英语作文九年级

【导语】英语作文九年级,观点鲜明,开篇即亮明立场,对比突出读书之贵,结构清晰,以“朋友”“老师”“价值判断”层层递进展开论述。

英语作文九年级

作文范文

主题: 阅读意义、精神财富、人格塑造、明是非、重积累

英语作文九年级

people often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.but i dont think so. in my opinion, to read books is more valuable than anything else.

the old saying “to open a book is always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book.

books are our friends. they introduce us different kinds of knowledge. they lead us down the road to success.

books are our teachers. they teach us troth, science, literature, and philosophy of life. besides, they increase our knowledge, enlarge our e_perience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.

books tell us what is good and what is evil. and only books can tell the good from the bad.

therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students.

精选读者点评

开头这句“people often say… but i don’t think so”真有股子少年气!敢质疑,还带点小倔劲儿,比满篇套话强多了。值得注意的是“to read books is more valuable than anything else”这句主谓不搭,书是东西,读书是动作,价值主体得拎清呀。

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:议论文、读书类作文

适合年级:初三、高一

【成语使用】

开卷有益

【形容词】

宝贵、不同、成功、善良、邪恶、年轻

【好词好句】

1. “to open a book is always helpful”

2. books are our friends.

3. they lead us down the road to success.

【修辞手法】

比喻:将书籍比作“friends”和“teachers”,赋予其人格化特征,强化亲近感与信赖感

引用:“to open a book is always helpful”

排比:books are our friends. they…;books are our teachers. they…;besides, they increase…enlarge…strengthen…

【文字校对】

• "troth"应为"truth"

• "e_perience"应为"experience"

【写作亮点】

✓ 观点鲜明,开篇即亮明立场,对比突出读书之贵

✓ 结构清晰,以“朋友”“老师”“价值判断”层层递进展开论述

✓ 语言简洁有力,多用短句增强节奏感与说服力

✓ 中英结合自然,体现九年级学生双语表达意识

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