some burden of them. i was happy in my childhood. even now, i usually recall the beautiful memories of my childhood.

我出生在一个小村庄,所以我的童年几乎是在乡村度过的。尽管条件不是那么好,我的童年时快乐有趣的。那时候,我们没有很多钱买玩具,所以几乎所有的玩具都是我和同伴自己做的。有时候,我爸爸会给我做一些。此外,因为我的父母忙于农活,我放学后经常帮他们干活,特别是家务活。我想帮他们减轻一些负担。我的童年很快乐。即便是现在,我也经常回忆起童年的美好记忆。

精选读者点评

玩具自己做?真行!连“toies”都拼错三次,但读着着实有泥土味儿,你爸削木头的样子,我好像看见了。

毅力的英语作文带翻译-毅力/坚忍

300字
主题:意志力量、历史担当、知行合一、理想实现、逆境成长

needless to say, nothing but perseverance can lead a man to the way of success. in other words, a persevering man never does his work without succeeding in it. this is indeed unchangeable truth.

our national father, dr. sun yat-sen, is the most ideal e_ample. he was devoted to the revolution about forty years. he met with many failures, but he was anything but discouraged. as a result, he won. the republic of china was born.

毅力/坚忍

不需说,只有毅力才能引导人迈向成功之途。换句话说,一个具有毅力的人做工作终是(never...without)会把它做成功的。这真是不易之定理也。

我们国父孙中山先生是一个最理想的例了.致力国民革命凡四十年。他遭遇到许多次的失败,但是他决不灰心。结果,他赢了。中华民国诞生了。

精选读者点评

孙中山例子用得真顺!只是“赢了”这词儿太像打游戏,换成“终使理想落地”是不是更庄重?再悄悄说一句:英文段里“never。without”这个结构,中文写成“没有不……的”会更地道哦~