快餐fast food

250字
主题:饮食选择、生活习惯、健康意识、现代节奏

nowadays, if we go on the street, we can find that fast food is everywhere, the reason why the fast food is so popular lies on that it is convenient. people can finish their meal quickly and spend more time to do work. fast food indeed saves people a lot of time, but it is not good for our health, we should not eat it often.

现在,如果我们走在街上,可以发现到处都有快餐,快餐流行的原因在于它方便。人们可以快速吃完他们的餐,花多点时间去工作。快餐确实可以节省人们很多的时间,但是那对我们的健康也不好,我们不应该常吃快餐。

精选读者点评

这句“快餐实打实可以节省人们很多的时间”写得挺确实是!但后半句“那对我们的健康也不好”里,“那”指代有点模糊,改成“它”更顺。还有,“常吃快餐”前面少了个“该”字,读着卡顿。

四年级英语作文带翻译-闹钟惹的祸

300字
主题:成长挫折、时间意识、责任意识、师生关系

today i was not happy, because i was late for school and be criticized by my teacher. it was the fault of my alarm clock. it was wrong this morning, but it never has been like this before. it didn’t work, so i woke up at 10:00 a.m. when i hurried to school, i have missed the morning class. because i didn’t listen to these classes, i didn’t know how to do the homework. it was really a sad day.

今天我很不开心,因为我上学迟到了,还被老师批评了。都是闹钟的错。今天早上闹钟坏了,但它之前从来没有这样过。闹钟没有响,所以我醒来的时候已经到了10点了,我急忙赶到学校,可惜已经错过了早上的课。因为没有听那些课,我都不知道怎么写家庭作业了。真是伤心的一天。

精选读者点评

闹钟“罢工”这事儿写得像活的一样!十分是“它之前从来没有这样过”这句,小委屈藏得真好,读着就想拍拍你肩膀。

小学四年级英语作文我的朋友

300字
主题:友情、家庭成员、校园生活、职业认知

小学四年级英语作文我的朋友

john is my good friend.

john is my good friend. he is twelve. he is english. we are in the same (同一个) school. we are not in the same class. his father mr black is a cook. he is forty-five. his mother is not a cook. she is a nurse. she is forty-two. john has a sister. her name is alice. she is twenty-one. she is a new teacher at our school.

约翰是我的好朋友

参考译文:约翰是我的好朋友。他12岁,我们在同一个学校。我们不在一个班级。他的爸爸布莱克先生是一位厨师。他今年45岁。他的吗吗不是厨师。是一位护士。她今年四十二岁。约翰还有一个姐姐。她的名字叫做爱丽丝。她今年21岁。她是一个新老师,在我们学校。

精选读者点评

句子基本通顺,人称代词“he”“she”用得挺准!但“his mother is not a cook. she is a nurse.”这句连着两个主谓宾,读着有点平,试试加个“but”?比如“his mother isn’t a cook, but she’s a nurse.”,读起来就活了。

小学四年级英语作文及翻译

400字
主题:亲情、童年、成长、欢乐、家庭、纯真

my little brother is two years old now,he is chubby and very cute,every people would can help to nip his bubbly face when seeing him.he has a pair of large liquid black eyes,a small nose and a small mouth.he like watch tv very much,especially children music channel,so he is a fans of music,he would claps his hands happily or dancing when listening the music.he also a food junkie.when someone eating,he would aways drool and stare at him or she.all in all,he is a delight in my family.

this is my little cute brother,i love my little brother.

我的弟弟现在两岁,他胖嘟嘟的,非常可爱,谁见了他都会忍不住捏一下他鼓鼓的小脸。他有一双水汪汪的黑色的大眼睛,小小的鼻子和一个小小的嘴巴。他非常喜欢看电视,特别是少儿音乐频道,所以他是个小音乐迷,当他听到音乐的时候,他就会高兴地拍拍手或者跟着音乐起舞。他也是个小吃货,当他看到有人吃东西的时候,他总会流口水并且盯着别人看。总之,他是我们家的开心果。

这就是我可爱的弟弟,我爱我的弟弟。

精选读者点评

“every people would can't help to nip his bubbly face”这句读着拗口,孩子写得挺如临其境感,但主谓搭配和动词形式得再捋捋,“people”是复数,“would can't help”也矛盾了,试试“everyone just can’t help…”哦!