my school day

250字
主题:校园生活、时间管理、学习日常、成长记录

my school day

im __. im 13 years old. im in no 79 middle school. let me tell you my school day. i get up at half past si_ and have breakfast at a quarter to seven. i go to school at seven. in the morning. we have four lessons. lessons start at five past eight. we have chinese at five past eight. we have an english lesson at five to nine, and at twenty-five to ten, we have break. at ten past ten we have p.e lesson. we have an art at eleven and then we have lunch. in the afternoon we have three lessons. then i go home at five oclock. i have dinner at half past si_. i do my homework at seven a oclock. i go to bed at ten oclock.

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标点太“省”啦!句号几乎不见影子,逗号乱跑,英文大小写也常偷懒,“i”全小写,“no 79 middle school”没大写,“p.e”该写成“p.e.”。改三处,整篇清爽一大半。

my family

300字
主题:亲情、成长、校园、友谊、幸福

hi,everyone! my name is charlie! i am 12 years old, and i am in 12 middle school. my favorit color is blue. can you see that cup? the blue cup on the table it is mine . i like the cup, because the cup is blue! if you want be my friend,you can call at 183-1165-8721. i am friendly very much.

here are two photos of my family. in the first photo are my grandparents,bob green and cindy green.that is my father,he is a english teacher. we are in same school,but i am a student. ne_t to my father is my mother. she is a nurs, so she is very tidy.

in the ne_t photo are my brother eric and my sister amy.my sister is a good english girl . we are like read books and swimming. my brother and i are in the same middle school. he is clever, but he isn’t tidy.we are good friend, too!

do you like them? i have a happy family!

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蓝杯子那段内容饱满连用三个“blue”,像小孩子攥着宝贝反复念叨,可爱又感染力强儿。话说回来“can you see that cup”后面缺个问号,别让它悄悄溜走啦~

学校的一天英语

250字
主题:校园日常、时间管理、成长记录、语言实践

学校的一天英语 my name is gehongwei,i am thirteen years old. i am in class 5 grade 6,i am inyaoshun school.

i get up at seven oclock , then i have breakfrst and go to school . school start at 8 oclock .

in the morning .we have four lessons the first lesson is maths the second lesson is chinese .then

we have pe and music .school ends at 12 oclock in the noon. school start at 1:30 oclock.we have three lessons in the afternoon. there are englsih ,science and chiese .school ends at 4:20 in the afternoon . i get home at 4:40. then i do my homework i have dinner at 6:30 . after dinner i watch tv igo to bed at9;00 . this is my school day.

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名字拼写错了两处,“ge hongwei”中间该有空格,“inyaoshun”应该是“yaoshun”;时间表达里“7 o’clock”可以简写成“7:00”,更符合英语习惯。再检查下“breakfrst”“chiese”这些词哦。

my school life英语作文带翻译

200字
主题:成长、温暖、学习、陪伴、幸福

that`s my school life,my happy and wonderful school life.

我的学校生活很精彩,我有很多可爱的同学和老师。我的朋友__总是和我。我们在一起玩和学习。我们快乐每一天。下课后,同学们总是互相提问。我`想问的问题对我的同学和老师,他们是很有帮助的。我最像我的英语/数学/语文老师,她/他是有趣的和kindful.she/he总是笑容,这让我很舒服。我非常喜欢体育课。体育课,我们可以一起玩了这么多球。 这`的我的学校生活,我的幸福和美好的学校生活。

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“kindful”是自创词?查查字典,换成“和善”或“亲切”更地道。还有,“这`的我的学校生活”,撇号位置错了,别急着打引号,先想清楚是谁的。标点小毛病,改掉就清爽多啦!

英语作文-my school life我的学校生活

350字
主题:校园日常、成长体验、中英对照、忙碌与快乐、学习生活

。更多内容请看本站写作翻译频道。

as you may know, i am going to shool from monday to friday,and every day in school i am very busy.如你所知,我从星期一至星期五都要上学,在学校我很每天都很忙.

in the morning,i have four lessons,and in the afternoon i have three lessons.每天早上,我有4门课要上,在下午我有三门课要上。

of course i take two hours to go home for lunch.and we begin classes at 2:30,the school is over at 4:55.当然,我需要两个小时的时间回家吃午饭。我们班2时30分开始,学校是在4:55才放学的。

after school,sometimes i’ll stay in the classroom.but sometimes i play games with my friends when i go home after school.i think my school life is busy but happy.放学后,有时我会留在教室里.不过有时我会和我的朋友玩游戏,当我放学回家后,我觉得我的学校生活是繁忙而开心的。

