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保护自然环境英语作文
now, our side of the car constant more up, the environment also increasingly worse! that the air around us there are many harmful substances. therefore, we want to sue around things start to do. for e_ample, we can go to school by bike or walk, it can e_ercise. if you have time can use less elevator, many climb stairs. we can not only physical e_ercise, but also to protect our environment.
现在,我们身边的汽车不断的多了起来,环境也越来越糟糕!以至于我们周围的空气有很多有害物质.所以,我们要苏身边的小事做起.比如,我们可以骑自行车上学或者步行,这样还可以锻炼身体.有时间的话可以少用电梯,多爬楼梯.我们不仅能锻炼身体,也能保护我们的环境.
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作文类型：英语作文、环保主题作文、双语对照作文
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
糟糕、有害、周围、身边、更多
【好词好句】
1. now, our side of the car constant more up, the environment also increasingly worse!
2. therefore, we want to sue around things start to do.
3. we can not only physical e_ercise, but also to protect our environment.
4. 现在,我们身边的汽车不断的多了起来,环境也越来越糟糕!
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "sue"应为"start"
• "e_ample"应为"example"
• "e_ercise"应为"exercise"
• "constant more up"应为"constantly increasing"
• "physical e_ercise"应为"physically exercise"
【写作亮点】
✓ 中英双语对照结构清晰，便于理解与学习
✓ 紧扣环保主题，选取骑车、步行、爬楼梯等生活化切入点
✓ 语言质朴自然，体现初中生真实表达水平
✓ 中文部分语句通顺，逻辑连贯，具备基本的说理能力