my favorite season

250字
主题:童年乐趣、季节体验、家庭陪伴、自由时光

my favorite season

我最喜爱的季节

my favorite season is summer.

我最喜欢的季节是夏天。

there is a summer vacation in summer.

夏天有一个暑假。

i don go to school.

我不去学校。

its hot in summer,

夏天很热,

and i can eat ice-cream。

然后我可以吃冰淇淋。

sometimes i go to the beach with my parents. 有时我和我的父母一起去海滩。

sometimes i go to the swimming pool with my friends. 有时我和我的朋友一起去游泳池。

i usually visit many places in summer vacation. 我通常在暑假去许多地方游览。

so, i love summer best.

因此,我最喜欢夏天。

精选读者点评

夏天吃冰淇淋、泡泳池、逛海边,你把暑假过成了小太阳!话说回来“it's hot in summer”后面那个逗号,得换成句号哦~再翻翻课本里标点那页,练三遍就记牢啦!

动物园游 a visit to the zoo

500字
主题:童年趣事、家庭陪伴、探索体验、快乐成长、自然观察

on sunday morning, my parents took me to the zoo. we did not go there for a long time. last week, my classmates told me that the zoo added some funny entertainment facilities. i was very curious. so, i asked my parents to took me there and they promised to. we got there at 9 oclock. there were many people. most of them were parents and children. we first went to see the animal. i like parrots most. and then we saw the animal shows. elephants, tigers, lions and monkeys did wonderful shows for us. people were happy, especially the children. after that, we went to e_perienced the entertainment facilities. my mum was too scared to be with us. so, only my dad and i played. it was so e_citing, but i was a little dizzy. however, i was very happy. it was a great day.

星期天早上,我父母带我去动物园。我们很久没去那里了。上周,我同学告诉我动物园新增了一些好玩的娱乐设施。我很好奇,所以我叫我妈妈带我去,而且她答应了。我们9点就到那了。那人很多,大部分是家长和孩子。我们首先去观看动物。我最喜欢鹦鹉。接着我们看了动物表演。大象,老虎,狮子和猴子给我们表演了精彩的节目。人们都很高兴,特别是小孩子。之后,我们去体验了娱乐设施。我妈妈很怕,不敢跟我们一起。所以,只有我和爸爸玩。它很刺激,但是我有一点点头晕。但是,我还是很开心。这真是很棒的一天。

精选读者点评

“took me there”该用asked my parents to take me,动词不定式别漏to呀!还有e_perienced、e_citing,拼写小马虎啦~

五年级英语作文-我的家庭生活 my family life

250字
主题:亲情、成长、日常之美、温暖时光、童年记忆

i have a happy family, there are three people in my family, my father, my mother and i. i go to school from monday to friday, on the weekends, i will go out with my parents, they always take me to different restaurants, we will taste different food. at night, my mother will tell me a story, then i can have a good dream, i love my family life.

我有一个幸福的家庭,在我家,有三个人,我的爸爸,我的妈妈和我。星期一到星期五,我上学,周末,我会和我的爸爸妈妈出去,他们总是带我去不同的餐馆,品尝不同的食物。晚上,我的妈妈会给我讲故事,然后我就会做一个好梦,我喜欢我的家庭生活。

精选读者点评

句子太“平”啦!试试把“去餐馆”改成“钻进飘着糖醋排骨香的小店”,把“讲故事”换成“妈妈的声音像温温的蜂蜜水慢慢淌进耳朵”,文字要有温度,有味道,有声音!

planting day

300字
主题:劳动教育、生命体验、集体行动、自然亲近、成长感悟

today is planting day. our class have a meaningful activity. all of our classmates go to plant flowers outside the school gate. we got the flower seeding from others. we first cleaned the weeds and then dug small pits. after we put the seeds in the pits, we watering them. because of this activity, we realize that working is tired but happy. we decided to take care these flower seeds regularly. and we hope we can see the beautiful flowers quickly.

