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mg favorite subject
do you want to know about my favorite subjeci? well, my favorite subject is english. i think its very interesting. i love my engliah teacher. my english teacher is mrs zhang. she is very nice. she is very strict wish us. i like math, too, its difficult, but fun. i don like art. its boring.
this is my favorite subjeci. do you want to tell me about your favorite subject?
精选读者点评
mrs. zhang真严啊！但“strict with us”写成“wish us”可不行，得改，孩子，你心里装着老师呢，错字别挡了这份心意。
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：记叙文、应用文
【成语使用】
【形容词】
interesting、nice、strict、difficult、fun、boring
【好词好句】
1. my favorite subject is english.
2. she is very nice.
3. it’s difficult, but fun.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "subjeci"应为"subject"
• "engliah"应为"english"
• "wish"应为"with"
• "i don like"应为"i don’t like"
【写作亮点】
✓ 语句简洁，符合初学英语写作的表达习惯
✓ 人称与动词搭配基本准确，体现初步语法意识
✓ 通过对比（english/math/art）自然呈现个人偏好
✓ 结尾设问，增强互动感与交际意识
