✎作文范文
#高二#导语整理《高二英语优秀作文参考：我们的英语教师》，供高考考生参考，希望对考生有所帮助。
请根据下列提示，写题为“我们的英语教师”的和短文，字数在120个左右。
提示：
(1) 你们老师是位中年妇女。她教书二十多年，工作一贯认真，多次被评为模范教师。
(2) 她对你们既严又亲，经常鼓励你们多说多读。
(3) 她上课生动有趣，常给你们放幻灯，教你们唱英语歌，还辅导你们排演英语短剧。
(4) 她热爱你们，总是乐于帮助你们。她真是值得你们敬爱的好老师。
参考范文
our english teacher
our english teacher is a middle-aged woman. she has taught english for more than twenty years. she works very hard and has been a model teacher for many years.
she is kind to us. but she is rather strict with us. she always encourages us to speak and read more english. she often tells us that “practice makes perfect.”
she is very good at teaching and tries hard to make every lesson lively and interesting. she often gives us slide shows, teaches us english songs and helps us to put on short english plays.
she loves us and is always ready to help us. in fact, she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend. we all respect and love her.
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：记叙文、写人作文
适合年级：高一、高二、高三
【成语使用】
实践出真知、熟能生巧
【形容词】
中年、认真、严格、生动、有趣、亲切、优秀、模范
【好词好句】
1. she is kind to us. but she is rather strict with us.
2. she always encourages us to speak and read more english.
3. she tries hard to make every lesson lively and interesting.
4. she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.
【修辞手法】
引用：“practice makes perfect.”，化用英语谚语，强调语言学习规律
【文字校对】
• "and short english plays"应为"short english plays"
• "slide shows"应为"slide shows"（拼写正确，但首字母无需大写，属格式微调，非硬性错误，故不列）
• "middle-aged woman"中连字符使用规范，无需修改
【写作亮点】
✓ 人称统一，以第一人称复数“we/us”贯穿全文，增强真实感与亲和力
✓ 结构清晰，按外貌—敬业精神—师生关系—教学特色—情感升华逐层推进
✓ 中英双语自然融合，如“practice makes perfect”嵌入得当，体现学科特色
✓ 情感真挚，结尾“not only…but also…”句式凝练升华师生关系