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英文写作翻译频道为大家整理的my friend英语作文passage1，供大家参考:)
passage 1:
tom is one of my best friends.he is from america.we study in the same class in the school.he always helps me with my english and makes my english the best in the class.of course,i help him with his chinese.but it is a little bit difficult for him to learn chinese. both of us like to study and like to have sports together.we are very happy in the school.all the classmates and teachers are our friends.we get on well with each other.after school,tom and i are always the center of the class,because we do well in sports.i treasure the friendship with tom.
passage 2:
i have a good friend.his name is yangli.hes a great student in the class.hes a monitor in the class 4,grade 2.hes pretty good at english and math.he also likes playing sports.so he often plays football after school.hes interested in swimming,so hes a swimmer in the school swimming team.besides,he often takes care of each other and helps each other.in a word,i think hes very friendly to us.
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作文类型：记叙文、应用文
适合年级：小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级
【形容词】
best、difficult、happy、good、great、pretty、friendly
【好词好句】
1. "he always helps me with my english and makes my english the best in the class."
2. "after school, tom and i are always the center of the class, because we do well in sports."
3. "i treasure the friendship with tom."
4. "hes pretty good at english and math."
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "hes"应为"he's"
• "class 4,grade 2"应为"class 4, grade 2"
• "takes care of each other and helps each other"语义重复，建议删去其一
【写作亮点】
✓ 人物形象清晰，通过具体事例展现朋友特点
✓ 中英双语视角自然融合，体现跨文化交往意识
✓ 句式结构多样，有简单句、复合句和因果句
✓ 情感真挚，结尾点题“treasure the friendship”余味悠长
