一颗感恩的心 the grateful heart

500字
主题:亲情教育、人格成长、社会责任、情感认同、价值选择

一颗感恩的心 the grateful heart

so many children take what their parents do for them for granted, they haven’t realized the meaning of being grateful. so they always get angry with their parents, because they don’t get what they want. according to the news that a little girl went out of the house and refused to go home because her parents did not give her enough pocket money. i was so shocked to hear it, i would never ask much from my parents, because i knew they were not easy to make a living and i am always feel so thankful for what they offer me. even the one who gives me a hand when i am in need, i would remember him and when i have the chance, i will return. a grateful heart makes us a kind person and create a harmonious environment. 很多小孩都想当然地认为他们的父母为他们所做的一切都是应该的,他们没有意识到感恩的意义。所以他们总是因为没有得到想要的东西而生父母的气。一则消息说一个小女孩离家出走,不愿意回家的原因是她父母没有给她足够的零花钱。看到这个新闻,我很惊讶,我永远都不会向我父母要求很多,因为我知道他们谋生并不容易,我总是很感谢他们给我提供的这一切。甚至当我需要帮忙时,帮助过我的人我都会记得,以后有机会了,我一定会报答。一颗感恩的心让我们成为善良的人,构建和谐环境。

精选读者点评

这个“离家出走只为零花钱”的例子真扎心!你写它时手是不是顿了一下?后半段“我永远都不会……”那句,语气突然沉下来了,像踩住了刹车,这种真实的停顿感,比啥修辞都打动人。

我眼中的好老师

300字
主题:师德、育人、责任、发展、榜样、教育

描写老师的高中英语作文:我眼中的好老师

there are many standards to judge whether a teacher is good or not, such as popularity among students, the scores of students or his or her title. i am lucky to have met many good teachers who have their own characteristics. in my mind, a good teacher first should be rich in knowledge, especially in his or her own subject, which is the basic requirement to a good teacher. secondly, a good teacher should be patient. as we all know that not all students can do well in study, so that it requires teachers to be patient enough to help the poor students. finally, a good teacher should be creative and able to keep pace with the times. it means that our teachers should continually get new information and knowledge to enrich themselves.

精选读者点评

英语表达挺稳,句式不花哨但清楚,especially in his or her own subject这句拿捏有度!只是“poor students”听着有点刺耳,换成“students who struggle”试试?

高中生活 high school life

450字
主题:成长、陪伴、奋斗、温暖、珍惜、希望

优秀高中英语作文:高中生活 high school life

generally speaking, life in high school is busy and fulfilling, due to the ultimate goal---college entrance e_amination. many people say that there is no fun left but bored study and endless e_ercises. however, as a high school student, i can’t agree with them. personally, i live a fruitful but happy life in high school. it can’t be denied that study is my priority that i must spend most of my time and energy on it. sometimes, study may make me frustrated or even drive me crazy, but i still can adjust my mood to enjoy my life. besides, i can also get a sense of achievement when i do well in my study or make progress. the most important is that my friends bring much happiness to me and my parents’ care inspires me to go on. i think friends in high school are my best friend forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions. they are the persons who grow with me. in addition, teachers in high school care much about our students both in study and life, and classmates are always friendly to each other. we build deep friendship together. all of these make up my fruitful life in high school, which i will cherish forever.

精选读者点评

这个“fruitful”贴合情境!不是堆词,是真尝到了高中生活的滋味,苦里有甜,累里有光。尤其喜欢你写朋友那句“见证所有情绪”,像把心掏出来晒太阳。

植树节

350字
主题:责任、行动、感恩、希望、人与自然

关于植树节的英语作文:植树节

it‘s been a long time since i‘ve done something positive to the environment. feeling guilty-ridden and determined to do something that i know would definitely please my parents and teachers,i decided to plant several trees on the hill in the rural area of the city on tree planting day with a few friends.

feeling breezy and light-hearted, we came to the foot of the hill and selected a place that looked suitable and settled down. we spent a few hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings. we took numerous pictures of the beautiful place. we also wrote our wishes and buried it deep down the roots of the trees. i felt tired quickly and though i didn‘t realise it, it was time to go. i gazed up at the sky and took in all the wonderful features of mother nature. i felt really glad that we made it for this trip and sweared that i would do my part on protecting the environment.

精选读者点评

这棵小树苗真鲜活“埋愿望”那句让我心头一热,孩子心里有光啊。

我的高中生活my high school life

450字
主题:成长、奋斗、平衡、热爱、压力、希望

我的高中生活my high school life

as a senior grade three students, i am very busy in preparing for the college entrance e_amination. i have seven classes a day, and two self-study classes at night. and only a day left for the weekend. so, most of the time i have to spend on the study, after all the college entrance e_amination is very important for almost all of us. aside of study, i would play football with my friends after school and the weekend. i like playing football very much. when i run on the football field, i can put the e_amination thing off my mind for a while, only sweat and laugh left. it is a good e_ercise for health and a good way to rela_ from the busy study too. this is my high school life, busy and fulfilling.

作为一个高三的学生,我忙于为高考做准备。我一天有7节课,还有两节晚自习。周末只剩下一天。所以,我把大部分时间都花在学习上,毕竟高考对我们大多数人来说都十分重要。除了学习,我会在放学后以及周末跟我的朋友一起踢足球。我非常喜欢踢足球。当我在足球场上奔跑的时候,我可以暂时将考试的事情抛之脑后,只剩下汗水和欢笑。这对健康是个很好的锻炼,也是一个学习之余很好的放松方式。这就是我的高中生活,忙碌而充实。

精选读者点评

英文拼写太随意啦!e_amination、rela_、e_ercise……考试卷上可不兴这么写哦~

未来生活高中英语作文

200字
主题:青春憧憬、人生抉择、自我担当、现实观照

未来生活高中英语作文

i want to grow up as soon as possible. when i grow up, i can do many things that i can’t now.

however, at the same time, i am afraid. i don’t know what my future life would be.

look around myself, some people are busy working for having enough food to eat and live better; some are achieving every goal that they make; some may live in the poor situation.

i don’t know what kind of life i would have in the future.

but i know that everyone’s life is in their hands. so i will try my best to work hard for a better future life.

精选读者点评

这句“everyone’s life is in their hands”写得亮点突出!后半句接得也稳,不喊空口号,是心里话。

暑假计划

200字
主题:自我提升、社会实践、亲情联结、文化体验

高中暑假打算英语作文:暑假计划

the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

精选读者点评

这个“refresh ourselves”用得表达真妙!爬华山后接见老师、老同学,像亲眼见,可“senior school teachers”建议改成“former teachers”,更自然些。