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although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. in order to protect them,something must be done.
尽管世界发展得更快,更好,地球上的资源越来越少。为了保护它们,必须做些什么。
save water. water is the source of life. no water, no life. so its very important for us to do so.not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.
节约用水。水是生命之源。没有水,就没有生命。所以,我们这样做是非常重要的。我们不仅要保护饮用水和停止污染,而且充分利用它。
save electricity. it is crucial. we can imagine what the life will be like without it. everyone should do his best to save electricity. don forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.
节约用电。这是至关重要的。我们无法想象的生活就会像没有它。每个人都应该尽自己的努力节约用电。不要忘记关灯或其他当我们完成工作的电机。
save forests. they are useful .please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. make our world a green one to live in.
拯救森林。他们是有用的。请停止切割下来,用再生纸代替。使我们的世界成为一个绿色的生活。 recycle useful rubbish. plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans,paper, bottles, and so on. we can save resources in this way.
回收有用的垃圾。大量的垃圾可以回收罐一样,纸,瓶,等。我们以这种方式可以节省资源。
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作文类型:说明文、倡议书、双语作文
适合年级:初二、初三、高一
【成语使用】
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【形容词】
重要、 crucial、绿色、有用、再生、充足
【好词好句】
1. water is the source of life.
2. no water, no life.
3. make our world a green one to live in.
【修辞手法】
比喻:water is the source of life,将水比作生命之源,凸显其根本性与不可替代性
【文字校对】
• "don forget"应为"don't forget"
• "stop cutting them down"后句号缺失
• "please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead."中"them"指代不清(前文为forests,后文用"cutting down"搭配不当,宜为"cutting trees down")
• "the life will be like without it"语序错误,应为"what life will be like without it"
• "motor"误作"machines","electric machines"搭配生硬,宜为"electrical appliances"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英对照结构清晰,便于理解与学习
✓ 每段以祈使句开头(save water. save electricity.),增强号召力与节奏感
✓ 核心观点简洁有力,如“no water, no life”凝练深刻
✓ 逻辑递进自然,从水、电、森林到垃圾回收,覆盖资源保护主要维度