✎作文范文
happy summer
this summer, i move to a new city with my parents, and i transfer to a new school. i used to live in the countryside, so my new life is so different from before. the school is a little far from my home, so i go to school by bus. after school, i have many activities in school. classmates are friendly to me. i learn english now. it’s so interesting that i like it very much. besides, life in city is different. there are many interesting places to go. at weekends, my parents take me outside. we go to the park, the zoo or go shopping. but we are not so familiar with our neighbors. i think we should build good relationship with them.
作文翻译：
快乐的夏天
这个夏天，我和爸爸妈妈搬到了一个新的城市生活，我也转到了新的学校上学。以前，我住在乡下，所以我现在的生活和以前有很大不同。学校离我的家稍远，所以我要坐公交车去上学。课后，我在学校有很多活动。同学们对我也很友好。现在我开始学英语了，这门课程很有趣，我很喜欢。另外，在城市里的生活也很不一样，有很多好玩的地方可以去。周末，我的爸爸妈妈常常带我出去。我们去公园、动物园，或者去购物。但是我们和邻居们不是很熟悉，我觉得我们应该建立良好的关系。
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作文类型：记叙文、写人叙事
适合年级：小学五年级、六年级、初中一年级
【形容词】
new、different、friendly、interesting、far、little、good
【好词好句】
1. “this summer, i move to a new city with my parents, and i transfer to a new school.”
2. “it’s so interesting that i like it very much.”
3. “but we are not so familiar with our neighbors. i think we should build good relationship with them.”
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "move"应为"moved"
• "transfer"应为"transferred"
• "i learn english now"应为"i am learning english now"
• "build good relationship"应为"build good relationships"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以真实生活经历为素材，情感自然真挚
✓ 时间线索清晰，从搬家、入学到周末活动层层展开
✓ 中英文双语呈现，体现跨文化表达意识
✓ 结尾关注邻里关系，展现社会性思考萌芽
