my school life

150字
主题:成长体验、人际交往、学习适应、友情互动

dear jame,

im li hua.how are you ?i have been student in my new school for two months.i want to tell you about my high school life .

my school is big and beautiful.in my class ,there are 52 classmates,and they are friendly.i get up at 6:30 am and go to bed at 10:30 pm.my favorite teacher is mrs. _ia.she is very kind and outgoing .she often tells some interesting things to us.

how about you ?im looking forward to your early reply !

yours

li hua

精选读者点评

开头称呼“dear jame”后面逗号用错了,英文书信该用逗号但中文习惯写“亲爱的杰姆:”,这里中英混搭有点跳。还有“i have been student”少了个a,别小看这个冠词,它可是英语语法的“门把手”,一松手,整扇门都晃。

my school day

250字
主题:校园生活、时间管理、学习日常、成长记录

my school day

im __. im 13 years old. im in no 79 middle school. let me tell you my school day. i get up at half past si_ and have breakfast at a quarter to seven. i go to school at seven. in the morning. we have four lessons. lessons start at five past eight. we have chinese at five past eight. we have an english lesson at five to nine, and at twenty-five to ten, we have break. at ten past ten we have p.e lesson. we have an art at eleven and then we have lunch. in the afternoon we have three lessons. then i go home at five oclock. i have dinner at half past si_. i do my homework at seven a oclock. i go to bed at ten oclock.

精选读者点评

标点太“省”啦!句号几乎不见影子,逗号乱跑,英文大小写也常偷懒,“i”全小写,“no 79 middle school”没大写,“p.e”该写成“p.e.”。改三处,整篇清爽一大半。

学校的一天英语

250字
主题:校园日常、时间管理、成长记录、语言实践

学校的一天英语 my name is gehongwei,i am thirteen years old. i am in class 5 grade 6,i am inyaoshun school.

i get up at seven oclock , then i have breakfrst and go to school . school start at 8 oclock .

in the morning .we have four lessons the first lesson is maths the second lesson is chinese .then

we have pe and music .school ends at 12 oclock in the noon. school start at 1:30 oclock.we have three lessons in the afternoon. there are englsih ,science and chiese .school ends at 4:20 in the afternoon . i get home at 4:40. then i do my homework i have dinner at 6:30 . after dinner i watch tv igo to bed at9;00 . this is my school day.

精选读者点评

名字拼写错了两处,“ge hongwei”中间该有空格,“inyaoshun”应该是“yaoshun”;时间表达里“7 o’clock”可以简写成“7:00”,更符合英语习惯。再检查下“breakfrst”“chiese”这些词哦。

my daily life

300字
主题:规律生活、自主学习、课余活动、时间管理、成长记录

i get up at si_ every day. i dress myself quickly and have breakfast at half past si_. after breakfast i go to school.

i have four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. i study hard and always help my classmate with their lessons. i have lunch at school. school is over at five.

after supper i read newspapers or watch tv for half an hour. i prepare my lessons between half past seven and nine. igo to bed at nine.

the above is a brief account of my daily life on weekdays.there is no school on sundays. i usually review my lessons in the morning and call on some friends or to go to see a film in the afternoon.

注释:

1) dress myself穿衣

2) the above上面所说

3) a brief account简要的说明

4) on weekdays在星期日以外的各天

5) there is no school on sundays.星期天没有课。

6) call on拜访

精选读者点评

动词时态全用一般现在时,主谓一致基本稳,但“si_”明显是“six”的拼写失误,早餐时间、上学时间这些关键信息可不能马虎呀!还有“classmate”该用复数才对哦~

六年级小学生英语作文范文

250字
主题:童年生活、亲情温暖、学习习惯、成长日常

六年级小学生英语作文范文

i get up at si_ in the morning. then i wash my face and brush my teeth. after a quick breakfast, i go to school in my mothers car. it takes us more than half an hour to get there.

we have four hour classes in the morning. i have luch at my grandparents, because their home is nearer to my school.

after two classes in the afternoon, school is over. then we clean our classroom.

i get home at about half past five. we have dinner at seven. after dinner i do my homework. if i finish my homesork early, i can watch tv for half an hour. i go to bed at half past nine or ten.

精选读者点评

时态基本稳,但“si_”“luch”“homesork”这些拼写小坑得填上呀!还有“four hour classes”该加冠词哦~

五年级小学生英语作文

250字
主题:成长记录、学习体验、亲子陪伴、校园乐趣

today is sunny.i get up early and read some english.then i have breakfast and go to school.

in the morning we have four lessonsthey’re two enlish lessonsone chinese lesson and one history lesson.i like english best.

at noon we have lunch at schoolwe have rice and vegetablesbut we don’t like them very much.

in the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson.math is difficultbut i study hard.and we sing a beautiful song.

we finish school at a quarter to five.i play basketball with my friends on the playground.it’s fun!then i go home and do my homeworkne_t i have dinner with my parents and watch tv.i go to bed at nine o’clock.

