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i was not good at english.it was more than si_ years since i began to study english.at first i found it quite difficult．i couldn’t pronounce well,spell the words correctly or remember the rules of grammar.so i did not like english lesson.with the help of my teachers and classmates,i begin to like study english,and have made a little progress now．i believe i can learn english well in the near future.
我不擅长英语。这是六年多以来,我开始学习英语。起初我觉得很难办无法发音,正确拼写单词或记住语法规则。所以我不喜欢英语课。在老师和同学的帮助下,我开始喜欢学习英语,并取得了一点进步,我相信我能学好英语在不久的将来。
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作文类型：记叙文、应用文
【成语使用】
【形容词】
困难、正确、喜欢、进步、近
【好词好句】
1. “i was not good at english.”
2. “with the help of my teachers and classmates, i begin to like study english, and have made a little progress now.”
3. “i believe i can learn english well in the near future.”
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【文字校对】
• "si_ years"应为"six years"
• "begin"应为"began"
• "like study english"应为"like studying english"
• "it was more than si_ years since i began to study english."语序及表达不符合英语习惯，宜改为"i have been studying english for more than six years."
• "这是六年多以来,我开始学习英语。"存在语病，应为"我开始学英语已有六年多了。"
• "我觉得很难办无法发音"搭配不当，应为"我觉得很难，既无法准确发音"
【写作亮点】
✓ 以第一人称真实讲述英语学习心路历程
✓ 中英双语对照呈现，体现语言学习过程的双重表达意识
✓ 时间线索清晰：从“起初”到“现在”再到“将来”，结构自然
✓ 情感脉络完整：由畏难、抵触，到借助外力转变，最终建立信心
