非同寻常的过年

350字
主题:传承与变化、珍惜当下、时代印记、家庭记忆、文化反思

在上学期间终于盼到了寒假,在寒假期间终于盼到了过年。这一次,绝对是一个非同寻常的过年。

大年三十等于一年的结束,也是一年的开始。这个大年三十有一个十分明显的缺陷——鞭炮放的个数急剧增加,这使得许多城市已经达到了空气重度污染,所以我家没放鞭炮。

我的过年和爸爸的过年十分不一样。爸爸的过年对爸爸来说是十分有意义,因为平时没有新衣服穿,没好东西吃。而过年了是想要什么就有什么。我的过年几乎和平时一样,过年能穿新衣服,平时也能穿新衣服,这都是因为现在的物质生活不像以前那么单调了,我想我对过年的认识不够多,只知道玩游戏。爸爸小时候只在乎有新衣服穿有好东西吃,这就是我和爸爸两代人对过年认识的不同和差异。

过年的含义是各种各样的,现在全新的物质生活大家一定要珍惜!

精选读者点评

这个“终于盼到了”用得灵动自然,像小孩攥着日历数日子的劲儿,两个“终于”叠在一起,年味儿一下就冒出来了!后头写爸爸的新衣服那段,要是再加半句他摸衣角的手势或眼睛发亮的样子,就更活了。

如何处理亚健康的英语作文

150字
主题:健康危机、发展悖论、身心失衡、现代性反思

with the acceleration of global modernization, people are enjoying a constantly improved material life. at the same time we may gradually find ourselves confronted with the threat of sub-health, a state between health and disease.

one typical symptom of sub-health is continual fatigue; the victims always feels tired and suspicious of some disease, which, however, the active followers of material life yielded through their tense and hard work.

精选读者点评

开头这句“with the acceleration…”写得挺顺,但全文都是英文?作文要求用中文写啊!快翻到题目看看~

儿童节晚餐

450字
主题:感恩教育、阶层认知、亲子共育、简朴价值观、社会责任、成长启示

the day before yesterday was the childrens day. our city held an interesting activity, in which children and their parents played the rich and the poor. in the dinner, the rich could have delicious food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge. parents all hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. they hoped that their children could be taught a lesson from the dinner.

前天是儿童节。我们市举行了一项有趣的活动,活动中孩子们和他们的父母扮演富人和穷人。晚餐时,富人可以吃好吃的食物,但是穷人只可以吃面包和粥。父母都希望和孩子们吃穷人的晚餐。他们希望孩子能够从晚餐中受到教育。

now many people on earth don have enough food or clothes. every day only one half of the world could enjoy enough food. the activity was held to make the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich and also make the parents know that too much material life won always do good to the children.

如今,地球上很多人都没有足够的食物和衣服。每天世界上只有一半的人能够享有足够的食物。举办这次活动是为了使家庭理解穷人和富人之间的差别,并且是父母们知道过多的物质生活并不总是对孩子有好处。

精选读者点评

前天是儿童节,这个开头真干净!后面“面包和粥”写得也确实,比光喊“要节约”强多了。唯独“富人/穷人”这词儿反复出现,读着有点像贴标签,试试换成“穿西装的叔叔”“拎菜篮的奶奶”啊!