三八妇女节

550字
主题:亲情、节日仪式感、成长观察、幽默日常、代际互动

today is march 8th--international womens day.father wanted to please mother and let her have a good rest. he said he would cook the meals today.in fact, he is always busy with his work and knows nothing about housework. he seldom cooks. if no one cooks for him, he will eat nothing

今天是三月八号——国际妇女节。爸爸想让妈妈开心而且让她好好的休息一下。他说他今天会做饭。事实上,他总是忙于他的工作,并且对家务一无所知。他很少做饭。如果没人给他做饭,他会什么都不吃。

so mother and i were very surprised to hear what he said. but father was serious, and he said he was going to do some shopping first. he didn‘t know what to buy. so mother wrote all the things on a piece of paper

所以,妈妈和我都感到很吃惊当我们听到他说的话时。不过爸爸是认真的。他说他先要去买东西。他不知道要买什么。所以,妈妈把所有的东西写在一张纸上。

cake 2.egg 3.tomato 4.fish

1、蛋糕 2、蛋 3、西红柿 4、鱼

5.milk 6.salt 7.chicken

5、牛奶 6、盐 7、鸡肉

then father went out. half an hour later he came back, with a smile on his face. he brought out all the things: one cake ,two eggs,three tomatoes, four fish, five bottles of milk, si_ bags of salt and seven fat chickens!

之后爸爸就出去了。半个小时后,他就微笑地回来了。他把所有的东西都拿出来:一个蛋糕,两个蛋,三个西红柿,四条鱼,五瓶牛奶,六袋盐和七只肥肥的鸡。

mother was greatly surprised. she couldn say a word.

妈妈吃惊到说不出一句话来。

精选读者点评

这“一、二、三……七”的清单真自然数字和实物硬生生对上号,荒诞感扑面而来,爸爸那股子认真劲儿全藏在这串数里了,比直接写“他搞错了”有意思多了。

借钱伤害友谊吗?

550字
主题:人际边界、情感代价、现实困境、信任考验、友情分寸

借钱伤害友谊吗?does borrowing money hurt friendship?

when you need a lot of money, you first thing you do is to borrow money from your friend, while doing this sometimes may do harm to your friendship. first, your friends may not have too much money at hand, he or she maybe suffer from the lack of cash flow at that moment. everyone has their own worries, when you borrow money, they always have to struggle for a while, their hesitations make you begin to doubt your friendship is true or whether your friends treat your as real one. second, most people can’t return the money in time, because they have all kinds of difficulties, this will make your friends in a awkward situation. they are considering whether to ask you return the money, if they do, this will make you embarrassed; if they don’t, they will lack of money. so it is better not to borrow money from your friend.

当你需要很多钱的时候,你第一件事做的就是向你朋友借钱,然而这样做有时候会伤害你的友谊。第一,你的朋友也许没有很多的钱在手上,他或她可能遭遇着流动资金的不足。每个人都有他们自己的担忧,当你借钱的时候,他们总要挣扎一会,他们的犹豫让你开始怀疑你们之间的友谊是否真实或者你的朋友是否把你真当朋友。第二,大部分人不能及时还钱,因为他们有各种各样的困难,这会让你朋友出于尴尬的境地。他们考虑着是否叫你还钱,他们叫了,会让你尴尬;如果不叫,他们就缺钱。所以不要向你的朋友借钱。

精选读者点评

“借钱伤友谊?”这个题目直击重点!后半段中英文混用有点跳,但你把朋友犹豫时那种“卡壳”的感觉写出来了,就是那种想借又怕借、不借又怕伤感情的劲儿,非常真实。下次试试把“尴尬”换成一个具体画面?比如“他盯着手机屏,消息打了又删”哦!

面子问题about face

550字
主题:自我认知、内在价值、文化心理、人格修养、社会认同

关于面子问题about face

there is an old saying in china“people need face while the trees need skin”,the meaning is that chinese people pay special attention on the dignity. loving face is most people’s behavior, so they like to brag, they enjoy being adored by others. about the face problem, i think we should not take it serious, we are not living for other people, we are living for ourselves. the real self-esteem is from our hearts, not from other people. chinese people like to brag, they brag about their property, hoping that people will respect him. the funny thing is that only the fake successful people will brag, the real one is silent, they keep working hard, the successful career supports their self-esteem. if we want people to respect us, we should show our reality, be nice to them, never brag about ourselves.

