✎作文范文
panda is one of the scarcest animals. people in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in china long ago. as the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. but at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.
nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in china is in sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.
小学三年级描写动物的英语作文
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作文类型：说明文、科普类作文
【成语使用】
【形容词】
scarcest、warmest、biggest、wild、enjoy
【好词好句】
1. panda is one of the scarcest animals.
2. as the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less.
3. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "scarcest"应为"rarest"
• "less"应为"fewer"
• "sichuan"应为"sichuan"
• "nature park"宜改为"panda reserve"或"panda base"更准确
【写作亮点】
✓ 逻辑清晰，按时间顺序呈现熊猫数量变化
✓ 主题明确，紧扣熊猫保护与现状展开
✓ 句式多样，包含主从复合句与结果状语从句
✓ 具有国际视野，体现熊猫作为中外友好使者的意义
