
✎作文范文
great changes have taken place in my hometown. in the past, people live in a low house. farmer planted crops with the help of animals. they worked very hard. students had to study in very old school. the environment was very bad. now things have changes. people are living in tall buildings. people plant crops with the help of machines which can save lots of work. students can study in a modern school. what a good life!
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型:记叙文、说明文
适合年级:初三、高一
【成语使用】
【形容词】
低、老、坏、高、现代、好
【好词好句】
1. great changes have taken place in my hometown.
2. people plant crops with the help of machines which can save lots of work.
3. what a good life!
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "live"应为"lived"
• "farmer"应为"farmers"
• "changes"应为"changed"
• "a low house"应为"low houses"
• "very old school"应为"very old schools"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以今昔对比结构清晰呈现家乡变迁
✓ 选用具体生活场景增强画面感
✓ 结尾感叹句自然流露情感
✓ 主谓一致与动词时态意识初显
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