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days and days past, im not a child any longer. but i still remember that halloween, 31st october 2026. that was saturday. i went to study english with an american girl named debby as usual. we had 5 students altogether. before that week, debby had already told us to learn something about halloween ourselves. on that day, debby spent an hour describing this american festival for us, such as “trick or cheat”, pumpkin and even, she took a pumpkin with her. first she took out a finished pumpkin lantern. that was really beautiful and ugly, we liked it so much. then she taught us how to make a pumpkin lantern by ourselves. we each held a small knife, learnt to cut and draw something on that pumpkin.
finally, we made it and put a short candle into it. that was truly happy. and the most surprising thing was that the lantern was a present for that days super student. who will that be? my god! that was me! do you know how e_cited i was then? i held it, jumping and shouting. that was the most unforgettable day to me. and i will not forget it, never!
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作文类型：记叙文、节日作文、英语学习随笔
适合年级：初二、初三、高一
【成语使用】
无
【形容词】
beautiful、ugly、short、unforgettable、surprising
【好词好句】
1. “days and days past, i’m not a child any longer.”
2. “that was really beautiful and ugly, we liked it so much.”
3. “do you know how e_cited i was then?”
4. “and i will not forget it, never!”
【修辞手法】
比喻：将南瓜灯形容为“really beautiful and ugly”，以矛盾修饰法营造童趣反差感
【文字校对】
• "e_cited"应为"excited"
• "trick or cheat"应为"trick or treat"
• "31st october 2026"应为"31st october 2026"（首字母大写、空格规范）
• "that days super student"应为"that day’s super student"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以时间倒叙开篇，自然引出回忆主线
✓ 中英夹杂的真实语言状态体现学习情境的真实性
✓ 情感递进清晰：从观察→参与→成功→惊喜→铭记
✓ 结尾短句“and i will not forget it, never!”强化感染力