今天是植树节。我们班举行了一次有意义的活动。我们全班到校门口外种花。我们从别人那里得到花的种子。我们首先清除杂草,然后挖小坑。我们把种子放到坑里就给它们浇水。因为这次活动,我们意识到劳动虽然累但也开心。我们决定有规律地照顾这些花苗。我们也希望可以快点看到美丽的花朵。

精选读者点评

英文段里“have”“watering”这些动词时态得再捋捋,中文段里“花的种子”“花苗”混着用,种下去的是种子,刚发芽才叫苗哦,下次写完自己小声读一遍,耳朵比眼睛更早发现别扭的地方。

my busy weekend

400字
主题:家庭时光、日常计划、快乐生活、劳动实践、亲子陪伴

i am going to have a busy weekend. on saturday morning, i am going to climb mountains. after lunch , i am going to the supermarket with my parents. we want to buy some candies and milk. in the evening, i am going to watch tv with my father .that’s my happy time.

on sunday morning, i’m going to the bookstore by car. i want to buy a story- book. because i like reading. in the afternoon, my sister and i are going to visit my grandparents. we are going to clean their room together. we’re helpful. then, we’re .going home at 5p.m.

i will be very busy on the weekend, but i think i will be happy.

我将有一个繁忙的周末。星期六上午,我要去爬山。午饭后,我和我的父母去超市。我们要买一些糖果和牛奶。到了晚上,我和爸爸去看电视,那是我的快乐时光。

星期日上午,我去书店的汽车。我想买一本故事书。因为我喜欢读书。下午,我的姐姐和我将去看望我的祖父母。我们将一起打扫房间。我们很有帮助。然后,我们在5。回家。m.

周末我会很忙,但我想我会快乐的。

精选读者点评

爬山、逛超市、看电视,这周末真热闹!“那是我的快乐时光”写得更是自然,像小手突然攥住你手腕,把你拉进画面里。注意“去书店的汽车”是不是想说“坐汽车去书店”哦!

about me

400字
主题:成长、友谊、学习、家庭、爱好

hello! my name is li _iaotong. i’m a girl. i’m 13 years old. i’m 150 cm tall. i live in dong guan. i am a student. i’m in class 1, grade si_. i go to school on foot. on the weekends, i usually go to the park with my parents. i like listening to music and playing the piano. i like helping peoples, too.

i’m helpful. i often help my friends in the school. my best friend is guo yi_in. she is 13 years old too. she likes collecting stamps and riding a bike. we usually learn english and play together.

how about you? can you tell me something about you?

您好我的名字叫李小彤。我是一个女孩。我13岁。我150厘米高。我住在董关。我是学生我在1班,六年级。我步行去学校。周末,我通常和我的父母一起去公园。我喜欢听音乐和弹钢琴。我也喜欢帮助别人。

我很有帮助。我经常在学校帮我的朋友。我的朋友是郭益。她也13岁了。她喜欢集邮和骑自行车。我们经常一起学习英语,一起玩耍。

你呢?你能告诉我一些关于你的事吗?

精选读者点评

小彤同学,英文段落里“si_”“guo yi_in”这些下划线,是没打完还是故意留空?老师有点好奇,顺手帮你补细节周全“six”和“guo yilin”,但更想听听你自己的想法。

五年级优秀英语作文带翻译-my holiday 我的假期

650字
主题:童真幻想、科学启蒙、色彩世界、夏日奇遇

i’m going to the sun on my holiday. i will go there by a spaceship. i will take a big blue spaceship.

then i’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. so i put on the super-shirt. in the morning, i will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

at eight o’clock, i will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. super dog is white and black. super girl is very clever. super girl and super dog like to play with me. so i play with them for forty minutes. then i do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. after my home work, i will have my lunch. i will eat sun salad. i will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. i will have red juice, red fish and red rice. all the things are red. then i need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. so i will walk to the spaceship. i’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

this is a good holiday on the sun.

