✎作文范文
以“my subjects”为题，谈一谈你所学习的课程。
内容包括：（1）你最喜欢什么学科?
（2）什么学科最有趣?
（3）什么学科最枯燥?
（4）什么学科最难?
（5）什么学科最重要和有用处?
my subjects
i’m a middle school student. i’m learning many subjects in school. they are chinese, english, history, geography, math, music and p. e.
my favourite is english. i think english is the most interesting of all. i don’t like history or geography. they are the most boring subjects. i like math, too, though it is the most difficult. i think chinese is the most useful subject and p. e is the most important to our health.
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作文类型：英语写作、话题作文、说明文
适合年级：初中一年级、初中二年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
interesting、boring、difficult、useful、important
【好词好句】
1. “my favourite is english.”
2. “they are the most boring subjects.”
3. “though it is the most difficult.”
4. “chinese is the most useful subject”
【修辞手法】
排比：连用五个“the most 形容词”结构（most interesting / most boring / most difficult / most useful / most important），形成节奏鲜明的陈述式排比
【文字校对】
• "i’m"应为"i’m"
• "p. e."应为"p.e."
• "english"应为"english"
• "chinese"应为"chinese"
• "history"应为"history"
• "geography"应为"geography"
• "math"应为"math"
• "music"应为"music"
【写作亮点】
✓ 主题清晰，紧扣题目要求逐项回应五个问题
✓ 句式简洁规范，熟练运用最高级表达个人判断
✓ 逻辑自然，由喜好过渡到价值评价，层次分明
✓ 语言真实质朴，体现初中生口语化表达特点