什么是模范学生

650字
主题:榜样力量、全面发展、知行合一、道德修养、青春担当

什么是模范学生 what makes a model student

the schools and teachers always emphasis the we should be a model student. but what is the definition of model student? this is a question that worth thinking about.

学校和老师都会强调学生们应该当个模范学生。但是什么是模范学生呢?这个问题值得思考。

we all believe that a model student is someone that dose everything so well that others would follow it, which means he should take lead in everything we do. first of all, he will plan everything perfectly then do the things according to the plans. he always can find a balance between study and paly. he never leave today’s homework to tomorrow. second, he will listen very carefully to what the teachers say and help others with their homeworks. he has a high standard of morality and always think about others feeling. he is so e_cellent that he can always get high marks on his e_aminations. last but not least, he should take part in every activity. such as football, singing and so on. he is not only good at study, but also good at team work cooperations.

我们相信一个模范学生就是可以把每件事情都做得很好,成为其他人榜样的人。首先,他会完美的计划每一件事,并按照计划去做事情。他总能在学习和娱乐中找到平衡。他不会把今日的作业留到明天去做。其次,他会认真听取老师的话并帮助其他同学做功课。他自身的道德标准很高,总是为他人着想。在考试中他总是取得高分。最后,他会参加每项活动。例如足球、唱歌等等。他不仅学习厉害,团队合作也很厉害。

being a model student is not that easy. it takes determination and efforts. if we want to be model students, we should work really hard on it.

要当模范学生不是那么的容易的。这需要决心和努力。如果我们想当模范学生,那么我们就要为之努力。

精选读者点评

这个“模范学生”写得挺着实!尤其喜欢你中英夹杂的真诚劲儿,像在跟老师聊天,不是背范文。但是“e_cellent”“e_aminations”漏了字母,下次写完顺手检查一遍?

a good plan 一个好计划

600字
主题:自我管理、学习方法、人生规划、主动意识、持续进步

now i am a middle school student, and i have some e_perience on study. i think a good plan is the most important.

in the middle school, there are a lot of things to do every day. so you must have a plan to help you do all the things.

first, a plan can help you save much time. it makes you know which must be done first and which can be done second. it makes you very clear in doing things.

second, a plan can help you do things better. a good order of doing things makes you happier and rela_ed. you can do things quickly and happily and you will be interested in everything you do and want to do more.

third, all kinds of small plans will help you know how to make a big plan a life study plan. so if you want to make your life better and better, you should plan all the things you will do, and at last make a good plan for your life.

一个好计划

我是一名中学生,我在学习上有一定的经验。我认为一个好的计划是最重要的。

在中学,每一天有很多事情要做。所以你必须要有一个计划来帮助你计划做所有的事情。

首先,一个计划可以帮你节省很多时间。它让你知道什么是必须要做的,什么是可以待会做的。这让你很清楚的知道自己要做的事。

第二,一个计划可以帮助你做的更好。一个好的做事情的顺序能让你更加快乐和放松。你可以很快地做完事,你将对你所做的一切和想做的事情更感兴趣。

第三,各种小的计划将帮助你知道如何做一个大计划,一个终生的学习计划。所以,如果你想让你的生活过得更好,你应该计划所有的事情,你会做什么,最后为你的生活做出一个很好的计划。

精选读者点评

这个“计划”写得真确实!着实是“先做啥、后做啥”那句,像你课间抓起作业本就划重点的样子。倒是第二段“计划所有的事情,你会做什么”这句读着绕,是笔误?

开学

500字
主题:新学期、人际联结、生活分享、共同成长

开学 term begins

after a long holiday, today is the first day of the new term. i get up early and then go to school. i go to the teacher’s office first to register. and then i go to my classroom. there are not many classmates in it. some of them do not arrive. we talk in our classroom, sharing our e_periences in holiday. then, some other students arrive gradually. at night, we have a class meeting which topic is my holiday. all of us share our interesting things during holiday. some stay at home and some have a trip. generally speaking, most of us have a good vacation. my classmates build deep relationship with each other. we are friends rather than classmates. i hope we can study together happily and help each other.

经过一个长假,今天是新学期的第一天。早上我早早就起床了,然后上学。我先去老师的办公室注册,之后回到教室去,里面还没有几个同学,有一部分同学还没到。我们在教室里聊天,分享假期的经历。期间,有一些同学陆陆续续也到了。晚上,我们在教室开了个班会,主题为“我的假期”。我们大家都互相分享了假期里的趣事。有的同学呆在家里,有的则去旅游了。总的来说,我们大部分都度过了一个美好的假期。我们同学之间建立了深厚的感情,我们更像朋友而不仅仅是同学。我希望我们能一起快乐地学习,互相帮助。

精选读者点评

这个“i get up early and then go to school”写得真顺溜!后面却突然冒出个“e_periences”,是键盘打滑了?还有“build deep relationship”,咱们平时说“become close friends”多自然啊,别硬套大词儿。

胜利的欲望my desire to win

250字
主题:拼搏精神、自我突破、青春成长、体育育人

last week, our school was holding the sport meeting, i felt so e_cited, because i took part in the 800 meter race. when i heard the shot voice, i started to run, at first, i kept the uniform space, i planned to run quickly in the last 200 meter. but i felt so tired, i wanted to give up, then my desire to win made me stick to the end. i am so proud of myself.

上周,我们学校举行了校运会,我感到很激动,因为我参加了800米竞跑。当我听到开跑声音的时候,我开始跑,刚开始,我保持匀速,我计划在最后200米快速跑。但是我感到很累,想要放弃,然后我的求胜欲望使我坚持到了最后。我为自己感到自豪。

精选读者点评

这个“匀速—冲刺”的节奏感,写得真像自己在喘气!最后一句“我为自己感到自豪”太实诚了,比喊口号有力多了。然而“开跑声音”听着怪怪的,枪声?发令枪?下次试试换一个词。