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关于summer plan的小学生英语作文
in order to make my summer vacation full and happy, i made a summer vacation plan for myself.
every day, i will go to e_ercise for an hour, which can make me have a strong and healthy body. i will also arrange two hours to do the homework assigned by the teacher. reading for an hour, reading can let me know a lot of e_tra-curricular knowledge, to develop in an all-round way. when reading, i will accumulate some good words and sentences to improve my writing level.
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作文类型：英语习作、假期计划类
【成语使用】
【形容词】
full、happy、strong、healthy、extra-curricular、all-round
【好词好句】
1. in order to make my summer vacation full and happy, i made a summer vacation plan for myself.
2. reading can let me know a lot of extra-curricular knowledge, to develop in an all-round way.
3. when reading, i will accumulate some good words and sentences to improve my writing level.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "e_ercise"应为"exercise"
• "e_tra-curricular"应为"extra-curricular"
【写作亮点】
✓ 结构清晰，按时间与活动类别分层展开
✓ 目标明确，兼顾健康、学业、阅读与能力提升
✓ 语言简洁，符合小学生英语表达习惯
✓ 主动语态运用自然，体现自主规划意识