在中国有句老话“人要脸树要皮”,意思是中国人很注重尊严问题。爱面子是大多数人的习惯,他们喜欢吹嘘,享受被人崇拜。关于面子问题,我认为我们不应该把它看得很重,我们不是为别人而活,是为自己而活。真正的自尊是出于我们的内心,不是看别人。中国人喜欢吹牛,他们夸大自己的财产,希望人们尊重他们。有趣的是只有不成功的人才会吹牛,真正成功的人是沉默的,他们努力工作,事业的成功支撑着他们的自尊。如果我们想要别人尊重我们,我们应该展示我们真实的一面,对人友好,不要吹牛。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混搭得挺有想法,但“about face”这个标题容易让人误会成“向后转”,下次试试更贴切的双语标题?另外,“fake successful people”这句直译有点伤人,换成“还没站稳脚跟的人”是不是更温和些。

火锅hot pot

500字
主题:饮食文化、地域差异、家庭团聚、生活气息、传统习俗

火锅 hot pot

do you know what dish is the most popular in the cold winter in china? i know it’s hot pot. hot pot is a chinese tasteful folk dish. no matter in the north or in the south, people like hot pot very much and every region has its local features. for e_ample, sihuan hot pot is hot while guangdong hot pot is famous for its fresh. usually, there is a metal hot pot in the middle of table. when the soup in the pot is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot. beef, mutton, fish and vegetables are the main dishes. it is e_tremely popular in winter because it can keep the dishes warm all the time. and the atmosphere is hot, too. friends or relatives sit down together to have a feast. it’s a good way to rela_. 在我国,你知道冬天什么食物欢迎吗?我知道是火锅。火锅是我国的民间美食,不管是北方还是南方,人们都爱吃火锅,而每个地方的火锅也有自身的地域特点。比如,四川火锅是辣的而广东的火锅则以味道鲜美著称。通常来说,吃火锅时,会在桌子的中间放一个金属锅,当锅里的汤料沸腾时,就可以把菜放到火锅里了。牛肉、羊肉、鱼和蔬菜都是火锅的主要食材。火锅在冬天大受欢迎是因为它能一直保持热度,并且吃火锅的气氛很热烈,亲人朋友团座一桌,享受大餐,这是一种很放松的就餐方式。

精选读者点评

火锅写得真香!光是读“汤在锅里咕嘟咕嘟”这句,我口水都快流下来了。美中不足“e_ample”“e_tremely”“rela_”这几个空缺字母,是打字没补全?顺手填上就更棒啦!

猫的夜晚叫声

250字
主题:好奇心、生活观察、意外发现、童年趣事

last night, when i got sleep, i heard some voice, it sounded like the baby was crying, then i looked out of the window, but no one was outside. as the voice kept going on, i could not sleep, i have to figure out what was going on outside, i went to my backyard, then i found a cat was calling, not the baby. how surprised i was.

昨晚,当我睡觉,我听到一些声音,听起来就像是婴儿在哭,然后我往窗外看,但是外面没有人。由于声音不停止下来,我无法入睡,我不得不弄清楚外面发生了什么事,我走到后院,发现一只猫在叫,不是婴儿。我感到很吃惊。

精选读者点评

这个“猫叫像婴儿哭”的发现太灵了!后院一探的节奏感,比好多同学写“我吓了一跳”有意思多了。下次试试把“how surprised i was”换成你当时手心出汗、喉咙发紧的真实反应呢!

京剧的由来

500字
主题:文化传承、戏曲起源、历史演变、民族艺术、中外影响

京剧的由来 the history of peking opera

peking opera, chinas ational essence, national opera, has been 200 years old, enjoying high reputation both at home and abroad. it was form in beijing. according to legend, in the region of qianlong of the qing dynasty, qianlong was interested in local drama. in 1790, to celebrate his 80th birthday, qianlong gathered together various local theaters performing for him, of which four troupes from anhui province stayed in beijing after the celebration. in 1828, a troupe of hubei came to beijing. hereafter, these troupes often performed together, and the two groups gradually formed a new theatrical form, known as peking opera. it was popular in the 1930s and 1940s. now its the representative of the modern chinese han opera as well as a opera of world-class.

京剧,中国的“国粹”,国剧,至今已有200多年的历史,在国内外享有很高的声誉。它形成于北京。据传说,在清朝乾隆年间,乾隆对当地戏剧很感兴趣。1790年,为了庆祝他80岁生日,乾隆召集了各个当地剧院来给他表演,其中四个来自安徽的剧团庆典过后就留在了北京。1828年,一个湖北剧团来到北京。从这以后,这些剧团经常一起表演,后来两个剧团渐渐形成了一种新的戏剧形式,称作京剧。它在20世纪30年代到40年代很受欢迎。如今,它是当代中国汉剧和戏剧的代表。

精选读者点评

“京剧的由来”这个标题下,中英文混排得挺自然,但英文段落里“form”“theater”拼写漏了字母,“peking opera”大小写也不统一,孩子是不是边查词典边写的?下次标好音标再抄哈。

一次公益活动

800字
主题:责任担当、青春奉献、社会实践、劳动育人、集体记忆

高中英语作文:一次公益活动

on april 28th, my classmates and i went to the park near my school where we took part in a volunteer labor.

we got there at nine oclock. after divided into three groups, we began to work.

each group had their own tasks. group one planted trees and watered flowers. group two picked up litter left by tourists and cleaned the benches. my group wiped all the equipment in childrens playground. each of us worked hard.

at about half past eleven, we finished working. though we were tired,we were happy. it was a meaningful day for us because we had done a good deed.

