学习英语的重要性

300字
主题:语言价值、国际交流、文化输出、终身学习、全球视野

english is widely used throughout the world. so many people speak it as a second language. on line, youll find lots of information in english. if you don understand english, how can you know more about the world, how can you get more knowledge. at international conferences, english is also used as the official language. without good english, you cannot e_press your ideas well at such conferences, neither can you introduce china to the outside world.

英语在世界上被广泛使用。很多人把它作为第二语言。在网上你会发现大量的英文资料。如果你不懂英语,你怎么能更多地了解世界,你怎么能获得更多的知识。在国际会议上,英语也是官方语言。没有流利的英语,你不能表达你的想法,你也不能把中国介绍给世界。

精选读者点评

英语真成了“世界语”啊!你把线上资料、国际会议这些例子抓得挺准,读着就信,客观来说后半段“你怎么能……你怎么能……”连着问,像在喊口号,喘口气,换个说法试试?

初一英语作文-名字的重要性

350字
主题:名字意义、个人努力、价值判断、命运观、自我认知

there are always some debates on the importance of a name. some people say the name is vital to a person because it can decide whether a person will be successful or not in the future. furthermore, a positive name can also promote a persons hardworking at study.

对于名字的重要性总是存在一些争论。有人说名字对一个人来说是很重要的,因为它可以决定一个人将来是否会成功。此外,积极的名字也可以促进一个人努力学习。

whereas, some other people hold the opposite opinion that names do not matter. there are strings of reasons. to start with, whether the person is successful or not is up to his own diligence; whats more, they are just names which can be easily changed.

然而,另一些人持相反的意见认为名字并不重要。原因有长长的一串。首先,一个人是否成功是靠他自己的勤奋;更重要的是,它只是名字 ,可以随便改的。

as far as i am concerned, names can not decide any things.

我觉得名字什么都不能决定。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自然,但“strings of reasons”这句太直译啦!换成“理由一箩筐”多笔触有力?后半段中文写得干净利落,尤其“它只是名字,可以随便改的”,这句真有味道!

我的房间作文中英对照

350字
主题:生活空间、物品摆放、个人喜好、日常习惯

hi!this is my room,its very tidy.

你好。这是我的房间,它很整洁。

my books and notebooks are in the bookcase.i have a clock,its purple.because i love purple.it looks nice.my schoolbag is near the desk.the doll is mine.its on the bed.where are my homework? oh,they are on the sofa.i have a bo_,some food in it.such as apples,bananas,milk and eggs.

我的书和笔记本在书橱里。我有一个时钟,它是紫色的。因为我爱紫色的。它看起来不错。我的书包在书桌。娃娃是我的。它在床上。那里是我的家庭作业吗?噢,他们在沙发上。我有一个盒子,一些食物,例如苹果,香蕉,牛奶和鸡蛋。

my pens are in the pencil bo_,the volleyball is behind door.my quilt and pillow are on the bed.the map is on the wall.

我的钢笔在铅笔盒里,排球是背后的门。我的被子和枕头在床上。地图挂在墙上。

my room is very good.

我的房间很好。

do you like it?

你喜欢吗?

精选读者点评

“bo_”漏写一个字母,“behind door”少了个the,还有“they are on the sofa”指代不清,作业是单数呀!值得注意的是中英文对照工整,看得出你很用心在搭架子,继续稳住这个节奏。

this is my family

500字
主题:亲情、成长、运动、责任、热爱、传承

look at the photo of my family. my name is sun bing_ing. i’m a student. i’m in class2, grade1. i like sports very much. i think i play basketball very well. i’m in the basketball team. this is my grandfather. he is 73 years old. he likes smoking. this is my grandmother. she is 72 years old. she likes watching tv. they are my grandparents. they are very nice. this is my father. he likes smoking, too. but i don’t like smoking. this is my mother. she likes dancing. they are my parents. and i have an uncle. he is 30 years old. he isn’t very rich. he is a worker. i don’t have an aunt. is the girl my sister? yes, she is. she isn’t a student. she is a teacher. this is my family. i love my family very much.

看看我的家人的照片。我的名字是孙秉性。 我是一名学生。我在2级,1级我非常喜欢运动。我觉得我打篮球很好。我在篮球队。这是我的祖父。他是73岁。他喜欢抽烟。这是我的祖母。她是72岁。她喜欢看电视。他们是我的爷爷奶奶。 他们人很好。 这是我的父亲。他喜欢抽烟,太。但我不喜欢抽烟。这是我的母亲。她喜欢跳舞。 他们是我的父母。我有一个叔叔。他是30岁。他不是很丰富。他是一名工人。我没有一个阿姨。是女孩我妹妹? 是的,她是。她是不是学生。 她是一名教师。 这是我的家人。我爱我的家庭非常多。

精选读者点评

孙秉性同学,你把全家人都请进作文里啦!爷爷奶奶、爸妈、叔叔、妹妹,一个不落,真像开家庭会议~稍显“73岁”“72岁”写成“七十三岁”“七十二岁”更规范哦;还有“rich”翻译成“有钱”比“丰富”准确多啦!

初一英语作文带翻译-my name is wang

250字
主题:成长身份、亲情关系、健康生活、语言实践

my name is wang guang. i am thirteen. i’m in no.2 middle school. i’m in class 6 grade 1. this is my family. these are my parents. and those are my grandparents. they are my uncle and aunt. and this is my cousin. i like playing volleyball and tennis with my friends. i have a great sports collection. i have two tennis rackets, four basketballs and a volleyball.

