✎作文范文
for thousands of years, people have acceptedchallenges in different fields. there are not onlyphysical challenges, but also social andintellectual(聪明的) challenges. some peoplerisk(冒…险) their lives in playing sports to see howwell they can do. others try to make and invent(发明) something to make life easier. they all enjoychallenges.
why do people enjoy these challenges? thereare probably many reasons. one is curiosity. theother is the personal feeling of success, ofachievement, and nowadays, for some people, it is a business.
today, we still have many challengers before us. medical science faces the challenges ofconquering many diseases which still attack human beings. engineers and planners must buildnew cities, design and produce new kinds of transportation. scientists must develop newforms of energy. in short, we live in an age of challenges.
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作文类型：议论文、说明文
适合年级：初中三年级、高中一年级、高中二年级
【成语使用】
无
【形容词】
physical、social、intellectual、personal、medical、new、short
【好词好句】
1. “for thousands of years, people have accepted challenges in different fields.”
2. “they all enjoy challenges.”
3. “in short, we live in an age of challenges.”
【修辞手法】
排比：连用“medical science faces… engineers and planners must… scientists must…”构成语义并列的排比结构，强化时代挑战的广泛性与紧迫感
【文字校对】
• "acceptedchallenges"应为"accepted challenges"
• "intellectual(聪明的)"应为"intellectual"
• "risk(冒…险)"应为"risk"
• "invent(发明)"应为"invent"
• "challengers"应为"challenges"
【写作亮点】
✓ 观点清晰，以“enjoy challenges”为线索贯穿全文，逻辑层层递进
✓ 选材多元，涵盖体育、科技、医学、城市规划、能源等现实领域，体现视野广度
✓ 句式灵活，穿插疑问句、并列句与总结句，节奏自然有变化
✓ 语言简洁有力，多用主动语态与实义动词，增强表达张力