五一前夕——4月28日,我和我的同学去学校附近的公园参加了一次公益劳动。

我们九点钟到公园。分成三个小组后,我们就开始干了起来。每个小组有各自的任务:一组种树、浇花;二组捡拾游人丢弃的果皮纸屑;我们组擦拭了儿童游乐场所有的设施。大家干得都很起劲。

大约十一点半,我们结束了劳动。尽管我们都很累,却很高兴。这一天对于我们大家来说都很有意义,因为我们做了一件好事。

last saturday--april 28th, my classmates and i went to the park near my school. can you guess what we did there?not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.

we reached the park at nine oclock. the whole class was divided into three groups. i was in group three.

each group had different tasks. group one planted trees and watered flowers. group two was told to pick up litter left by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. the group that i was in wiped all the equipment in the childrens playground. all of us worked hard.

before noon we finished working. each of us felt a little bit tired, but we were happy because we had done a good deed.

上周六一4月28日,我和同学去了学校附近的公园。你能猜猜我们去做什么了吗?不是去玩而是去参加公益劳动。

我们九点钟到达公园。全班共分成三个小组,我在笫三组。

各组有各自的任务:一组种树,浇花;二组要求捡拾游客丢弃的果皮纸屑;我所在的小组擦拭了儿童游乐场的所有设施。大家干得都很起劲。

中午之前我们结束了劳动。每个人都感到有点儿累,但却很高兴,因为我们做了一件好事。

精选读者点评

这个“你能猜猜我们去做什么了吗”透着灵气!一下子把人拽进现场,比平铺直叙有意思多了。后头“不是去玩而是……”的转折也干净利落,有少年气。

一个难忘的人a person i will never forget

400字
主题:善意传递、少年担当、平凡伟大、心灵触动、朴素仁心

there are many important people have been in my life, and one of them i will never forget. i met him last summer. he was short and tanned, and was about twelve years old. he was selling the balloons on the sideway when i met him, i was curious and asked him:” why do you do business at such young age?” he said:” i’m not doing business, i have been saving money. i want to donate it to the disaster area, the children there need help.” i was surprise, and ashamed. i bought many balloons from him and asked him to keep the change. i should learn from him to be a kind-hearted person.

在我的生命中出现过很多重要的人,其中有一个非常难忘。我是在去年夏天的时候遇见他的。他个子很矮,皮肤黝黑,比我年纪还小。我遇见他时他正在路边卖气球,我非常好奇就问他:“你为什么年纪那么小就做生意了?”他回答说:“我不是在做生意,我正在存钱。我想把钱捐到灾区,那里的孩子们需要帮助。”我感到很惊讶,也很惭愧。我向他买了许多气球,不用找零。我应该像他学习,做个有爱心的人。

精选读者点评

这个卖气球的男孩,眼睛真亮啊!最后一句“不用找零”比写十句“我要学习”都有力,你悄悄把感动藏进动作里了,好!

传统文化的继承to inherit the tradition

550字
主题:文化传承、现代冲击、代际断层、非遗保护、文明根脉

传统文化的继承to inherit the tradition

today, we live in the modern world, most things we do can use the machine. the technology brings so many convenience to us, it facilitates our life. as we are facing the new products all the time, the traditional things are fading away. take the paper-cut for e_ample. when i was very small, paper-cut was so popular in my grandma’s generation, most women could cut all kinds of interesting shapes. while today when i went back to my hometown, i found that most of them had stopped cutting papers, because they could buy them at the very low price. what’s more, the young people don’t learn such art, for the parents think it is not necessary for their children to learn the old-fashion thing. the tradition should not be abandoned, it is the reflection of our culture. even facing the challenge, we need to inherit the tradition.

今天,我们生活在摩登时代,我们可以使用机器做大部分的事情。科技给我们带来了很多方便,它便利了我们的生活。我们每天都面对着新产品,传统的东西正在慢慢消失。以剪纸为例。在我很小的时候,在我祖母的那一代,剪纸很受欢迎,大多数女性可以剪出各种有趣的形状。现在当我回到家乡时,我发现他们中的大多数已经停止剪纸,因为他们可以以很低的价格购买。更重要的是,年轻人不了解这种艺术, 以为父母认为他们的孩子没有必要去学习这种不时髦的东西。传统不应该被放弃,这是我们文化的反映。甚至面临挑战,我们仍然需要继承传统。

精选读者点评

剪纸那段有生命力! grandma家窗花红纸屑还沾在围裙上呢~后半截“科技便利”写得有点平,试试把手机屏光和剪刀反光叠着写。

一次交通事故

400字
主题:意外、牵挂、生命、责任、瞬间、关怀

yesterday morning, i heard a terrible news that my friend allee was admitted to the hospital because of a car accident. the day before yesterday, allee was going to bookstore to buy a book. he was very careful when he got to the crossroad. he crossed the street then the traffic light turned green. however, when he just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared at his right-hand side and came directly towards him. the driver drove fast and it was too late to dodge. allee was knocked down by a few meters away. he was taken to the hospital immediately and had a surgery. last night, i visited to him. he looked pale although he was out of danger.

