高中生活 high school life

450字
主题:成长、陪伴、奋斗、温暖、珍惜、希望

优秀高中英语作文:高中生活 high school life

generally speaking, life in high school is busy and fulfilling, due to the ultimate goal---college entrance e_amination. many people say that there is no fun left but bored study and endless e_ercises. however, as a high school student, i can’t agree with them. personally, i live a fruitful but happy life in high school. it can’t be denied that study is my priority that i must spend most of my time and energy on it. sometimes, study may make me frustrated or even drive me crazy, but i still can adjust my mood to enjoy my life. besides, i can also get a sense of achievement when i do well in my study or make progress. the most important is that my friends bring much happiness to me and my parents’ care inspires me to go on. i think friends in high school are my best friend forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions. they are the persons who grow with me. in addition, teachers in high school care much about our students both in study and life, and classmates are always friendly to each other. we build deep friendship together. all of these make up my fruitful life in high school, which i will cherish forever.

精选读者点评

这个“fruitful”贴合情境!不是堆词,是真尝到了高中生活的滋味,苦里有甜,累里有光。尤其喜欢你写朋友那句“见证所有情绪”,像把心掏出来晒太阳。

高中生活英语作文范文

400字
主题:奋斗、陪伴、成长、感恩、青春、收获

高中生活英语作文范文

generally speaking, life in high school is busy and fulfilling, due to the ultimate goal---college entrance e_amination. many people say that there is no fun left but bored study and endless e_ercises. however, as a high school student, i can’t agree with them. personally, i live a fruitful but happy life in high school.

it can’t be denied that study is my priority that i must spend most of my time and energy on it. sometimes, study may make me frustrated or even drive me crazy, but i still can adjust my mood to enjoy my life. besides, i can also get a sense of achievement when i do well in my study or make progress.

the most important is that my friends bring much happiness to me and my parents’ care inspires me to go on. i think friends in high school are my best friend forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions.

they are the persons who grow with me. in addition, teachers in high school care much about our students both in study and life, and classmates are always friendly to each other. we build deep friendship together. all of these make up my fruitful life in high school, which i will cherish forever.

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最后一段“他们是我一起成长的人”这句真好,比前面所有“fruitful”都当真。建议把“e_amination”“e_ercises”里下划线去掉,看着像漏字了。

记一个你所熟悉的人

600字
主题:成长个性、真挚友谊、童年趣味、内外兼美、自我认同

在我们五(三)班有一群可爱的小精灵,他们各有各的特色,各有各的精彩。今天我要向大家隆重推荐一个快乐的小精灵,“静若处子,动若脱兔”就是她的写照,她是谁呢?

她是一个清纯可爱的小淑女。一双忽闪忽闪的大眼睛镶嵌在瓜子脸上,透露出无限的灵气和柔情;一张甜甜的樱桃小嘴,说话的声音既温柔又轻巧;一头飘逸柔软的黑发,发梢卷卷的,就像一个小蘑菇,惹人喜爱,所以获得了一个有趣的外号叫“蘑菇”。

她还是一个文静的小淑女,哪怕是多么好吃的东西,也不会像我一样大口大口地狼吞虎咽,都会放慢了节奏,轻轻地不发出声响的细嚼慢咽。她说话的声音温柔、轻巧,无论什么情况下都不会对你大喊大叫,只会对你轻言细语。对朋友她就像是一件贴心的小棉袄,毫无保留地为朋友献出自己的真心。在你哭泣的时候安慰你,在你困难的时候帮助你。她的作业工整美观,就像她的人一样秀丽,总是得到甲星星。

她也是一个疯癫的假小子。有一次,我发明了一个男性化的游戏“阻击战”。我们在楼道上跑上跑下,向对方射击。我想爬到“烽火台”上向她扫射。没想到她竟然神不知鬼不觉地从背后绕过来,把我当场击毙。第二场,我干脆坚守阵地,严加防范,哪里都不去了。没想到她又从上面狞笑着跑了过来,吓我一大跳,追着我跑了好久,最终我举起白旗投降了。

“静若处子,动若脱兔”,这就是她性格的写照,大家知道这个快乐的小精灵是谁了吗?她就是我的好朋友——储思茹。

精选读者点评

“蘑菇”这个外号真扎实!发梢卷卷像小蘑菇,画面一下就蹦出来,比直接写“可爱”有力多啦!后头“阻击战”那段也表达酣畅,楼道追跑、狞笑突袭,动作词真有戏。值得注意的是“静若处子,动若脱兔”重复了两回,像衣服扣子系重了,悄悄松开一颗吧。