✎作文范文
模板1： what is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above indicates that in recent years, more and more people pay attention to _________. the number of those who _________ has increased ________, and furthermore,____________. there are two factors responsible for the changes. in the first place,_________. moreover,__________. yet, it is noticeable that __________. from the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that__________. it is possible that in the future, the tendency will__________.
模板2： according to the chart / graph / diagram / table, we clearly learn that _________. as early as _________,___________. then,_________. last,__________. in contrast, by _________,__________. there are many reasons accounting for _________. firstly, _________.secondly,__________. finally,_________. as a result,_________. as far as i am concerned,_________. for one thing,__________. for another,________. in brief, i hold that__________.
模板3： as is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above, __________ has charged drastically in the past _________. while ___________,now the percentage of__________ is __________. meanwhile, the number of _________ has soared up to ________. there are mainly two possible reasons contributing to the rapid changes. the first is that _________. secondly,__________. in my point of view, the changes have a great influence on _________. at the same time,_______. to sum up ,_________.
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作文类型：应用文、说明文、议论文
适合年级：高中一年级、高中二年级、高中三年级
【成语使用】
越来越多、 drastically、in contrast、as far as、in brief
【形容词】
recent、clearly、early、drastic、rapid、great、brief
【好词好句】
1. what is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above indicates that in recent years, more and more people pay attention to _________.
2. there are two factors responsible for the changes. in the first place,_________. moreover,__________.
3. as is shown in the chart / graph / diagram / table above, __________ has charged drastically in the past _________.
【修辞手法】
引用：[as far as i am concerned、in brief]
排比：[firstly, _________.secondly,__________. finally,_________.]
【文字校对】
• "charged"应为"changed"
• "as early as _________,___________."句式结构不完整，缺少主谓宾成分
• "it is possible that in the future, the tendency will__________."中下划线处未填充，属模板残留
【写作亮点】
✓ 框架清晰，具备典型图表作文的逻辑推进层次
✓ 连接词丰富，体现较强的语篇衔接意识
✓ 句式结构多样，包含主从复合句、并列句与插入结构
✓ 主题聚焦明确，始终围绕数据变化及其成因展开