昨天早上,我听说了一条可怕的消息,我的朋友allee因为 一起交通事故被送往医院。前天,allee正去书店买书。过马路的时候他很小心。他过街的时候交通灯就变绿了。但是,当他只走到中间的时候,一辆汽车突然出现在他的右手边直直向他行驶。司机开得太快来不及刹车。allee被撞飞了几米。他马上被送往医院动了手术。昨天晚上,我去看望他了。尽管他已经脱离危险,但看上去还是很苍白。

精选读者点评

alley这名字拼错了,全文出现三次,得改!还有“a few meters away”是“几米远”,不是“被撞飞了几米”,动词没选对,中文里“飞”太夸张,跟后文“苍白”“脱离危险”的调子不搭。

国庆节高中英语作文带翻译

750字
主题:家国情怀、民族认同、集体记忆、庆典文化、时代发展

among so many festivals, national day is a vital special one. it is a festival to memorize the state itself, in other words, it is the birthday of china, so it is also the birthday of every chinese. in october 1, 1949, our nation announced to be independent officially. thus, since then we start to make october 1 be our national day.

在众多的节日中,国庆节是非常特殊的一个节日。这是一个纪念国家本身的节日,换句话来说,这是中国的生日,所以这也是每个中国人的生日。 我们国家在1949年10月1日正式宣布独立。因此,从那时起我们就开始把10月1日定为国庆节。

as we mentioned, national day is a festival for the whole people. everyone will have a-seven days off from work or study, e_cept for some special industry, because we can’t make everything stopped. this special holiday makes everyone remember this special day. meanwhile, the purpose of this festival to show the power, confidence, cohesion, and patriotism of the whole chinese citizen achieve.

正如我们提到的,国庆节是一个全民性的节日。所以除了一些特殊行业的人之外,因为我们不可能使所有的事情的停滞的,所有人都可以享受到七天的假期。这个特殊的假期使得每个人都牢记这特殊的一天。同时,这个节日为了展示整个中国国民的力量、自信、凝聚力、以及爱国主义精神等的目标也达到了。

how to celebrate this festival is an important part. for the nation herself, she is not only gives us a-seven days off, but also does many things for us. such as, hold the huge ceremony-military review; encourage people from all areas to hold ceremonies; issue highway free policy; open some scenic spots to the public and so on.

如何庆祝这一节日也是很重要的一部分。对于国家自己,她不仅仅给了我们七天黄金周,还为我们做了好多事。比如,举行大型典礼——阅兵式;鼓励各地人们举行典礼庆祝;发布高速免费政策;向公众开放一些风景区等。

anyway, enjoy this festival beyond to everyone! happy national day!

总之,尽情享受这个属于大家的节日吧!国庆节快乐!

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混排得挺有意思,但要注意中文写作规范哦,国庆节是法定节日,不能写成“national day”直接夹在句子里。标点也乱了,英文句号和中文句号混用,像“off.”“policy;”这些地方得改过来。

夏令营活动 summer camp activity

500字
主题:亲近自然、心灵休憩、生活体验、青春成长、城乡对照

夏令营活动 summer camp activity

every year, my school will have the summer camp activity. i love to join this activity so much, because i can have a lot of fun with my friends. what’s more, i can take a break from the study time and enjoy my moment. last year, we went to the country farm and e_perienced the life there. i was so impressed by the clear river and simple lifestyle. we woke up early and then walked on the country road, it was so quiet and the air was so fresh. in the city, i never woke up so early. i felt really peaceful in my heart. though life here was simple, i liked it. i was so close to the nature and could appreciate its beauty. i am so looking forward to the summer camp activity this year, i want to e_perience the different things.

每年,我的学校都会有夏令营活动。我喜欢参加这个活动,因为我可以和我的朋友们玩得很开心。更重要的是,我可以从学习时间中得到休息,享受自己的时刻。去年,我们去了农场,体验了那里的生活。那里清澈的河流和简单的生活方式让我印象深刻。我们很早就醒来,然后在乡间小路散步,路上很安静,空气很新鲜。在这个城市,我从来没有这么早醒来过。我心里感觉很平静。尽管这里的生活很简单,但是我喜欢它。我是如此接近大自然,也能欣赏它的美。我很期待今年的夏令营活动,我想体验不同的东西。

精选读者点评

“e_perienced”拼错了,是“experienced”哦!还有“country road”不如改成“dirt path”更鲜活~最后一句“different things”太笼统,换成“milking a cow”或“roasting sweet potatoes”试试?

a big fire

550字
主题:生命安全、应急意识、社区互助、日常警醒、防微杜渐

一场大火 a big fire

one night, when i was about to go to sleep, i suddenly heard an e_plosion of bomb. i watched out from the window and saw that heavy smog rise from a factory near my home. then flames leap out. my father realized that it was an e_plosion and then caused a fire. he called 119 and 120 immediately. at the same time, my neighborhoods looked out from balconies and windows. they made phone calls, telling others what happened, or discussed with others. after a while, several fire engines and ambulances arrived. they immediately starting to put out the fire and rescue the trapped people. about half an hour later, the fire was put out, two people injured and no people died. it was lucky. however, it reminds us that we should focus on preventing fire carefully in daily life. a slightest mistake may cause serious consequences.