我要去太阳上度假。我将乘宇宙飞船去那里。我会带一个蓝色的宇宙飞船。 然后,我将驾驶飞船到太阳。太阳很热。所以我穿上了超级衬衫。在早上,我将有一些太阳汉堡为我的早餐。 八点,我会和我的朋友们在那里玩。他们是超级狗和超级女孩。超级狗是白色和黑色。超级女孩很聪明。超级女孩和超级狗喜欢玩我。所以我和他们玩了四十分钟。然后我做我的家庭作业,在我的小红房间里的一个小蓝色的桌子上。下班回家后,我会吃午饭。我会吃太阳沙拉。我会做一些红色的玩具熊给太阳宝宝。我将有红色的汁,红色的鱼和红色的米饭。所有的东西都是红色的。我需要大量的水在太阳上,因为太阳太热了。所以我会走到宇宙飞船。我将驾驶飞船到地球。 这是一个很好的假期。

精选读者点评

哇!太阳汉堡、红鱼红饭、超能狗和超能女孩……这脑洞炸得我笔尖都冒火星子了!美中不足“太阳太热”和“带水去”这点,咱悄悄想想:水到那儿是不是秒变蒸汽啊!

增肥

300字
主题:成长困惑、身体认知、家庭互动、自我期待、童年尊严

though there are many people want to lose weight, i want to put on weight. i am ten years old and my weight is about 20kg. the children around me all treat me as the small sister. i am already ten years old, but they treat me as a child. and sometimes i want to help my mother to clean the dishes, but she always rejects me because i too small to catch the desk. if i can put on some weight, everything will be different.

虽然很多人想减肥,但我却想增肥。我十岁,而我体重只有20公斤左右。我周围的小孩都把我当成小妹妹。我已经十岁了,但他们还是像小孩一样对我。有时我想帮妈妈洗碗,但她总是拒绝我,因为我太小了够不着桌子。如果我能够增肥点,应该就会不一样了吧。

精选读者点评

十岁20公斤确实是偏轻,但“够不着桌子”这个细节太真实了!后半段把体重和尊严悄悄连在一起,孩子心里有秤。

一只可爱的猫my pet

250字
主题:温情、责任、善良、归途、陪伴、童真

today, when i go home after school, i see a lovely cat on the road, it is white and small. i find the cat follow me all the way home, it may lose the way to home. so i ask people if they have lost a cat, but nobody says they have a cat. at last, an old woman tells me her cat is white and small, the cat rushes to women. it find its host.

今天,当我放学回家后,我在路上看到一只可爱的猫,它是白色的,有点小。我发现它一路上跟着我,它可能迷路了。因此我问人们是否有丢失猫,但是没有说养有猫。最后,一位老年妇女告诉我她的猫是白色,有点小的,猫冲向了妇女。它找到了它的主人。

精选读者点评

猫冲向老太太那句跃然纸上!白、小、冲,三个词全在动,画面一下就跳出来了。后面“它找到主人”改成“它扑进奶奶怀里”,试试?

我的同桌my deskmate

250字
主题:同学情、互助、温暖、成长、善意

i have a deskmate, her name is _iao li. we met each other when the semester began. _iao li is a nice girl, she helps me with many things. when i meet the difficulty in the homework, she will help me to solve it. when i am not feeling well, she will take care of me. _iao li is so kind to me, i am so thankful to her.

我有一个同桌,她的名字叫小丽。在开学的时候,我们就认识了彼此。小丽是一个很好的女孩,她在很多事情上都帮助我。当我在作业方面遇到困难时,她会帮助我解决。当我觉得不舒服时,她会照顾我。小丽待我如此友好,我很感激她。

精选读者点评

小丽帮你解题、照顾你,这些事写得真暖!然而“她帮助我解决”“她会照顾我”这类表达,换成“小丽凑过来看我卡在哪道题”“她摸摸我额头说‘你脸怎么这么烫’”,是不是更画面感十足感?试试看~