的夏天英语作文九年级

550字
主题:夏日生机、自然律动、童趣时光、感官盛宴

有关的夏天英语作文九年级

after a thunderstorm, i opened the door, a cool and fresh air blowing.

out of the house, i came to the park, e_quisite petite girls are wearing a white t-shirt and sky blue skirt, playing in the shade. pond, lotus opened, pink pink, swaying with the wind. green and green leaves floating on the water, like a big disc. small frogs sitting on the plate, leisurely quack with, as if to say: hello, hello, how are you?

at noon, the sun rose to the south, emitting a dazzling light, people think clothes like a fire. cicada hot know know desperately called.

home, sweat has long been wet through my short-sleeved shirt. i went straight to the refrigerator, took out a big watermelon, cut to eat, cool and so sweet, cool!

ah, beautiful, hot, cool ice, sweet summer!

一阵雷雨过后,我打开房门,一股清凉新鲜的空气扑面而来。

走出家门,我来到公园,玲珑娇小的女孩都穿着白色的t恤和天蓝色裙子,在树荫嬉戏。池塘里,荷花开了,粉红粉红的,随风摇曳。碧绿碧绿的叶子浮在水面上,像个大圆盘。小青蛙坐在盘子里,悠闲地“呱呱”着,好象在说:“你好,你好,你好啊?”

中午,太阳升到正南,放射出耀眼的光芒,让人觉得衣服好像着了火。蝉热得“知了知了”拼命地叫。

回到家,汗水早已湿透了我的短袖衫。我直奔冰箱,拿出一个大西瓜,切开就吃,凉冰冰甜丝丝,爽!

啊,美丽,炎热,凉冰冰,甜丝丝的夏天!

精选读者点评

这“粉红粉红”“碧绿碧绿”用得栩栩如生!叠词一蹦出来,夏天就站你眼前了,比光写“很美”效果很好客观来说“e_quisite petite girls”这句英语混进来,像西瓜里塞了颗葡萄,嚼着怪,也硌牙。

my holiday

200字
主题:假日生活、同伴交往、日常活动、中英表达

hi, paul! i’m zhong liang. today is my holiday. so i don’t go to school. it’s so great!

in the morning, i play basketball with my friends. in the afternoon, i’m very tired. so i ate some chicken and apple salad. after lunch, i watch tv at home. i think this holiday is fun. and about you?

嗨,保罗!我是钟亮。今天是我的节日。因此,我不上学了。它是如此之大!

早上,我打篮球和我的朋友。当天下午,我很累。所以,我吃了一些鸡肉和苹果沙拉。午饭后,我看电视在家里。我觉得这个节日的乐趣。而你呢?

精选读者点评

钟亮同学,英文段落里“it’s so great”用得真自然!然而中文部分“它是如此之大”明显是硬译,下次试试说“今天可真开心啊”?还有,“打篮球和我的朋友”语序要调一调哦~

作为一个中国人as a chinese

250字
主题:爱国情怀、责任担当、青春使命、家国一体、成长奉献

to be a chinese, we should learn how to love our country and protect her.

要成为一个中国,我们应该学会如何爱我们的国家,保护她。

china is our mother,we can injure her,we are her pride. we can make her feel disappointed and sad.

中国是我们的母亲,我们不能伤害她,我们是她的骄傲。我们不能让她感到失望和伤心。

we are flowers of our country,we should work hard, in order to devote ourselves to china.

我们是我们祖国的花朵,我们要努力工作,全心全意奉献国家。

so lets work hard together to make our countrys futuremuch better!

因此,让我们共同努力,使我们国家的未来变得更好!

精选读者点评

句子太长啦,读着喘略显气!试试把“china is our mother…”这句拆成两三小句?比如“中国是我们的母亲。我们怎能伤害她?我们是她的骄傲啊!”,读起来就有力多了。