london

250字
主题:城市风貌、文化地标、地理特征、国际赛事、历史纪念、语言环境

london

if you go to watch the olympic games in london, you can’t miss many famous places here. what is the city like? which sights catch visitors’ eye most? let’s have a lot.

the river thames runs through london. it divides the city into two parts. it’s very interesting to take a trip on the river. this way, you can see almost every landmark of london.

big ben is the big clock that stands at the north of westminster abbey. every hour, it “bongs” the number of hours to tell the time. it’s the largest four-faced chiming clock in the world. it celebrated its 150th birthday on may 31, 2026.

london is 1572 km2, has 7825200 people in london. they are all speaking english.

精选读者点评

伦敦面积和人口数字写得挺认真,但单位“km2”“people”要换成中文“平方千米”“人”才规范哦~还有,大本钟生日写成2026年啦,它1859年就敲响第一声咯!

london

250字
主题:城市风貌、地理特征、文化象征、历史建筑、旅游导览

if you go to watch the olympic games in london, you can’t miss many famous places here. what is the city like? which sights catch visitors’ eye most? let’s have a lot.

the river thames runs through london. it divides the city into two parts. it’s very interesting to take a trip on the river. this way, you can see almost every landmark of london.

big ben is the big clock that stands at the north of westminster abbey. every hour, it “bongs” the number of hours to tell the time. it’s the largest four-faced chiming clock in the world. it celebrated its 150th birthday on may 31, 2026.

london is 1572 km2, has 7825200 people in london. they are all speaking english.

精选读者点评

开头这句“you can’t miss many famous places here”有点绝对啦!伦敦景点多,但“不能错过”所有?换成“值得一看的可真不少”是不是更留余地?还有“let’s have a lot”,想说“一起看看”吧?笔误要盯紧哦~

shanghai museum

200字
主题:历史文化、城市地标、文物收藏、中华文明、实地观览

shanghai museum is located in the center of the peoples square. it covers an area of 4,000 square meters. there are so many ancient books, paintings, bronze wares in it. its just like a huge book to tell you the history of china. people from all over the co一ntry like to go there to see huge quantity of antiquities with their own eyes. if you have a chance to go there, youll have a good time.

注释:

1) it covers an area of…它占地……

2) huge quantity of antiquities大量的古物

3) see…with ones own eyes亲眼目睹

精选读者点评

开头地点写得清楚,但“4,000”中间那个逗号得改掉,中文里数字不用逗号分隔,写成“4000”才对。还有“co一ntry”这行拼错了,破折号混进单词里啦,抄注释时多看一眼哦。