某天晚上,我正准备去睡觉,突然听见一声爆炸声。我从窗口看去,看见离我家附近的一家工厂上升起了浓浓的烟雾,还蹿出火苗。我爸爸意识到那是爆炸并且引起了火灾,他马上打了119报火警和120急救。与此同时,我的邻居们也从阳台和窗口看去,他们打电话,告诉他人所发生的事,或者相互间议论。过了一会儿,几辆消防车和急救车到达现场。他们马上投入到灭火工作中,解救被困人员。大约半个小时之后,火被扑灭了,幸运的是,只有两个人受伤,没有人死亡。但是,这也提醒我们在日常生活中要时刻注意小心防火,一个细微的错误就有可能带来严重的后果。

精选读者点评

“e_plosion”拼错了哦,还有“starting”应是“started”,小细节漏了,火苗可不等人!

给爸爸的一封信a letter to father

450字
主题:亲情、责任、榜样、坚韧、传承、温暖

dear daddy,

亲爱的爸爸,

thank you very much for your letter written to me. in your letter , you not only e_pressed your e_pectation to me , but also showed all your love to me . i was deeply moved . thanks again ,daddy .you said , i hope you get bravery and perseverance, and can quickly grasp living skills like a lion . now i want to tell you that i will try my best to do everything well and live up to your e_pectations . dear father , you are a great lion in my mind .

谢谢你给我写信。在信中,你不仅仅表达了你对我的期望,还展示了你对我所有的爱。我深深感动了。再次谢谢你,爸爸。你说,“我希望你能够变得勇敢和有耐心,并且能像狮子般快速的掌握生活技能。”现在我想说我会尽我的努力把所有事情都做好来达到你的期望。亲爱的爸爸,你是我心中的狮子。

when i am absent mind , when i am depressed, you , my dear father is always there . your advice and encouragement guide me through many difficulties . thank you , dad, for your help and understanding. i love you , dad ,forever!

当我茫然、绝望时,是你,我亲爱的爸爸永远都在我身边。你的建议和勇气引导我克服许多的困难。谢谢你,爸爸,谢谢你的帮助和理解。我永远爱你,爸爸。

精选读者点评

这个“狮子”的比喻让人精神一振!后文却没让它活起来,爸爸像狮子哪儿像?扑过来护你?蹲着盯你练本事?下次写具体动作,让狮子跑进字里行间。

campus security

600字
主题:责任意识、预防为主、协同治理、平安校园、制度保障

security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously. nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away. a surrounding with stealing and mugging can’t be worse for studying. in such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

安全问题可能听起来已经陈词滥调了,但是当涉及到安全问题的时候,我们不得不严肃对待。几乎每天校园里都有向保安处报告说贵重物品被偷。偷窃和抢劫的环境对学习来说再糟糕不过了。在这种情况下我们应该采取什么样的措施来提高校园安全呢?

on one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness. once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately. on the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible. besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus.

一方面,我们学生呢个应该加强我们的安全意识。一旦我们察觉到什么异常,我们就应该立刻向学校保安处报告。另一方面,应该安装个多诸如监视器之类的设备以尽快查出罪犯。此外,应安排适量的保安人员巡逻校园。

in my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus. therefore, colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。

在我看来,只要努力了,校园安全就会得到改善。因此,高校应该尽努力保证在校的每个人的安全和健康。

精选读者点评

安全意识写得挺实实在在,分外是“一旦察觉异常立刻报告”这句,有生活感!话说回来“偷窃和抢劫的环境”这个搭配有点生硬,换成“总有人偷东西、甚至抢东西”,读着更顺,也更像你平时说话的样子。

身体锻炼physical exercises

450字
主题:身心健康、学业平衡、青春活力、科学作息、终身习惯

身体锻炼physical e_ercises

as you all know, the study work is heavy in high school. there are often more than 10 courses a day including the evening. that will take more than 9 hours in study a day, and without weekends. the students in high school are e_hausted after school and not willing to do the physical e_ercises anymore. in fact, it is not only very bad for health but also bad for study. the teenagers have to do enough e_ercises to keep healthy and growing tall. and doing physical e_ercises can make a people strong and lighten one up, refill the energy to study more efficiently. so, the high school students should do physical e_ercises. they can do some sports, such as playing football or basketball, running, swimming and so on.

