一次难忘的羽毛球比赛

800字
主题:合作、勇气、陪伴、快乐、成长、运动精神

“啦啦啦.....”我们唱着轻快的歌儿,欢笑着来到了四季青小学。今天,我们要在这里举行我们的亲子活动。

四季青小学的操场十分宽敞:金色的沙坑,颜色鲜艳的跑道,应有尽有的活动设施......大家欢笑着跑到了各地的活动区,开始了我们的自由活动,我和一些要好的女生在一起踢毽子、打羽毛球、做各种各样的游戏,玩的不亦乐乎。而一些男生们,就在打篮球,大家玩的大汗淋漓,各个同学的脸颊上都流下晶莹的汗珠,整个四季青小学的操场上充满着我们班同学的欢声笑语。

各种游戏都十分有趣,都能让同学们露出灿烂的笑容,但是,我最喜欢的却是女生们激烈的比赛——羽毛球赛。我是新手,不怎么会打球,于是我和沈楚还有实力超强的江老师一组,而对方是基础稳扎的李妍希和陈倩楠还有不怎么有运动神经的李慧敏一组。第一轮开始了,对羽毛球熟悉的李妍希发起了头炮,只见她身体一跃而上,球拍落下的那一瞬间,羽毛球就“哐当”一声掉到了地上,我明明就站在那颗球的旁边,却接不着,看来李妍希是知道我接不住球,故意往我这发的,我低下了头,江老师拍拍我的背,说:“不要紧,胜负还没分出来呢,不要气馁呀。”陈倩楠的发球也十分利索,难免会有失误,她打的球几乎都接不住。就这样,第一轮让对手轻松地赢了。第二轮,一向沈楚发的球,这次轮到我来发球了,我不管三七二十一,也一定要试一试,江老师和沈楚都在后头为我鼓气,那“加油加油”的呐喊声震撼了我的心灵。球扔起了,我攥着球拍,心砰砰直跳,一定要打好呀!我的双眼紧紧盯着扔起的球不放,好就是现在!“刷!”我的球拍随着手臂的挥动动了起来,“砰”地过了网,在强敌李妍希的脚下落了下来,“耶!我成功了!”我呐喊,蒋老师也微笑着看着我,说道:“最后一轮也要一口气冲呀!”对手也兴致勃勃,最终我们打成了平手。同学们结识了团队的力量,正是这种源源不断的力量才让我鼓足勇气去打上羽毛球的,这次羽毛球比赛让我终生难忘。

精选读者点评

“啦啦啦。”开头真像蹦跳着进校门!沙坑是金色的?这个颜色词用得俏皮又亮眼,比写“金灿灿”更耐嚼。后文汗珠“晶莹”稍熟,试试“在阳光里碎成小星星”。

六年级趣味运动会作文

650字
主题:团结、拼搏、快乐、成长、坚持、荣誉

我们全天都参加了趣味运动会,这一天我们很开心。

我们一进操场,听见喇叭在唱英华之歌,看见同学们,坐在了看台上,我无比兴奋,比赛正式开始了,比赛队员们在下面比赛,我们在台上喊加油,4乘一百米赛跑,这最激烈了,一个个队员们精神抖擞,开始了,我们无比激烈,第6跑道遥遥,每次第6跑道都是第一,我们喊着加油,他们坚持,4乘一百米赛跑,真是太精彩了。集体项目,我们占优势,是仰卧起坐,我们班是第一,我们真是太开心了,我们坚持,不到比赛结束,我们是不会停的,我做了34个,比以前进步了,我拼劲权利做了34个,下一回我一定做到40个以上,这一个集体项目,我们做的很开心,上午跳高比赛,我们班也跳过去了好几个,这我们是第二名。下午该集体项目跳绳了,我们拼尽权利跳了不少个,我跳了89个,这我们跳的很快,我也比以前有进步了,我们这个集体项目,也跳了不少个,不到比赛结束,我们是绝对不会停的,还有6年级的800米比赛,这个更是激烈,更是精彩,我们从没见过这个比赛,不管是谁,我们都会喊加油的,第一圈他们是很快的,到了第二圈,他们虽然没有力气了,但是他们还在坚持着,不到终点是绝对不会停的,我很佩服他们的精神,800米跑的女汉子,更是厉害了,一个个跑得很快,还有的并列第一,这个比赛真是精彩,比赛结束了,这一天也结束了,这一天我们过得很开心。

