我的偶像姚明

250字
主题:榜样力量、体育精神、家国情怀、成长激励

yao ming

我的偶像姚明

yao ming is a famous chinese baskeball player. he is so e_cellent that he joined in nba when he was 22 years old. he is the proud of our china. his e_cellent performance in the match always inspire many chinese. he looks straightforward and good-nature. and his height about 2.26 meters is as famouse as his skill in playing basketball. because of him, i love playing basketball. he is my idol..

姚明是中国的篮球运动员。他是如此的优秀,所以他在22岁的时候加入了。他是我们中国的骄傲。他在比赛中出色的表现一直激励着许多中国人。他看起来很憨厚。2.26米的身高与他的球技同样出名。因为他,我喜欢上打篮球。他是我的偶像。

精选读者点评

英文拼写错得有点多啊,“e_cellent”“baskeball”“nba”……还有“joined in nba”搭配不对,得补补基础语法和专有名词大小写!但是中英对照挺用心,看得出你真喜欢姚明。

we all have a good time

250字
主题:亲子时光、动物观察、童年记忆、中英表达

today, i go to the zoo with my parents. let’s see the pandas first and the pandas are very cute. i like them very much. then we go to see the tigers. the tigers are very lazy. i think the tigers are very scary. but my father likes them very much. dolphin is my mother’s favorite animal. she thinks dolphin is very smart and interesting. we all have a good time.

今天,我去动物园和我的父母。让我们先看看大熊猫和熊猫很可爱。我非常喜欢他们。然后我们去看老虎。老虎是非常懒惰。我认为老虎是非常可怕的。但是我的父亲喜欢得不得了。海豚是我妈妈最喜欢的动物。她认为海豚很聪明,有趣。我们每个人都有一个好时机。

精选读者点评

句子太“直”啦!像“the tigers are very lazy”直接翻成“老虎是着实懒惰”,缺了“的”字,读着硌牙。再翻一遍,加个“的”试试?

my dream

700字
主题:理想世界、多元共融、童心光芒、美好愿景、心灵自由

everybody have a dream, because we’re dreamers. in our heart, there is a colorful dream. sometimes the dream is perfect, sometimes it’s special, sometimes it’s sweet, sometimes it’s yummy.

in my dream, there are some children. i always play games with them and enjoy ourselves. there are so many candies, too. blue candies, pink candies, orange candies, apple candies…how delicious! in my dream, there is a special sky. in our world, the sky is blue, but the sky of my dream is pink, some angels are having fun there. in my dream, white bird can fly high, flowers can sing songs, frogs have a jump race, tomatoes are blue, potatoes are yellow, all the things are different.

in my dream, chinese people, korean people, japanese people, italian people, spanish people, american people and russian people are hand in hand. all the people smile for ever. it is a balanced world. .

in my dream, everything is wonderful, but our world isn’t like it. so we must like my dream, to let our world get more beautiful!

每个人都有一个梦想,因为我们是梦想家。在我们心中,有一个彩色的梦。有时梦想是完美的,有时它是特殊的,有时是甜的,有时它是好吃的。

在我的梦里,有一些孩子。我总是和他们玩游戏,玩游戏。有这么多的糖果,太。蓝色的糖果,粉红色的糖果,桔子的糖果,苹果的糖果……有多好吃!在我的梦里,有一个特别的天空。在我们的世界里,天空是蓝色的,但我的梦想是粉红色的天空,一些天使在那里玩的很开心。在我的梦里,白色的鸟能飞得很高,花能唱歌,青蛙有一个跳跃的比赛,西红柿是蓝色的,土豆是黄色的,所有的事情都是不同的。

在我的梦中,中国人,韩国人,日本人,意大利人,西班牙人,美国人和俄罗斯人都是手牵手的。所有的人都笑了。这是一个平衡的世界。

在我的梦里,一切都是美好的,但我们的世界却不一样。所以我们必须像我的梦想,让我们的世界变得更美好!

精选读者点评

这个“粉红天空 蓝番茄”的梦真敢想!天使和青蛙赛跑,花儿开演唱会,跃然纸上。只是“apple candies”写成“桔子的糖果”有点跳戏,下次试试用拼音或直接画个涂鸦啊!