精选读者点评

句子太短啦!像一串糖葫芦,得用“因为”“所以”“虽然……但是……”串一串才好吃。试试把“i get up early and read some english”变成“因为想练好口语,我特意早起读英语”,味道立马不一样~

my day我的一天-英语作文带翻译

550字
主题:青春朝气、学习日常、亲子陪伴、乐观向上

my day my name is zhou hongjie. my english name is bill. i’m si_teen years old. i study in dongzhou middle school. i’m in class 12, grade 8. here is my day. i often get up at five fifty in the morning. i spend twenty minutes putting on my clothes, washing my face and brushing my teeth. it takes me ten minutes to have breakfast. luckily, my home is opposite the school. i am always the first to go to school. i go to school at 6:25. before class, i do some reading. classes begin at seven twenty. there are five lessons in the morning and four lessons in the afternoon. i have lunch and supper at school. i always do some e_ercise after school. i like playing table tennis best. if i have free time, i will play chess with my father. sadly, i always lose, but i never give up playing chess. i think i will beat my father some day. my school life is colourful.

我的天 我的名字叫周洪杰。我的英文名是帐单。我十六岁。我在东洲中学读书。我在12班,8年级。这是我的一天。 我经常早上五五零点起床。我花了二十分钟穿上衣服,洗脸刷牙,刷牙。吃早饭要十分钟。幸运的是,我的家在学校对面。我总是第一个去学校。我去学校在6:25。上课前,我做了一些阅读。 课程开始于七二零。早上有五节课,下午有四节课。我在学校吃午饭和晚饭。放学后我总是做一些运动。我最喜欢打乒乓球。如果我有空闲时间,我将和我的父亲下棋。可悲的是,我总是输,但我从不放弃下棋。我想有一天我会打我的父亲。 我的学校生活是丰富多彩的。

精选读者点评

“帐单”这英文名太逗了!可bill才对哦~还有“五五零点”“七二零”,时间写法得改改,不然老师真以为你在发摩斯密码呢!

my school life

300字
主题:成长体验、学习生活、时间管理、双语表达

as you may know, i am going to shool from monday to friday,and every day in school i am very busy.如你所知,我从星期一至星期五都要上学,在学校我很每天都很忙.

in the morning,i have four lessons,and in the afternoon i have three lessons.每天早上,我有4门课要上,在下午我有三门课要上。

of course i take two hours to go home for lunch.and we begin classes at 2:30,the school is over at 4:55.当然,我需要两个小时的时间回家吃午饭。我们班2时30分开始,学校是在4:55才放学的。

after school,sometimes i’ll stay in the classroom.but sometimes i play games with my friends when i go home after school.i think my school life is busy but happy.放学后,有时我会留在教室里.不过有时我会和我的朋友玩游戏,当我放学回家后,我觉得我的学校生活是繁忙而开心的。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自然,像平时说话那样不端着;但“go school”漏了to,“very busy”后面那个“很每天”语序要调一调哦~

三年级小学生英语作文

250字
主题:规律生活、自主成长、校园日常、课余时光

三年级小学生英语作文

i get up at si_ every day. i dress myself quickly and have breakfast at half past si_. after breakfast i go to school.

i have four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. i study hard and always help my classmate with their lessons. i have lunch at school. school is over at five.after supper i read newspapers or watch tv for half an hour. i prepare my lessons between half past seven and nine. igo to bed at nine.

the above is a brief account of my daily life on weekdays.there is no school on sundays. i usually review my lessons in the morning and call on some friends or to go to see a film in the afternoon.

精选读者点评

单词拼写小马虎,“six”写成“si_”,“i go”连在一起啦!标点也悄悄溜走咯~话说回来时间安排得真清楚,像个小闹钟!

school life英语作文带翻译

350字
主题:成长记录、学习日常、青春节奏、校园时光

i am a middle student . i am in linzhang there middle. i am happy boy.i am fourteen years old.

my school stays class at 6:50. we go to school at 6:30 and in class .our teachers is very good.

we have four classes in the morning there are five classes in the afternoon.we after class at 18:50.

after classwe join our club activity.after our club activity at 21:00.

then ,we do our homework.at 23:00 we go to bed.this is our school life one day.

the ne_t day repeat the same thing.

翻译:

我是一个中学的学生。我在临漳中学。我是快乐男孩。我十四岁。

我的学校呆在骑车。我们六点半去学校,在课堂上。我们的老师很好。早上我们有四节课下午有五类。我们在18:50下课后。

下课后我们加入我们的俱乐部活动。我们的俱乐部活动后在21:00。然后,我们做我们的作业。我们23:00睡觉了。这是我们的学校生活的一天。第二天重复同样的事情。

精选读者点评

“i am happy boy”这句真可爱!但英语里boy前得加冠词呀,a happy boy才对哦~还有“stays class”“there middle”这些小地方,回头咱一起改改?