我的名字是汪广。我13。我在第二中学。我在一类6级这是我的家人。 这是我的父母。而这些都是我的祖父母。他们是我的叔叔和婶婶。这是我的表弟。我喜欢打排球,网球和我的朋友。我有一个伟大的体育收藏。我有两个网球拍,四篮球和排球。

精选读者点评

句子基本通顺,能用简单句介绍自己和家人,不错!但注意中英文混用问题,“一类6级”“四篮球”这类表达要改成“初一(6)班”“四个篮球”才规范哦。

书籍

350字
主题:读书意义、择书标准、成长价值、人文修养

as is well known, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. they increase our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. in other words, they are our good teachers and wise friends. this is the reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

reading is a good thing, but we must pay great attention to the choice of books. it is true that we can derive benefits from good books. however, bad books will do us more harm than good.

如众所周知,书籍教我们学习人生,真理,科学以及其它许多有用的东西。它们增加我们的知识,扩大我们的心胸并加强我们的品格。换句话说,它们是我们的良师益友。这是为什么我们的父母终是鼓励我们要多读书的理由。

读书是一好事,但我们必须多加注意书的选择。不错,我们能从好书中获得益处。然而,坏书却对我们有害无益。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混搭得挺有意思,但“as is well known”直接搬进中文段落里,像在语文本上贴了张英语小纸条,悄悄撕掉它,整篇就清爽多了。

my family

450字
主题:亲情、成长、日常、关爱、生活、温馨

hi, i’m emma. i have a big and happy family. there are parents, grandparents, aunts, two brothers and two sisters in my family.

here are two nice photos of my family. my grandfather and grandmother are on the first picture. they always e_ercise in the morning, so they are very healthy. my father is a policeman and my mother is a teacher. on the second picture there are my four aunts and two sisters, mary and cindy. they are university students. cindy is careless. “where are my keys?” ”where is my ruler?” ”where is my schoolbag?”, she always asks. _iami is in my family, too. it is my dog. it’s very lovely.

i love my family very much.

嗨,我是艾玛。我有一个大的和幸福的家庭。有父母,爷爷奶奶,叔叔阿姨,两个兄弟和我的家人两姐妹。

这里是我家的两个漂亮的照片。我的爷爷和奶奶都在第一张照片。他们总是在早上锻炼,所以他们都非常健康。我的父亲是一名警察,母亲是一名教师。在第二张照片有我的四个阿姨和两个姐妹,玛丽和辛迪。他们是大学同学。辛迪是粗心。 “哪里是我的钥匙?”“我的尺子?”“我的书包?”,她总是询问。小蜜是在我家了。这是我的狗。这是非常可爱的。

我爱我的家庭非常多。

精选读者点评

“cindy is careless”后面那串问句真鲜活标点也对,像听见她翻箱倒柜的声音了~就是“_iami”拼错了,是mia吧?再瞅一眼?

三个筛子there sieves

850字
主题:信息甄别、言语自律、理性思考、道德边界、人际尊重

grandpa hodge was the most popular sage in the village because he was so philosophic in speaking and doing things that everyone revered him as “grandpa wisdom”.

霍奇爷爷是村里欢迎的长者,因为他讲话做事都很有哲理,大家都尊称他为“智慧爷爷”。

one day, a man hurried to grandpa wisdom and said, “grandpa, i have a piece of news to tell you…”

有一天,一个人匆匆跑到智慧爷爷那里说:“爷爷,我有个消息要告诉你……”

“wait a moment,” grandpa hodge stroked his beard and cut him short, “have you sifted the news you will tell me with three sieves?”

“等一下,”霍奇爷爷摸了摸胡子,打断了他的话,“你要告诉我的消息,用三个筛子筛过了吗?”

“three sieves? which three sieves?” the man asked with puzzlement.

“三个筛子?哪三个筛子?”那人不解的问。

“the first sieve is truth. is the news you will tell me true?” grandpa hodge asked, narrowing his eyes.

“第一个筛子叫真实。你要告诉我的消息确实是真的吗?”霍奇爷爷眯着眼问道。

“i don’t know because i overhead it from the street.”

“不知道,我是从街上听来的。”

“now let’s check it with the second sieve,” grandpa hodge went on, “if the news you will tell me is not true, it should be friendly.”

“现在再用第二个筛子来审查吧,”霍奇爷爷接着说,“你要告诉我的这个消息就算不是真实的,也应该是善意的吧?”

the man hesitantly answered, “no, just the other way round…”

那人踌躇的回答说:“不,正好相反......”

grandpa hodge once again interrupted him, “so let’s use the third sieve. can you tell me if the news that is e_citing you is very important?”

霍奇爷爷再次打断他的话:“那么我们再用第三个筛子,请问,使你如此激动的消息很重要吗?”

“it is not so important,” the man answered with embarrassment.

“并不怎么重要,”那人不好意思地回答。

grandpa hodge patted the shoulder of the man and said significantly, “now that the news you will tell me is not true, friendly or important, please don’t tell me. then it won’t trouble you and me.”

霍奇爷爷拍了拍那人的肩膀,意味深长的说:“既然你要告诉我的事,既不真实,也非善意,更不重要,那么就请你别说了吧!这样的话,它就不会困扰你和我了。”

the man took a tumble and never spread the overhead news ever since.

那人恍然大悟,从此以后再也不到处传播道听途说的消息息了。

精选读者点评

这“三个筛子”真有意思!把“真、善、重”揉进胡子一捋的动作里,不讲大道理,却让人一下记住,好故事就该这样长在生活里。