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这个“忙”字写得真传神!早四节、下午三节,连回家吃个午饭都要俩钟头,光看课表就替你喘口气。然而“学校是在4:55才放学的”这句,“是……才……”有点绕,试试“学校四点五十五放学”?更利落。

my day我的一天-英语作文带翻译

550字
主题:青春朝气、学习日常、亲子陪伴、乐观向上

my day my name is zhou hongjie. my english name is bill. i’m si_teen years old. i study in dongzhou middle school. i’m in class 12, grade 8. here is my day. i often get up at five fifty in the morning. i spend twenty minutes putting on my clothes, washing my face and brushing my teeth. it takes me ten minutes to have breakfast. luckily, my home is opposite the school. i am always the first to go to school. i go to school at 6:25. before class, i do some reading. classes begin at seven twenty. there are five lessons in the morning and four lessons in the afternoon. i have lunch and supper at school. i always do some e_ercise after school. i like playing table tennis best. if i have free time, i will play chess with my father. sadly, i always lose, but i never give up playing chess. i think i will beat my father some day. my school life is colourful.

我的天 我的名字叫周洪杰。我的英文名是帐单。我十六岁。我在东洲中学读书。我在12班,8年级。这是我的一天。 我经常早上五五零点起床。我花了二十分钟穿上衣服,洗脸刷牙,刷牙。吃早饭要十分钟。幸运的是,我的家在学校对面。我总是第一个去学校。我去学校在6:25。上课前,我做了一些阅读。 课程开始于七二零。早上有五节课,下午有四节课。我在学校吃午饭和晚饭。放学后我总是做一些运动。我最喜欢打乒乓球。如果我有空闲时间,我将和我的父亲下棋。可悲的是,我总是输,但我从不放弃下棋。我想有一天我会打我的父亲。 我的学校生活是丰富多彩的。

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“帐单”这英文名太逗了!可bill才对哦~还有“五五零点”“七二零”,时间写法得改改,不然老师真以为你在发摩斯密码呢!

my school life

300字
主题:成长体验、学习生活、时间管理、双语表达

as you may know, i am going to shool from monday to friday,and every day in school i am very busy.如你所知,我从星期一至星期五都要上学,在学校我很每天都很忙.

in the morning,i have four lessons,and in the afternoon i have three lessons.每天早上,我有4门课要上,在下午我有三门课要上。

of course i take two hours to go home for lunch.and we begin classes at 2:30,the school is over at 4:55.当然,我需要两个小时的时间回家吃午饭。我们班2时30分开始,学校是在4:55才放学的。

after school,sometimes i’ll stay in the classroom.but sometimes i play games with my friends when i go home after school.i think my school life is busy but happy.放学后,有时我会留在教室里.不过有时我会和我的朋友玩游戏,当我放学回家后,我觉得我的学校生活是繁忙而开心的。

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中英文混搭得挺自然,像平时说话那样不端着;但“go school”漏了to,“very busy”后面那个“很每天”语序要调一调哦~

我的学校生活my school life

350字
主题:成长体验、学科兴趣、校园日常、语言实践

my school life hi!i‘m zhou jinru,a student of class 4,grade 7.at school ,my teachers are very friendly to me.my school life is very interesting.i like it very much. classes begin at 8:00a.m,i have four classes in the morning.in the afternoon,i have four classes,too.i study english 、math 、history 、art and some other subjects.english is my favorite subjet,and i often speak english with my classmates.but i don’t like math.i think its a little difficult and boring.do you think so? can you tell me something about it?

我的学校生活,嗨!我叫周进退自如,4班的一名学生,7年级。在学校里,老师们对我很友好。我的学校生活很有趣,我非常喜欢它。在上课开始公开。m,我上午有四课。在下午,我有四节课,太。我学英语、数学、历史、艺术和其他一些科目。英语是我最喜欢的课,我经常和我的同学说英语。但我不喜欢数学。我认为这是一个有点困难和无聊。你不这样认为吗?你能告诉我一些吗?

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标点乱飞,中英文混搭像打翻的调料瓶!“8:00a.m”写成“8:00a.m”,冒号是中文的,a.m.却没空格;“subjet”拼错,“退自如”这名字也让人愣三秒,是“进如”还是“进儒”?抄译稿可不行,得自己嚼碎了再吐出来。

爱国,是民族的灵魂

1100字
主题:家国情怀、责任担当、文化认同、时代使命、价值传承

回顾中华民族的历史长河,无数为国家抛头颅、洒热血、无私奉献的民族英雄至今活在我们心中。古代,有南宋的岳飞,明代的戚继光,郑成功……近代以来,为了保卫国家,反抗帝国主义的侵略,更是有许多仁人志士为捍卫民族主权而慷慨就义。新中国成立以后,有很多杰出人物,如邓稼先、华罗庚、钱学森等等,他们放弃国外荣华富贵的生活,回到贫穷的祖国来,为国家的现代化建设贡献自己的力量。这些人的光辉形象和他们可歌可泣的动人事迹,永远激励着每一个中国人奋发向上!

