小学四年级英语作文

【导语】小学四年级英语作文,时态运用基本准确,能较规范使用be going to结构表达未来计划,场景切换自然,时间线索清晰(saturday / sunday / morning / afternoon)。

小学四年级英语作文

作文范文

主题: 童年生活、未来憧憬、家庭温情、自我表达、语言实践

i am going to have a busy weekend ! on saturday , im going to clean my room and do homework. then , in the evening , i m going to the supermaket with my mother . on saturday, im going to the bookstore on foot . im going to buy some books. then, im going to go home and read the new books. in the evening , im going to watch tv. that will be fun! what about you? what are you going to do on the weekend?我梦想的工作 my dream job

when i grow up, im going to do what i want to do. im going to move somewhere interesting. paris sounds like a city that i could that enjoy. there are lots of art e_hibitions there. i want to be an artist . so how am i going to do it? first, imgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some money. then im going to be a student at an art school in paris.

an unforgettable thing in the summer vacation 暑期难忘的一件事

it was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too. in the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind. in a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

精选读者点评

这个“巴黎”写得条理清楚!动词短语用得活,像“move somewhere interesting”“art exhibitions”,比课本里还地道。稍显“i could that enjoy”这句漏了词,顺手改一改哈~

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:英语作文、命题作文、记叙文

【成语使用】

【形容词】

sunny、happy、interesting、unforgettable、busy

【好词好句】

1. “paris sounds like a city that i could enjoy.”

2. “i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.”

3. “that will be fun!”

【修辞手法】

比喻:”i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.”,赋予花朵以人的神态,生动展现夏日生机与童趣

【文字校对】

• "supermaket"应为"supermarket"

• "e_hibitions"应为"exhibitions"

• "farther"应为"father"

• "unforgetive"应为"unforgettable"

• "imgoing"应为"i'm going"

• "tow"应为"two"

【写作亮点】

✓ 时态运用基本准确,能较规范使用be going to结构表达未来计划

✓ 场景切换自然,时间线索清晰(saturday / sunday / morning / afternoon)

✓ 情感真挚,通过“flowers smiling”等细节传递温暖亲情与生活趣味

✓ 主题明确,三篇短文分别聚焦周末安排、职业理想、暑期经历,体裁意识初显

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