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初中英语作文大全:my view on cheating in e_am
as students, we all want to get high scores in e_ams, which requires us trying our best to work. however, some students do not work hard in usual but they still e_pect good performance. therefore, some of them choose to cheat in e_ams. i don’t think it’s a good way. firstly, it’s not right to cheat, which is a personal quality problem. secondly, scores do not mean everything. although you get higher scores by cheating, you can’t get knowledge. finally, cheating will have a bad impact on you. teachers and students may look at in different views. therefore, i don’t agree to cheat in e_ams. we all should be honest.
作为学生,我们都想在考试中得到高分,这就要求我们要尽的努力去学习。但是,有的学生平时不努力学习,又想要高分,于是他们就在考试中作弊。我不认为这是一种好行为。首先,作弊是不对的,这关乎个人品质问题。其次,分数并不意味着一切。虽然通过作弊能获得更高的分数,但并没有获得知识。最后,作弊会对个人产生不好的影响,老师和同学可能会异样看待你。因此,我不赞成在考试中作弊,我们都应该诚实。
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作文类型:议论文、英语写作、双语作文
适合年级:初三、高一、高二
【成语使用】
异样看待、尽的努力
【形容词】
高、好、诚实、高分、不好的、个人
【好词好句】
1. as students, we all want to get high scores in e_ams, which requires us trying our best to work.
2. scores do not mean everything.
3. cheating will have a bad impact on you.
【修辞手法】
排比:firstly… secondly… finally…构成逻辑清晰的递进式结构
【文字校对】
• "e_am"应为"exam"
• "e_pect"应为"expect"
• "look at in different views"应为"look at you in different ways"
• "尽的努力"应为"最大的努力"
【写作亮点】
✓ 观点鲜明,立场坚定,贯穿全文
✓ 中英双语对照,体现语言学习意识
✓ 采用“首先、其次、最后”逻辑链,层次分明
✓ 结尾呼吁诚实,升华主题自然有力