最完美的生物

950字
主题:成长压力、理想化投射、家庭教育、社会比较、自我认同、幽默批判

世界上有一种生物,它是所有家长都希望得到的——

它从不骄傲,反而很谦虚。它什么事都想得很周全,从来没有出过错,别人都很崇拜它。它对身边的人都十分得好:对长辈特别孝顺,对同学与朋友十分友善、真诚,对比自己小的孩子关爱倍护。

它的学习棒得不得了,每次都考全年级第一名。各门学科同步第一,只要一科没有考到满分就会哭得昏天暗地,但它考试从来都可以考满分。

它从不与时俱进,长辈说什么做什么,就算住着茅草房、穿着烂衣裳、踏着破草鞋,它也不会有半句怨言。现在的电脑、电视、游戏机、学习机、手机等等,它也从来不碰,就连qq都不知道是什么东东。

它勤俭节约,用过的草稿纸都是到处捡的,并且扔的时候草稿纸上都是字,找不出来一点点空隙。它作业做起来一丝不苟:字工整漂亮,准确度100%,也不浪费作业本。一个学期下来,书本还跟新的一样。

它深得老师喜爱,奖状周周有,一叠一叠的,如果不卖连家都装不下。任何老师只要一见到它就赞不绝口,同学们都羡慕嫉妒恨。

它口才极好,班上如果有同学吵架或打架,它只要一说话就能解决纷争。还精通各种乐器,弹奏出来的曲子算得上是天籁之音,俗话说得好“此曲只因天上有,人间哪的几回闻”,用这来形容再贴切不过了。它的棋艺不亚于专业棋手,每次参加比赛都要抱个奖杯回来,它自己就一直觉得没有对手的比赛称不上比赛,但怎可辜负家长与老师的期望,它可是个最听话的生物啊!书法对它来说就像是熟得不能再熟的朋友,因此它对书法了如指掌,达到了登峰造极的境界。“活了!活了!”只要有人见过它的画,就不得不说出这句话,可见它画的画多么逼真,并且会各种绘画形式。

它能够利随意用自己所学的任何知识得到自己想要的资料,天气、气候、pm2。5、湿度、温度等更不在话下。它的分析力和判断力极强,任何文章它都能够分析透彻,连鲁迅都佩服他。它从不需要孔子保佑他的语文、祖之冲保佑它的数学、老外保佑它的英语、麦哲伦保佑它的地理、马克思保佑它的政治、秦始皇保佑它的历史,因为它全都能够搞定。

它从不迷信。它不拜佛,不看风水、不看生辰八字、不哭天喊地求菩萨。它绝对信赖科学,但不跟随大众,它如果有自己的结论,一定会确认是否正确,并改变原本的想法。

你们知道它是谁吗?他就是高端大气上档次并且成为2026感动世界“最完美的一种生物”——别人家的孩子。

六年级:茹苡

精选读者点评

“别人家的孩子”写成科幻设定,真令人惊喜!通篇反讽藏得又深又俏,连“草稿纸没空隙”都透着荒诞劲儿,六年级能这样玩语言,老师边读边笑出声。

英语作文带翻译-my parents 我的父母

350字
主题:亲子关系、教育焦虑、成长韧性、文化语境、责任意识、独立人格

parents love their children by nature, where chinese mothers and fathers are no e_ceptions. chinese parents tend to dote on their children because each family is allowed to have only one kid due to birth control. they place too much hope on the treasured child that if he wants the star, they might even climb to pick it. for self-centered, the spoiled children depend on their parents for everything. as a result, once confronted with harsh reality, they are more likely to yield to hardships and difficulties in life.

父母的爱的本质 ,在中国的母亲和父亲也不例外子女。中国父母往往对子女的宠爱,因为每个家庭只允许有一个孩子因节育。他们放置在珍惜的孩子,如果他 希望明星太大的希望,他们甚至可能攀升至选择它。对于以自我为中心,是被宠坏的孩子对一切都取决于他们的父母。因此,一旦与严酷的现 实面前,他们更可能产生的困难,在生活困难。

精选读者点评

这句“如果他想要星星,他们连天都敢爬”笔力饱满!后半段翻译腔太重,像把英文生硬掰成中文,试试用咱平时说话的节奏重写一遍!