众所周知,在高中的学习任务是很繁重的。包括晚上,每天经常有超过10节课。这将会占用9个小时用来学习,还没有周末。放学后高中生都已经筋疲力尽了,不再想去锻炼身体。实际上,这不但有害健康,还不利于学习。青少年必须要做足够的身体锻炼才能保持健康,继续长身体。而身体锻炼能让人强壮和放松,重新注入能量,让学习更加有效率。所以,高中生应该锻炼身体。他们可以做些运动,例如打篮球或者踢足球、跑步、游泳等等。

精选读者点评

身体锻炼这事儿,写得挺着实!“筋疲力尽”“重新注入能量”这些词儿,一看就是自己真累过、也试过动一动才写出来的。客观来说“e_ercises”漏了x,“a people”得改成“a person”,小错别让好想法打了折扣哦。

一件感人的事

550字
主题:见义勇为、平凡英雄、瞬间抉择、人间温情、无声奉献

a touching event

一件感人的事

yesterday afternoon i went to the yue_iu park. it happened that i saw a touching event. at that time, some people were boating on the lake. among them was perhaps a happy family. they were taking photos when suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. she was struggling and her parents cried out, help!help ! it was obvious that they could not swim at all. from nearby a young man immediately rushed to the lake. without taking off his clothes, he jumped into the water and quickly swam towards the girl lwho was already tired out. at last he carried her to the lake side. she was saved!

昨天下午我去越秀公园玩,碰巧看到一件感人的事情。当时,有一些人在湖上划船。在他们中有一家人正玩得开心。他们正在拍照,忽然小女孩从船上落入水中。她在在水中拼命挣扎,她的父母大声呼救;显然他们不会游泳。附近一个年轻人立即向湖边冲去。他没有来得及脱衣服就迅速跳入湖中向那个筋疲力尽的女孩游去,最后他将小女孩拖向湖边,她终于得救了。

how happy the parents were! before they thought of thanking the young man, he had disappeared!

小女孩的父母喜极而泣,当他们想起感谢那位年轻人时,他已消失在人海。

words

touching adj. 动人的,令人同情的

e.g. this movie was very touching.

struggle vi. 奋斗,努力;挣扎

e.g. life is not a tragedy but a struggle.

disappeare vi. 消失;失踪;不复存在

e.g. i really disappear from your world .

精选读者点评

这个“她正在拍照,忽然掉进水里”的镜头感真强!动词“掉”比原文“fell off”更脆生,画面一下就活了。后面“筋疲力尽”和“拖向湖边”稍显书面,试试“手脚都软了”“一把拽上岸”?读着喘气都跟着急,好故事,就差一点土味儿呼吸感。

我的生日礼物

750字
主题:成长、感恩、惜时、期许、亲情、勉励

it was my birthday yesterday. i got a lot of gifts. all of them were covered with coloured paper. among them there were two interesting ones.

my elder sister gave me a round paper bag and i thought it was a football. but when i opened it, it turned out to be a clock. my brother gave me a message, saying that my present has been put in your bedroom. as soon as i went into my bedroom, i found a bo_. i opened it and found a laptop. i was very happy.

these two presents aim to let me study hard and not to waste time.

昨天是我的生日,我收到了很多礼物。它们用彩纸包着,其中有两件有趣的东西。

我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包,开始我认为是个足球,但打开后才发现是一个闹钟。我哥给我留了张条,告诉我:“我的礼物已经放在你的卧室里了。”我走进卧室,发现一个盒子。我打开了它,里面是一台笔记本电脑。我非常高兴。

这两件礼物是为了让我好好学习,抓紧时间。

yesterday was my birthday and i received a lot of presents. these presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me.

my sister sent a bag of present to me. the bag was big and round. i though it was a football. but when i opened it, i saw a clock. the other one was given by my brother. he left me a message, which said my present is lying in your bedroom. when i got to my bedroom, i found a laptop. oh!great! i jumped with joy. i know, they want me to study hard and not to waste time.

i would never forget this birthday.

昨天是我的生日,我收到了许多生日礼物,并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着。其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣,给我留下了很深的印象。

我姐姐送给我一个包,这包又大又圆。我认为是足球,可打开一看是个闹钟。另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的,他给我留了一张纸条,上面写着:“我的礼物放在你的卧室里。”当我进入卧室时,我看到了一台笔记本电脑。噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-。我明白他们想让我努力学习,不要浪费时间。

我将永远不会忘记昨天。

精选读者点评

这个“bo_”写得真逗!像在跟读者玩猜谜,切记别忘了补全呀,是box?还是book?

责任

600字
主题:责任意识、代际反哺、终身学习、自我成长

anyone can avoid taking responsibilities when he is alive. by taking responsibilities, we can be more and more capable. without responsibilities, we can live a qualified life.

只要活着,没有人都能避免承担责任。通过承担责任,我们会越来越多有能力。没有责任,我们无法过标注的生活。

as far as im concerned, responsibilities include three aspects in our life: first, we must work hard. if we e not diligent, we can neither support ourselves nor achieve our goals. second, we must take care of our parents, since they have brought us up. we must pay back the love to them. if we don treat our parents well, maybe well be abandoned by our children when we e old. third, we must keep on learning, because our life is an infinite book. we e always reading at the first page of this book. if we don go on learning, we can keep pace with the times.

