英国就业率

650字
主题:产业结构变迁、劳动力转移、职业规划、数据解读、未来展望

seeding employment in u.k.

英国就业率

as can be seen clearly from the graph, the difference in the numbers of people working in thethree major employment sectors in the u.k. economy in the early 1980s was relatively small, with about 4 million workers in engineering, 5 million in agriculture and 5.5 million in theservice industries.

however, the period 1980-1990 saw significant changes in the relative sizes of these threeemployment sectors. there was a rapid decline in employment in agriculture, with the numberof workers dropping by more than 80%. on the other, employment oppor tunities in the serviceindustries increased sharply, especially after 1986, whereas the engineering sectore_perienced a gradual but constant decline.

trends in the above graph clearly indicate that the service industries will continue to employthe largest number of people at least for the ne_t few years, while the engineering sector willneed somewhat fewer workers in the ne_t decade. on the whole, the total number ofemployment offered in these three sectors was much smaller than ten years before and theredoesn seem to be any likelihood for improvement in the near future. so, students who aregoing to graduate soon may need to prepare to seek employment elsewhere.

cet6六级作文结构分析:

·inte rpret the graph

·predict the trends

_ engineering

_ service industries

_ agriculture

cet6六级作文内容分析:

本文是图表作文, 适合于六级或考研。学习本文时应注意写图表作文的常用句子和词语以及过渡词, 这样才能使文章既连贯又有层次感。注意看文中的划线处。

cet6六级作文万能句型:

drop by...% 下降百分之

rapid decline 急剧下降

increases harply 明显上升

...doesn seem to be any likelihood for improvement 似乎没有可能改善

精选读者点评

这个图表描述得挺清楚,数据对比有层次,非常是“drop by more than 80%”这种表达用得准!唯独“ne_t”“sectore_perienced”这些拼写错误得圈出来改掉,六级作文,拼错一个词,阅卷老师心就咯噔一下。

美国就业率

450字
主题:经济转型、行业变迁、数据解读、职业选择、社会就业

美国就业率

seeding employment in u .k .

as can be seen clear ly f rom the gr aph , the differ ence in the number s of people working in the three major employment sector s in the u .k . economy in the early 1980s was r elatively small , with about 4 million worke rs in engineering , 5 million in agriculture and 5 .5 million in the se rvice indust ries .

however , the period 1980-1990 saw significant changes in the relative sizes of these th ree employment sector s . there was a r apid decline in employment in agricultur e, with the number of workers dropping by more than 80% . on the other , employment oppor tunities in the service indust ries in- creased sharply , especially after 1986 , wher eas the engineer - ing sector e_perienced a gr adual but constant decline .

trends in the above gr aph clear ly indicate that the se rvice indust ries will continue to employ the la rgest number of people at least for the ne_t few yea rs , while the engineering sector will need somewhat fewer workers in the ne_t decade . on the whole, the total number of employment offered in these three sector s was much smaller than ten years befor e and ther e does n’t seem to be any likelihood for improvement in the near future . so , students who a re going to graduate soon may need to prepar e to seek employment elsewhere .

精选读者点评

这篇作文题目写的是“美国就业率”,正文却全在讲英国?图表数据也全是uk的……标题和内容对不上号,得先统一对象啊!

英国就业率

450字
主题:经济转型、就业结构、数据变化、职业前瞻、社会趋势

seeding employment in u.k.

作文题目:英国就业率

as can be seen clearly from the graph, the difference in the numbers of people working in thethree major employment sectors in the u.k. economy in the early 1980s was relatively small, with about 4 million workers in engineering, 5 million in agriculture and 5.5 million in theservice industries.

however, the period 1980-1990 saw significant changes in the relative sizes of these threeemployment sectors. there was a rapid decline in employment in agriculture, with the numberof workers dropping by more than 80%. on the other, employment oppor tunities in the serviceindustries increased sharply, especially after 1986, whereas the engineering sectore_perienced a gradual but constant decline.

trends in the above graph clearly indicate that the service industries will continue to employthe largest number of people at least for the ne_t few years, while the engineering sector willneed somewhat fewer workers in the ne_t decade. on the whole, the total number ofemployment offered in these three sectors was much smaller than ten years before and theredoesn seem to be any likelihood for improvement in the near future. so, students who aregoing to graduate soon may need to prepare to seek employment elsewhere.

精选读者点评

这图表描述得挺清楚,数据变化脉络抓得准,尤其“农业下降超80%”“服务业1986年后猛增”这两处,写得干脆利落。但“ne_t”“sectore_perienced”这种拼写错误太扎眼了,考试要扣分的,建议誊抄前先用词典过一遍。