有趣的事

250字
主题:亲子互动、生活趣事、时间观念、童年记忆

today, there was an interesting thing in my house. my father got the bed at five oclock in the morning. up after washing for a while clothes, after washing a look at the table also fifteen minutes si_ points. he told me to get up, i do not get up, he said i was a small lazy. wait for me to get up and watch the table only five five. it was my fathers wrong table.

今天,在我家发生了一件有趣的事。早上爸爸五点钟就起的床。起来后洗了一会衣服,洗完后一看表还差十五分钟六点。他就叫我起床,我不起床,他就说我是小懒猪。等我起床一看表才五点五分。原来是爸爸看错表了。

精选读者点评

小懒猪这词儿灵气十足!爸爸急吼吼看错表,你躺被窝里偷着乐的样子我都看见了,结尾那句“原来是爸爸看错表了”,平平淡淡,反而把全家的笑全兜住了。

小学二年级经典英语作文-快乐的时刻 the happy moment

250字
主题:成长感悟、亲子关系、自我认同、青春初体验

last night, i went to see the movie with my friends. it was a cartoon movie, my friends and i were immerged into the story. it was the first time for me to go out at night, because my parents never let me do that before. now they think i have grown up and can protect myself, so they allow me to go out at night. it is such a happy moment for me.

昨晚,我和朋友们出去看电影。那是一部卡通电影,我的朋友们和我沉浸在故事里。这是我第一次在晚上外出,因为我的父母从来不允许我这样做。现在他们觉得我已经长大了,能够保护自己,所以他们允许我晚上出去。那对于我来说是一个快乐的时刻。

精选读者点评

开头中英混用有点跳,建议统一语言;“immerged”拼错了,是“immersed”哦!后半段中文写得挺自然,尤为是“他们觉得我已经长大了”这句,有生活味儿。

北京-小学二年级英语作文带翻译

300字
主题:家国情怀、城市记忆、文化认同、历史传承

i’dlike to go to a beautiful place. i think it would be beijing. beijing is notonly our capital city, but also a famous city with long history and wonderfulculture. beijing is also china’s political and cultural center. there’re manyold places of great interest, such as the great wall, the summer palace, theforbidden city, the temple of heaven, and tiananmen square. once you see tiananmensquare, you will think of beijing. it has been the symbol of beijing since1949.

我想去一个美丽的地方。我觉得那应该是北京。北京不仅仅是我们的首都,也是有着悠久的历史和精彩地文化的城市。北京也是中国的政治和文化中心。有很多古迹,比如,长城,颐和园,紫禁城,天坛,天安门广场。只要你看到天安门广场,你就会想起北京。自从1949年起它就是北京的象征了。

精选读者点评

北京真棒!你把天安门广场写得相当有分量,“一看见就想起北京”,这句话像小锤子,咚一下敲进人心里。客观来说“精彩地文化”,“地”字用错了,是“的”哦,下次留个心眼儿~

二年级英语作文-做家务do the housework

200字
主题:亲情、成长、责任、劳动教育、家庭温暖

i live with my parents. my mother is a teacher, my father is an engineer. they work very hard. so i often help them to do the housework. i wash the clothes, mop the floor, take out the trash, and water the plants. my parents are very happy, they say i have grown up.

我跟我的父母一起住。我的妈妈是一名老师,我的爸爸是一名工程师。他们工作非常辛苦。所以我经常帮助他们做家务。我洗衣服、拖地板、倒垃圾,还给植物浇水。我的父母非常高兴,他们说我已经长大了。

精选读者点评

这个“水”字用得妙!洗衣服、拖地、倒垃圾都带水,偏又加个“浇花”,水意全活了。后半句“他们说我已经长大了”太实,试试把“说”字抹掉?让爸妈的笑纹自己说话。

我的同学my classmates

550字
主题:同学情谊、个性魅力、友善包容、成长观察

i have many friends in my class.there are 45 students in my classroom. they are interesting and lovely. i would like to introduce some of them. hellen is very cute. shes also kind to everyone and shes very enthusiastic.

shes always ready to help everyone, but she is forgetful. she always forgets to bring her school things, such as pens, ruler,te_tboos and so on. but our teachers always forgive her. robert is the most talkative boy in our class. his nickname is “chatterbo_.” he has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh sweet is a quiet student.

she is good at every subject but she never shows off. ken is a very tall boy. he plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. he often says, “playing basketball is good for your health. how about your classmates? do you like them? try to admire your classmates. you will be happier.

我班有很多朋友,我的教室里有45个学生。他们是有趣和可爱的。我想介绍一些。海伦很可爱。她对每个人都很亲切,她很热情。

她总是乐于助人,但她很健忘。她总是忘了把她的学校的事情,比如钢笔,尺子,教材等。但我们的老师总是原谅她。罗伯特是我们班最健谈的男孩。他的昵称是“话匣子”。他有一个伟大的的幽默感,他总是让我笑的甜蜜是一个安静的学生。

她很擅长每一门学科,但她从不炫耀。肯是个很高的男孩。他打篮球很好,他在我们的学校队。他常说:“打篮球对你的健康有好处。你的同学怎么样?你喜欢他们吗?试着欣赏你的同学。你会更快乐。

精选读者点评

海伦忘带文具那句真立体,连“教材”都拼错成te_tboos,反而显出孩子气来,但后半段突然冒出来“try to admire your classmates”,像老师塞进去的说教,和前面断了气。

小学二年级英语作文及翻译

250字
主题:安全教育、亲子沟通、儿童成长、自我保护

as a child, when people give me the things to play or eat, i will be very happy and then accept them. but recently, as there are so much news about the children being cheated, my mother starts to worry about me, she tells me that i should not accept the strangers’ things, or i will be hurt. i listen to her words and i take care of myself carefully.

作为一个孩子,当人们给予我玩的和吃的东西的时候,我会很开心,然后接受了这些东西。但是最近,由于有很多关于孩子被骗的新闻,妈妈开始担心我,她告诉我不能接受陌生人的东西,不然就会受到伤害。我听了她的话,仔细照顾自己。

精选读者点评

娃把“陌生人给糖”这事儿写得像刚放学路上跟妈妈聊完天,真!话说回来“i will be very happy and then accept them”这句,英语里“then”太急了,中文加个“立马”“一把抓过来”就活了。

人山人海

250字
主题:节日生活、童年乐趣、人际交往、城市节庆

in the first day of this year, i wake up early in the morning, i am so e_cited that i have a lot of plans. i go out to find my friends, then we go to the street, but there are so many people, we barely to move on. we change our plan, we go to the park, still a lot of people there. the first day is really lively, all the people go out for fun.

在新年的第一天,我早上起得很早,我很兴奋,因为我有很多计划。我走出去找朋友,我们去了街上,但是有很多人,我们几乎无法前进。我们改变了计划,去到公园,仍然有很多人 在那里。第一天确实很热闹,所有的人都出来寻找乐子。

精选读者点评

“excited”拼成“e_cited”,还留着下划线呢!就是“ barely to move on”这句,倒是把人挤得挪不动脚的感觉赋予了生命,下次试试“脚不沾地往前拱”呀!