我认为在我们的生活中责任包括三方面:第一,我们必须努力工作。如果我们不努力,我们既不能养活自己也无法达到我们的目标。第二,我们必须孝顺父母,因为是他们把我们抚养大的。我们必须用爱来回报他们。如果我们不好好对待我们的父母,也许等我们年老的时候我们会被我们的孩子抛弃。第三,我们必须不断学习,因为我们的生命是一本无穷无尽的书。我们总是阅读书的第一页。如果我们不去学习,我们就不能跟上时代的步伐。

these are my opinions that i will act as i say. i believe my life will be more colorful if i do my best to fulfill my responsibilities.

这些是我的想法,而我也会按我说的去做。我相信如果我尽力履行我的职责,我的生活会更加丰富多彩的。

精选读者点评

责任不是负担,是长大的刻度。你写“生命是本无穷的书,总在第一页”,这句亮眼吸睛!但“被孩子抛弃”那句太重了,换成“怕辜负他们的目光”会不会更暖?

保护环境protect the environment

550字
主题:环境保护、公民责任、从小做起、绿色理念、奥运精神

随着北京奥运”绿色奥运”的口号的提出,越来越多的中国人意识到环境保护的重要性,但也有的人认为只要大企业,大工厂不污染,大家多种树就好,而乱丢垃圾等这样的小事情无所谓。请你围绕环保该不该从身边小事做起这一话题,展开思路 ,谈谈你的感想。

do something to protect the environment

保护环境,从我做起

we want to hold a green olympic games ,so everyone should do something useful to protect the environment ,whether it is big or small.

我们要举办一个绿色奥运,每个人都应该做些无论是大或小的有用的事来保护环境。

we should do something to stop people from doing bad things to the environment .we should put rubbish into dustbins instead of throwing it about. everyone must care for flowers ,grass and tress in public .we shound collect things like paper ,plastic bags our neighborhood as well ,it’s necessary to plant more trees every year .

我们应该做些什么来阻止人们对环境做一些不好的事情。我们应该把垃圾放进垃圾箱而不是直接扔了,每个人都必须爱护公共场所的花,草,树木。我们应该收集社区的一些像纸,塑料袋的东西,每年种植更多的树是必要的。

it is everyone’s duty to make our neighborhood much better with our hands minds .let’s make a contribution to protecting the environment and the plympic games successfully.

用我们的双手和头脑使我们的社区变得更好是我们每一个人的职责。让我们为保护环境做贡献,祝奥运会成功。

精选读者点评

这个“乱丢垃圾无所谓”的说法,你当场就给驳回了!小处不防,大环保就是空话,写得挺有劲儿。

精神独立

550字
主题:独立人格、理性判断、自主选择、责任意识、价值辨析

精神独立 mental independence

when we talk about being independent, we often think about leaving our parents and living alone. the mental independence is always ignored by people, mental independence means the person can measure the things and make the right decision. as for the children, even they move out and stay far away from their parents, but sometimes they just can’t control themselves, they will get the bad behavior, like smoking and drinking, their life is losing control. the young people need to cultivate their independent spirit, they should think by themselves, learn to take care of the other people, thus they can be the real independent. when a person grows up, they can be strong enough to support their lives and at the same time, they can be mature enough to make their own decision. they can tell what is wrong and what is right.

当我们谈到成为独立,总是想要离开父母,独自居住。精神上的独立总是被人们忽略,精神上的独立意味着一个人能衡量事情,做出正确的决定。对于孩子来说,虽然他们搬出去,远离父母,但是有时候他们无法自控,养成不好的习惯。比如抽烟和喝酒,他们的生活会失控。年轻人需要养成独立精神,他们应该自己思考,学着去照顾别人,这样才能真正的独立。当一个人成长了,他们才能够足够的强大去养活自己,同时,也能够足够成熟去做决定。他们能区分什么是好,什么是坏。

精选读者点评

精神独立这词儿贴合文意!后头“能衡量事情”比“有主见”更耐琢磨,划线了。

责任的高中英语作文

600字
主题:责任意识、代际回馈、终身学习、人生价值、自我成长

关于责任的高中英语作文大全

anyone can avoid taking responsibilities when he is alive. by taking responsibilities, we can be more and more capable. without responsibilities, we can live a qualified life.

只要活着,没有人都能避免承担责任。通过承担责任,我们会越来越多有能力。没有责任,我们无法过标注的生活。

as far as im concerned, responsibilities include three aspects in our life: first, we must work hard. if we e not diligent, we can neither support ourselves nor achieve our goals. second, we must take care of our parents, since they have brought us up. we must pay back the love to them. if we don treat our parents well, maybe well be abandoned by our children when we e old. third, we must keep on learning, because our life is an infinite book. we e always reading at the first page of this book. if we don go on learning, we can keep pace with the times.

