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重磅推荐2026年6月英语四六级425全程班!新东方专属资料免费配送!
it is obvious in the graphic/table that therate/number/amount of y has undergone dramaticchanges. it has gone up/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderably in recent years (as _ varies). at thepoint of _1, y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
what is the reason for this change? mainly thereare … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected inthe graphic/table. first of all, …(第一个原因). moreimportantly, …(第二个原因). most important of all, …(第三个原因).
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作文类型:应用文、说明文
适合年级:高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
重磅、 dramatic、considerable、obvious、important
【好词好句】
1. “重磅推荐2026年6月英语四六级425全程班!”
2. “it is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of y has undergone dramatic changes.”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "therate"应为"the rate"
• "as _ varies"应为"as x varies"
• "at thepoint of"应为"at the point of"
• "most important of all"应为"most importantly"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语结构清晰,体现语言工具性特征
✓ 数据描述句式规范,符合图表作文基本范式
✓ 逻辑连接词(first of all, more importantly, most important of all)层次分明
✓ 目标导向明确,突出课程价值与时间节点