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保持健康英语作文80词
today,i want to tell you how to keep healthy.it is very important for us.because if you don healthy ,you will ill.how to keep healthy ?
first,we must have a healthy diet.most of the students like eating fried food such as fried chicken,french fries and so on.but this kind of food isn good for us.it is unhealthy food.we should eat less fried food. (善意的谎言作文)
second,we must have a good habit.i have a good habit.i get up early and go to bed early.i e_ercise regularly when it is si_ oclock in the morning.so i have a strong body.but i go to bed very late,so i should go to bed earlier than before.
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作文类型:英语应用文、健康主题说明文
适合年级:初中一年级、初中二年级、初中三年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
healthy、important、unhealthy、strong、early、late、regularly、good
【好词好句】
1. it is very important for us.
2. we should eat less fried food.
3. i get up early and go to bed early.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "don healthy"应为"don't stay healthy"
• "you will ill"应为"you will fall ill"
• "isn good"应为"isn't good"
• "e_ercise"应为"exercise"
• "si_ oclock"应为"six o'clock"
【写作亮点】
✓ 主题明确,紧扣“保持健康”核心
✓ 结构清晰,用first/second自然分层
✓ 语言朴实,符合初中生表达习惯
✓ 能结合自身经历增强真实感