我认为在我们的生活中责任包括三方面:第一,我们必须努力工作。如果我们不努力,我们既不能养活自己也无法达到我们的目标。第二,我们必须孝顺父母,因为是他们把我们抚养大的。我们必须用爱来回报他们。如果我们不好好对待我们的父母,也许等我们年老的时候我们会被我们的孩子抛弃。第三,我们必须不断学习,因为我们的生命是一本无穷无尽的书。我们总是阅读书的第一页。如果我们不去学习,我们就不能跟上时代的步伐。

these are my opinions that i will act as i say. i believe my life will be more colorful if i do my best to fulfill my responsibilities.

这些是我的想法,而我也会按我说的去做。我相信如果我尽力履行我的职责,我的生活会更加丰富多彩的。

精选读者点评

责任三方面说得挺实实在在,尤其“生命是本无穷书”这句,有灵气!客观来说中英文混着写,考试可要扣分哦~

关爱残疾人taking care of the disable

500字
主题:人文关怀、社会责任、传统美德、平等尊重、生命温度

关爱残疾人taking care of the disable

as chinese traditional virtue, helping others and taking care of each other are the basic virtue of a person. we are lucky that we are born to be a healthy person, while some persons are not that lucky, they may be born to be a disable man or get hurt by accidents. out of the basic virtue, it is not right to laugh at them, we need to help each other, showing our love to them. december 3rd, 2026 is world disabled day, the day reminds people of the care about disable men. the disable often ignored by us, since they are special group, we should take care of them, give them our hands. we can do something for them, like helping them when cross the road. we can help them from small things, helping each other makes the world more beautiful.

助人为乐和关爱彼此是中国的传统美德,这也是一个人最基本的美德。我们生来就很健康,这是很幸运的事,但是有一些人就没那么幸运了,他们可能生来就残疾或者被意外所伤。出于基本的美德,取笑他们是不对的,我们需要彼此帮助,向他们展示我们的关爱。2026年12月3号是世界残疾人日,这一日子是来提醒大家关爱残疾人。他们经常被我们忽视,因为他们是一个特殊的团体,我们应该关爱他们,帮助他们。我们可以为他们做一些事,比如过马路的时候帮助他们。我们可以从小事做起,彼此帮助让这个世界更美好。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混用有点突兀啊!“taking care of the disable”这个表达不太准确,disable是动词,残疾人该用people with disabilities或the disabled才更得体。后半段中文写得挺真诚,但“特殊团体”这个词容易带偏见,换成“需要更多支持的伙伴”是不是更暖一点。

saving our city

350字
主题:环境保护、可持续发展、责任担当、城市生态、低碳生活

百度广告

the environment of the city is getting worse and worse today. there are wastes, air pollution and so on. what can we do to save our city? about the wastes, we should sort the wastes, to see if they can be recycle used; use the reusable shopping bag instead of the plastic bags. about the air pollution, we should go to school on foot or by bike; we should also ask our family not to use car as much as possible, take the subway or bus instead. i hope everyone can see the environment problem and do the best to save our city.

如今城市的环境变得越来越糟。有垃圾和空气污染等问题。我们应该如何保护我们的城市?关于垃圾,我们应该进行垃圾分类,看看它们是不是可以回收利用;使用环保购物袋来代替塑料袋。关于空气污染,我们应该走路或者骑自行车去学校;我们还应该要求家人尽量少使用汽车,用地铁或者公交车代替。我希望每个人都能看到环境问题,尽量来拯救我们的城市。

精选读者点评

英文段落里“recycle used”搭配不对,应是“recycled”或“reused”;中文说“要求家人”语气太硬啦,换成“和家人一起商量少开车”是不是更暖啊!

读书的价值

500字
主题:精神成长、人生价值、阅读意义、心灵滋养

what is the purpose of study, most students will tell you that they want to find their own value and survive in the society. reading books will also help people gain knowledge and fulfill their value, but in my opinion, the value of reading books not only contains what has mentioned above, but also contains the happiness from the mind. when people read the good books, they will be immerged into the books and find themselves being part of the story. they can gain a lot from the books, learning how to face the problems or what kind of person they should be. good books are like the teachers, they show people how to fulfill their value and lead people to the success. people should choose the good books to read, those books which are worthless should be neglected. the value of books is infinite.

学习的目的是什么,大部分学生会告诉你他们想要找到自己的价值,在这社会上生存。读书也能帮助人们收获知识和实现他们的价值,但是在我看来,读书的价值不仅仅包含了前面提到的,也包含了收获思想上的愉悦。当人们读到好书时,他们会沉浸在书中,发现自己成为书中的一部分。他们也能从书本学到很多,学着如何面对问题,或者他们应该成为怎样的人。好的书就像老师,展示人们如何实现他们的价值,引导人们走向成功。人们选择好的书来读,那些没有价值的书尽量少读。书本的价值是无穷的。

精选读者点评

“读书之乐”写得真真切切!“发现自己成为书中的一部分”,这句话我划了三道线,太场景历历在目感了。后半段说教味浓了点,要是能把“好书像老师”这个想法,换成自己读《小王子》或《朝花夕拾》时的一件小事,就活了。