✎作文范文
文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：
在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如“i cannot forget her” （我忘不了她）的结尾：
after her death，i felt as if something were missing in my life. i was sad over her passing away，but i knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2、重复主题句
结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如“i love my home town”（我爱家乡）的结尾：
i love my home town，and i love its people. they too have changed. they are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.
3、自然结尾
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“fishing”（钓鱼）的结尾：
i caught as many as twenty fish in two hours，but my brother caught many more. tired from fishing，we lay down on the river bank，bathing in the sun. we returned home very late.
4、含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法，而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“a day of harvesting”（收割的日子）的结尾：
evening came before we realized it. we put down our sickles and looked at each other. our clothes were wet with sweat，but on every face there was a smile.
5、用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，并具有特别的强调作用，引起读者深思。如“should we learn to do housework？”（我们要不要学做家务？） 的结尾。
everyone should learn to do housework. don’t you agree，boys and girls？
6、指明方向，激励读者
结尾表示对将来的展望，或期待读者投入行动。如“let’s go in for sports”（让我们参加体育运动）的结尾：
as we have said above，sports can be of great value. they not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. a sound mind is in a sound body. let’s go in for sports.
文章的结尾没有一定的模式，可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是，一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：说明文、写作指导类文本
适合年级：初中三年级、高中一年级、高中二年级
【成语使用】
画龙点睛、自然而然、不直接点明、首尾呼应
【形容词】
多种多样、较深、自然、含蓄、强烈、sound（注：范文保留英文，非中文形容词）、美好
【好词好句】
1. “在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。”
2. “evening came before we realized it. we put down our sickles and looked at each other.”
3. “a sound mind is in a sound body. let’s go in for sports.”
【修辞手法】
比喻：以“画龙点睛”喻指结尾对主题的升华作用，形象揭示收束之精要
引用：“a sound mind is in a sound body.”，源自拉丁谚语，强调身心统一
排比：列举六种结尾方式，结构匀称、节奏清晰，增强条理性与说服力
【文字校对】
• "bettter"应为"better"
• "i cannot forget her"应为"i cannot forget her"（标题格式规范，首字母及实词大写）
• "fishing"应为"fishing"（标题格式规范）
【写作亮点】
✓ 分类清晰，六种结尾方式并列呈现，逻辑严密
✓ 中英例证结合，增强示范性与跨文化理解维度
✓ 每类均配典型语段，具象可感，避免空泛说教
✓ 结尾段升华认知，指出“没有一定模式”“灵活创造”，体现思辨高度
