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my best friend is wangming. he is 12 years-old.he always play jokes with me.i like to stay with him.it is because he can help me all the time. when i find him say that i am sad or happy,he always listen to me and he is very kind to me.he is very clever.he always help with my homeworks.if i have a worry and don know how to do he could help me.he can be a friend with everyone
我的朋友是王明。他是12岁。他总是与我玩笑。我喜欢和他呆在一起。那是因为他能帮助我。当我发现他说我悲伤或快乐,他总是听我的,他对我很好。他是非常聪明的。他总是帮助我的家庭作业。如果我有一个担心,不知道如何去做,他可以帮助我。他可以和大家做朋友。
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作文类型：记叙文、写人作文
适合年级：小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
聪明、快乐、悲伤、 kind、helpful
【好词好句】
1. he always play jokes with me.
2. when i find him say that i am sad or happy, he always listen to me
3. he can be a friend with everyone
【修辞手法】
【文字校对】
• "years-old"应为"years old"
• "play"应为"plays"
• "homeworks"应为"homework"
• "don know"应为"don't know"
• "find him say"应为"find that he says"
• "it is because"应为"this is because"
【写作亮点】
✓ 人物形象真实自然，通过具体行为展现朋友品质
✓ 中英文对照呈现，体现双语表达意识
✓ 情感真挚，多次强调“he always...”强化信赖感
✓ 结构清晰，围绕“help”这一核心动作组织内容
