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recently, we have little time to keep close contact with nature. we spend too much time on study or working. we almost forget that how green the grass is, how beautiful the flowers are, and how sweetly the birds are singing outside our windows. a saying goes, all work and no play makes jack a dull boy. it means that we need to rela_ ourselves and go out to breathe more fresh air. we can also climb a hill in the suburbs.its good for our health.
lets go outing.
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名师·深度剖析
作文类型：英语应用文、倡议书
适合年级：初中二年级、初中三年级、高中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
green、beautiful、sweetly、fresh、good
【好词好句】
1. we almost forget that how green the grass is, how beautiful the flowers are, and how sweetly the birds are singing outside our windows.
2. all work and no play makes jack a dull boy.
3. its good for our health.
【修辞手法】
引用：“all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”，化用英语谚语，增强说服力与文化感
排比：how green the grass is, how beautiful the flowers are, and how sweetly the birds are singing，以并列结构强化自然之美的感染力
【文字校对】
• "rela_"应为"relax"
• "its"应为"it's"
• "outing"宜为"outings"或"on an outing"（单数抽象使用不规范）
【写作亮点】
✓ 选题贴近学生生活，聚焦身心平衡这一现实命题
✓ 善用感官描写，调动视觉（green、beautiful）、听觉（sweetly singing）构建画面感
✓ 引谚入文，自然嵌入文化元素，提升表达厚度
✓ 句式有变化，含宾语从句、并列结构与简短祈使句，节奏明快