我的凶老爸

450字
主题:父爱、误解、成长、温情、代际、真实

我的“凶”老爸

红花坡小学 六(二)班 欧阳晴

一谈到我的老爸啊,在我眼里只有一个字,那就是凶。每当看到老爸瞪着眼,抿着嘴时,我就知道他又要使出他的“教女秘方”——打人了!每当这时,我的心就像一只小兔子在乱蹦乱跳,因为我总有一种不祥的预感,这时我就会闭上眼睛,把身子一缩,随后只听“啪”的一声,我挨打了!

他有些恼时,说出的每一句话都会让我感到毛骨悚然,有时真想离他远远的,可是不敢。因为我怕我一跑,老爸就会追上我,使出他的“如来神掌”向我挥来,打得我身是红红的。说实话,老爸的表情确实很可怕,就像要吃了我似的,特别是他的那双眼睛。

老爸很容易生气,在细节上几乎不能出点差错。特别在我驼背写作业时,你就会瞪着眼睛望着我,然后吼道:“欧阳晴呐,写作业驼着个背,还离作业本这么近,你以后还不成瞎子!”他看我无动于衷,就到老妈那儿告状去了,他没想到,当老妈看了我的写作姿势后,反把他讲了一顿。

这就是我的老爸,虽然“凶”,但是很关心我的老爸,口是心非的老爸,曾几次说要把我赶出家门,但心里不是这样想的老爸。

精选读者点评

这“凶”字用得妙!后头全是少年气足的画面,瞪眼、抿嘴、小兔子、如来神掌……你把怕写成了戏,还带点滑稽味儿。结尾那句“口是心非”真直击心灵,像悄悄掀开老爸硬壳,露出里头软乎乎的光。

我最熟悉的一个人

300字
主题:手足之情、童真童趣、日常温情、成长陪伴

我的日常生活中,有许多熟悉的人。其中也要算我的弟弟。

我的弟弟今年11岁了,长得又瘦又高,说起话来没完没了。弟弟的性格特别好,他每天像个活泼的小神仙。

弟弟平时爱在我的面前捣乱。有一次,他买了很多气球,这些气球是专门来吓人的。当我在睡觉的时候,他就用这些气球来吵醒我,还把家里弄得霹雳般般的。还有一次,他把水装在气球里面,拿去玩,当他玩过瘾的时候,就把这个气球给我,我接了过去,没想到嘭的一声,气球破了,里面的水不断地流出来,我瞅了弟弟一眼,只见弟弟正在哈哈大笑。弟弟就是这样一个人,我又能拿他怎么样呢?

弟弟虽然喜欢在我面前捣蛋,但我从不怪他,因为他的已成了我的调节剂了0

六年级:1743779329

精选读者点评

“又瘦又高”“小神仙”,这俩词有生命力!后头气球那段要是再加半句你抹脸甩水的动作,独具匠心。

六年级英语作文范文

350字
主题:父爱、敬业、榜样、陪伴、成长、奉献

六年级英语作文范文

hi, my name is cindy. i have a good father. i like him very much.

my father is a policeman. he is tall and strong. he looks very cool in the black police uniform. he works in the police station and he is very busy every day. he likes helping people. so he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. when he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. he is a good policeman. and many people like him very much, too. they often say: “mr li, you are a good policeman. we like you very much.” but my father always has a point: helping people is his duty.

my father likes reading books very much. because he thinks: a good book is a good friend. so he reads books after work every day. sometimes he plays games with me. we are very happy. i like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.

this is my father. he is a good father. i like my father very much! my dear friends, do you have a good father, too?

精选读者点评

这篇作文真像一杯温热的蜂蜜水,甜得自然,暖得果然!“他不仅是爸爸,还是我的好朋友”这句狠狠触动心弦,比范文里那些套话灵动多了。值得注意的是“motor cycle”少了个c,“in the trouble”改成“in trouble”更地道哦~