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when i walk on the street, i found most people don’t obey the traffic rules, they just ignore the rules, when there are a lot of people go across the street, they just follow them. it is so dangerous, the accident is very easy to happen, the car will hit the people any time. for the safety, we should obey the traffic rules.
译文：当我走在街上的时候，发现很多人不遵守交通规则，他们忽视规则，当很多人过马路的时候，他们跟着人群一起过。这是很危险的，很容易发生事故，车子随时会撞到人。为了安全，我们应该遵守交通规则。
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作文类型：议论文、应用文
【文字校对】
• "i found"应为"i found"
• "don’t"应为"don't"
• "there are a lot of people go across the street"应为"there are a lot of people going across the street"
• "the accident is very easy to happen"应为"accidents can easily happen"
• "the car will hit the people any time"应为"cars can hit pedestrians at any time"
【写作亮点】
✓ 观察细致，聚焦日常交通现象，体现现实关怀
✓ 逻辑清晰，从现象到危害再到呼吁，结构自然完整
✓ 中英双语对照呈现，增强表达的直观性与可理解性
✓ 语言简洁有力，核心观点明确，具有公共倡导意识
