✎作文范文
为方便大家复习时参考，英语四级频道为大家整理了历年大学英语四级作文题目及范文，希望对大家有所帮助，并预祝大家高分通过大学英语四级考试。
历年大学英语四级作文真题及范文汇总
directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a book you used at college. your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考范文：
buying these books, you can reap the benefit of several aspects. for one thing, you can save a great amount of money and this will allow you to spend these saved money on other more significant things in that the books i sold here with only the half of the original price. for another, the content of these book include translation, writing, reading as well as listening which will be adapt to the students who are going to take the e_am of cet-4 or cet-6. last but not the least, through the purchase of these english course books with nine into new without any notes on them, you will improve your study skill to a great e_tent.
精选读者点评
名师·深度剖析
作文类型：应用文、广告、说明文
适合年级：高中三年级
【成语使用】
事半功倍、九成新
【形容词】
显著、重要、全新、实用、便宜、典型
【好词好句】
1. buying these books, you can reap the benefit of several aspects.
2. the content of these books includes translation, writing, reading as well as listening.
3. these english course books are nine into new without any notes on them.
【修辞手法】
比喻：将购书比作“reap the benefit”，形象表达收获之感
排比：“translation, writing, reading as well as listening”构成并列结构，增强条理性与节奏感
【文字校对】
• "e_am"应为"exam"
• "e_tent"应为"extent"
• "nine into new"应为"nine-tenths new"或"90% new"
• "these book"应为"these books"
• "is going to take"应为"are going to take"
【写作亮点】
✓ 目的明确，紧扣广告类应用文功能要求
✓ 信息要素完整，涵盖价格、内容、品相、用途等关键点
✓ 句式富于变化，使用for one thing/for another/last but not the least衔接自然
✓ 语言简洁务实，体现校园二手书交易的真实语境