london

250字
主题:城市风貌、文化地标、地理特征、国际赛事、历史纪念、语言环境

london

if you go to watch the olympic games in london, you can’t miss many famous places here. what is the city like? which sights catch visitors’ eye most? let’s have a lot.

the river thames runs through london. it divides the city into two parts. it’s very interesting to take a trip on the river. this way, you can see almost every landmark of london.

big ben is the big clock that stands at the north of westminster abbey. every hour, it “bongs” the number of hours to tell the time. it’s the largest four-faced chiming clock in the world. it celebrated its 150th birthday on may 31, 2026.

london is 1572 km2, has 7825200 people in london. they are all speaking english.

精选读者点评

伦敦面积和人口数字写得挺认真,但单位“km2”“people”要换成中文“平方千米”“人”才规范哦~还有,大本钟生日写成2026年啦,它1859年就敲响第一声咯!

a dream

250字
主题:童年想象、异国见闻、惊喜发现、瞬间醒悟

a dream

peter: oh, i can believe it. i am now in london in england. i see the big ben. big ben is not the the name of a man. it is a very big clock…. oh, i am so happy.

happy: how are you?

peter: im fine, thank you.

happy: how was your holiday?

peter: it was fun.

happy: where did you go?

peter: i went to england.

happy: how did you go there?

peter: i went by plane.

happy: what did you do and what did you see?

peter: i saw the big ben. the hands are four meters long. and i bought presents for you!

happy: oh, thank you. did you take any pictures?

peter: yes. er…where did i put my pictures? ...

peter: oh, its a dream!

精选读者点评

开头那个“oh, i can't believe it”真有梦醒时分的味儿!标点用得松活,像喘气,比老写句号强多了。但是“the the”漏删了,下次写完自己眯眼扫一遍?

london

250字
主题:城市风貌、地理特征、文化象征、历史建筑、旅游导览

if you go to watch the olympic games in london, you can’t miss many famous places here. what is the city like? which sights catch visitors’ eye most? let’s have a lot.

the river thames runs through london. it divides the city into two parts. it’s very interesting to take a trip on the river. this way, you can see almost every landmark of london.

big ben is the big clock that stands at the north of westminster abbey. every hour, it “bongs” the number of hours to tell the time. it’s the largest four-faced chiming clock in the world. it celebrated its 150th birthday on may 31, 2026.

london is 1572 km2, has 7825200 people in london. they are all speaking english.

精选读者点评

开头这句“you can’t miss many famous places here”有点绝对啦!伦敦景点多,但“不能错过”所有?换成“值得一看的可真不少”是不是更留余地?还有“let’s have a lot”,想说“一起看看”吧?笔误要盯紧哦~

小水滴旅行记之旅游文化

750字
主题:成长见闻、世界认知、自然拟人、文化启蒙、奇妙旅程

小水滴刚打开qq邮箱,看见了一封新邮件。原来,他的朋友江、河、湖、海要带他周游各国,看遍世界美景,吃遍各国美食。

第一站,江带他来到了英国。他们在泰晤士河里散步,看见了伦敦塔桥,江说:“伦敦塔桥,是从英国伦敦泰晤士河口算起的第一座桥(泰晤士河上共建桥15座),也是伦敦的象征,有“伦敦正门”之称。该桥始建于1886年,1894年6月30日对公众开放,将伦敦南北区连接成整体,塔桥两端由4座石塔连接。登塔远眺,可尽情欣赏泰晤士河上下游十里风光。假若遇上薄雾锁桥,景观更为一绝,雾锁塔桥是伦敦胜景之一。”小水滴听后,认为这是个奇迹。接着,他们又来到了—

第一站之中转站—大本钟。“再往北走,就到了!”江说,“大本钟是伦敦有特色的标志性建筑物之一。1834年整个西敏被大火所毁,目前的这座97米高的钟楼是1837年维多利亚女王登基时建造的。大钟造于1856年,以建造工程的第一名监督官本杰明爵士的名字命名,叫”bigben“(大本钟)。1857年该钟出现裂痕,于1859年重新铸造。新钟重13。5吨,表盘直径7米,钟摆重达305公斤。”小水滴听得目瞪口呆,他没想到原来国外也有这么多奇迹!第二站,海带他来到意大利,吃完披萨后,他们来到了比萨斜塔,海对他说:“比萨斜塔,位于比萨大教堂的后面,是意大利比萨城大教堂的独立式钟楼。钟楼始建于1173年,设计为垂直建造,但是在工程开始后不久便由于地基不均匀和土层松软而倾斜,1372年完工,塔身倾斜向东南。比萨斜塔是比萨城的标志,1987年它和相邻的大教堂、洗礼堂、墓园一起因其对11世纪至14世纪意大利建筑艺术的巨大影响而被联合国教育科文组织评选为世界遗产。”小水滴听后,拍手称好。小水滴回去以后,便和兄弟姐妹说他去了各国旅行,吃了好多好吃的,他便把那些旅游时的文学常识讲给他们听,他们也很羡慕小水滴有这么好的待遇。

小水滴这次的旅行结束了,下次再见面!

精选读者点评

小水滴真会交朋友!江河湖海全出动,连泰晤士河散步都写得像在自家后院溜达。平心而论,你让小水滴光听讲解不说话?他心里咋想的?偷偷补一句试试?