趣味运动会比的是团队力量,和个人力量,这一天我们过得很开心,我会记住这一天的,下一回我们会全力以赴的,争取每个项目都拿第一,我会加油的。

精选读者点评

这个“拼劲权利”写得真有意思!错字反而透出一股子使劲儿的憨劲儿,比“竭尽全力”还鲜活。再翻翻词典,“权利”和“全力”差着十万八千里呢,可你笔下那股子不服输的热乎气儿,老师一下就看见了。

世锦赛女排精神英语作文

400字
主题:拼搏、信念、传承、荣耀、坚持

女排精神英语作文

chinese women’s volleyball team once achieved great honor in the last century, their spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. but during the last decade, as the old volleyball players retired and the new ones were not stronger enough, the team met difficulty. while winning an important match announced their return.

last night, chinese women’s volleyball team had an very impotant match against brazil team in the rio olympic games. the hope to win was very very little, because brazil team was such strong, they were the champion of last two olympic games and chinese team only won one match for the last 18 records. what’s more, almost all the audiences supported brazil team.

it seemed to win the match was not possible for the chinese team, but the girls were very strong and insistented to fight for the last mimute. even they lost the first game, they never gave up. especially for the last two point, they were so brave and finally won the match.

this is the spirit of women’s volleyball team, we saw these girls fight for the last minute, they are the best team.

精选读者点评

开头那句“chinese women’s volleyball team once achieved great honor”真有劲儿!但“not stronger enough”得改,“not strong enough”才对哦~后面“very very little”也可爱过头啦,试试“slim”哦!

我们班的大力士

400字
主题:集体荣誉、同伴互助、成长印记、运动风采、榜样力量

我们班的“大力士”

我们班的刘同学获得保健章真是易如反掌!

别看他肥肥胖胖,但力气可不小,我们搬东西离不开他,甩长绳离不开他,重要的是拔河离不开他!

上学期拔河决赛,我们以年级第一脱颖而出,可真是少不了他。在我们四(4)比四(3)的时候,他为了我们,取得了连续两局都胜利的好成绩,第一回合先不说。第二回合时,同学个个都精疲力尽,我和刘宇这两个“主将”可没少出力,我“大将”都快不行了,“副将”刘宇却很默契,力气突然使大,我在同学们的“加油!加油!朱禹铖加油!加油!加油!刘宇加油!加油!加油!四(4)班加油”这个口号时,我和刘宇用尽全力,奋力一拽,把四(3)班的人都拽倒了,我们得到这拔河第一的奖状时,老师让我和刘宇去领奖,我们真是出了不少力气啊!我们拿到奖状,齐声大喝:“四(4)班胜利了!”边四肢乏力而倒……

甩长绳,他为我班获得第一名的好成绩。

评委们,这么好的同学怎能不让他得到保健章呢?

精选读者点评

刘同学力气大,拔河甩绳都顶用!但“肥肥胖胖”这个词有点伤人,换“壮实”“结实”更暖心哦~后半段喊加油太长啦,读着喘只是气,试试分段、加标点哦!

女排精神英文作文

400字
主题:奋斗、信念、荣耀、坚持、团结

女排精神英文作文

chinese women’s volleyball team once achieved great honor in the last century, their spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. but during the last decade, as the old volleyball players retired and the new ones were not stronger enough, the team met difficulty. while winning an important match announced their return.

last night, chinese women’s volleyball team had an very impotant match against brazil team in the rio olympic games. the hope to win was very very little, because brazil team was such strong, they were the champion of last two olympic games and chinese team only won one match for the last 18 records. what’s more, almost all the audiences supported brazil team.

it seemed to win the match was not possible for the chinese team, but the girls were very strong and insistented to fight for the last mimute. even they lost the first game, they never gave up. especially for the last two point, they were so brave and finally won the match.

this is the spirit of women’s volleyball team, we saw these girls fight for the last minute, they are the best team.

精选读者点评

“very very little”“mimute”都写进去了,错字和重复词像小刺儿扎在纸上,但读到“她们拼到最后一分钟”时,我手停住了,心跟着跳快了两拍。