爱国精神,是不分国界的。不仅在中国,在世界许多国家中,爱国教育也是极受重视的。

美国一个普通的乡村教师说过一句话:“不懂得热爱国旗的学生,无论他多么出色,都不是好学生。”在美国,热爱国旗是一件极其平常而又非常光荣的事。在波兰,每一所学校都专门设有爱国主义教育课程,并使之融入政治、历史等科目中。在泰国,爱国主义教育,是每个学生必不可少的一门课程,政府极端重视对青少年进行民族传统和爱国教育。特色的是韩国,它把爱国主义教育渗透到社会生活的各个方面。韩国人历来以使用本国产品而引为骄傲。可见,爱国主义精神是全世界人民共有的宝贵财富。

我们作为新世纪的青少年一代,是祖国的希望,祖国的未来必将属于我们。因此,我们更要继承和发扬崇高的爱国主义精神。

原国家__ ___同志说过:“继承和发扬爱国主义精神,要体现在行动中。”如果祖国需要我们抛头颅、洒热血的话,每一个有正气的中国人都会毫不犹豫地为国捐躯。但是,现在我们生活在和平年代,祖国并不需要我们上战场。我们应该如何来爱国呢?作为学生我们首先要做到的是热爱自己的学校。一个连自己的学校都不爱的学生,又怎么可能爱自己的国家呢?热爱学校是一种非常具体而切近的行动。学校为我们提供了优良的学习环境,学校的老师为培养我们成才而兢兢业业,这里是我们成长的摇篮。作为一名学生,我们没有理由不去热爱自己的学校。学校里的每一位学生都要像爱护自己的眼睛一样去维护学校的形象和荣誉;我们要真心实意地尊敬我们的老师、尊重所有为学校提供服务的叔叔、阿姨们;我们要自觉地保护学校里的一草一木,美化自然环境,创造高雅的人文环境,使我们学校成为名副其实的花园、乐园;我们还要像对待自己的兄弟姐妹一样去热爱我们学校的数千位同学,让我们互爱互学,一起欢乐成长!我们要珍惜时间,刻苦学习,努力拼搏,夺取各学段的优异成绩,将来为祖国贡献自己的一份力量,以此来报答养育了我们的学校,报答我们敬爱的老师!

爱国,是至高无上的品德、是民族的灵魂。亲爱的同学们,为了学校的荣誉、为了我们肩上的重任,为了中华民族的腾飞,让我们努力学习,做一个无愧于人民的具有爱国主义情怀的万里学子吧!

精选读者点评

岳飞、戚继光、邓稼先……这些名字写得工整,但读着有点像“光荣榜”贴在作文里了。你查过郑成功收复台湾时,军中伙夫怎么煮饭的吗?试试写一个具体的人、一件具体的事,哪怕只写他擦枪时手背上的冻疮,那才真有温度。

我的学校生活 my schoool life

300字
主题:成长、热爱、友善、求知、活力

my schoool life is busy and fantastic. first, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. we have to get to school before 7:30 because we have a morning class. second, i like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful. we also have lots of after-school activies. third, our school environment is very beautiful, the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive. so i like my school life very much.

我的学校生活是忙碌的,神奇的。首先,我们有四节课在上午和下午三。我们到学校7:30之前因为我们早上有课。其次,我喜欢我的学校生活,因为老师和我的同学都很友好,乐于助人。我们也有很多的课外活动。第三、我们的学校环境很漂亮,老师们都能使自己的课有趣又有启发性。所以我非常喜欢我的学校生活。

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句子有点小毛刺,“four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon”直接翻成“四节课在上午和下午三”太生硬啦!试试“上午四节,下午三节”?还有“神奇的”对应fantastic不太准,换成“精彩”更贴~

我的学校 my school-英语作文带翻译

300字
主题:忙碌、快乐、成长、规律、友谊

i am going to shool from monday to friday,and every day in school i am very busy.

in the morning,i have four lessons,and in the afternoon i have three lessons.

of course i take two hours to go home for lunch.and we begin classes at 2:30,the school is over at 4:55.after school,sometimes i’ll stay in the classroom.

but sometimes i play games with my friends when i go home after school.i think my school life is busy but happy.

我去学校从星期一到星期五,每天在学校里我很忙。

早上我有四节课,下午有三节课。

当然我花2个小时回家吃午饭。我们开始上课,下午2:30放学,在学校的成绩55.after,有时候我会呆在教室里。

但有时放学后我和我的朋友们玩游戏,我觉得我的学校生活很忙碌但很快乐。

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句子通顺,意思清楚!“busy but happy”这个结尾文意清晰,把矛盾感写得活灵活现~唯独“take two hours to go home for lunch”有点怪,中午真要走两小时?怕是笔误啦?