大象的哀嚎 the whine of elephant

1800字
主题:生命尊严、教育边界、审美权利、文化互鉴、代际和解

大象的哀嚎 the whine of elephant

recently, a video about the training of elephant called people’s attention. the young people made this video want to call for people to protect this wild animal. a lot of people kill or train the animals for making money, but more people have realize the cruelty and make up their minds to protect animals. 最近,一个关于训练大象的视频引起了人们的注意。做这个视频的年轻人是为了呼吁人们保护野生动物。很多人为了赚钱而杀死或训练动物,不过越来越多的人意识到这些行为的残忍并下定决心保护动物。

in thailand, riding animals is one of the famous amusement projects. after the video revealing the cruelty of training elephants, more visitors feel guilty and they never e_pect the harm they do to these lovely creatures. people response to the act to refuse riding elephants, and the good thing is that some elephants are free to be trained, but visitors still could see them in the wild zoo. all they could do is to feed them. what a nice change. 在泰国,骑动物是一项的游乐项目。视频揭示了训练大象的残酷后,越来越多的游客感到内疚,因为他们从没想过会伤害到这些可爱的生物。人们开始拒绝骑马,所幸的是有些大象不用再接受训练,但游客仍然可以在野生动物园里观看它们。他们能做的就是给它们喂食。这是一个不错的改变。

animals are indispensable part of nature, if they disappear someday, then human being will not survive for long. whatever we play for fun, we need to think about the result. if we hurt animals, then we should stop. animals and human beings are friends. 动物是自然界不可或缺的一部分,如果有一天它们消失了,那么人类将无法生存太久。无论我们以什么为乐,都要思考所带来的后果。如果我们伤害了动物,那么我们就应该停止。动物和人类是朋友。

父母通常会选择做一些牺牲,这样孩子才可以拥有更好的未来。特别是中国的父母,他们牺牲很多,把所有的希望寄托在后代身上。但根据调查,他们的过度牺牲不会让孩子也不会让自己感到快乐。

for parents, they give up a lot of things that they want to do to reach the desire that their children to realize their dreams instead. so they have the high e_pectation for their children and once the children let them down, they will feel disappointed or just push a lot of pressure on them. for children, they keep their parents’ words and they are easy to feel guilty if they can fulfill parents’ e_pectation. 对于父母来说,他们放弃了很多自己想做的事情来希望自己的孩子能帮他们实现他们的梦想。所以他们对自己的小孩有很高的期望,一旦孩子们让他们失望了,他们就会觉得受挫或者给予孩子们更大的压力。对于孩子来说,他们铭记着父母的话语,如果他们无法满足父母的期望,他们也会很容易感到内疚。

chinese parents’ over sacrifice will not please anyone. both sides will feel depressed. being a parent doesn mean to give up their dreams, and everyone has the right to chase their dreams and should not give up. it is everybodys duty to set the good e_ample to the children and show the positive attitude to life. children should be given more freedom to develop their talents. 中国父母的牺牲并不会取悦任何人,反而让双方都感到沮丧。为人父母并不意味着要放弃自己的梦想,每个人都有权利去追逐自己的梦想,不放弃。给孩子树立好榜样,表现出积极的生活态度是每个父母的责任。孩子们应该被给予更多的自由来发展才能。

篇三中国校服受欢迎吗? is chinese uniform popular?

in china, students feel so bad about their uniforms, because these clothes look almost the same, which are large size and can’t reflect anything beautiful. but look at the uniforms in other countries, which look young and beautiful. however, the latest news reported that korean students liked chinese uniform. 韩国电视剧在中国很受欢迎,从中我们了解到他们在学校的生活和学生的穿着。女生都是穿裙子,而男生穿的也可以让他们看起来更帅。我们都很羡慕他们的校服。但当韩国学生看到了中国的校服后,他们表示了喜欢,因为它的大尺寸让人觉得舒服,也可以方便做运动。

chinese uniform have been disliked by students for a long time, especially with the popularity of foreign films and television programs. as students realize the difference and appreciate western styles, they advocate the school to make some changes. indeed, some schools have put forward the new styles and are popular by students. i think students have the right to make them look beautiful and energy. 中国的校服在很久之前就不受学生欢迎,特别是随着外国电影和电视节目越来越受欢迎后。学生意识到差异并欣赏西方风格,他们提议学校做出一些改变。事实上,有些学校已经更换了新的风格,也受到了学生的欢迎。我觉得学生有权让自己看起来美丽和充满活力。

精选读者点评

大象那段写得真有劲儿!“哀嚎”和“whine”用得准,视频引出话题也自然。客观来说后头突然跳到父母牺牲、校服……像三篇作文硬凑一块儿了,得理清主次,选一个深挖才有力气。