
✎作文范文
we all know that reading has a lot of benefits .first of all, from reading some kinds of e_tra readings, we can horizon our outlook, we can know this world in a better way. secondly, as for a student we can rich in knowledge from reading a large number of books ,such as history,geography, physical books. thirdly, reading can cultivate the habit of thinking which makes us smarter. reading has a great many of other advantages of course ,it is wise for us to develop the habit of reading.
我们都知道,阅读有很多好处,首先,从阅读一些额外的阅读,我们可以展望我们的前景,我们可以更好地了解这个世界。其次,对于一个学生,我们可以从阅读大量的书籍,如历史,地理,物理书籍,丰富的知识。第三,阅读可以培养思维的习惯,这使我们更聪明。读书有许多其他的优点,我们养成读书的习惯是明智的。
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作文类型:议论文、英语写作、双语对照作文
适合年级:初中三年级、高中一年级、高中二年级
【成语使用】
【形容词】
额外、大量、历史、地理、物理
【好词好句】
1. reading has a lot of benefits.
2. reading can cultivate the habit of thinking which makes us smarter.
3. it is wise for us to develop the habit of reading.
【修辞手法】
排比:以“first of all…secondly…thirdly…”构成递进式排比,层次清晰地列举阅读的益处
【文字校对】
• "e_tra"应为"extra"
• "horizon"应为"broaden"
• "rich"应为"enrich"
• "physical books"应为"physics books"
• "a great many of other advantages"应为"a great many other advantages"
【写作亮点】
✓ 观点明确,围绕“阅读的好处”展开三层论述
✓ 结构完整,有总起、分述与总结
✓ 中英双语对照,体现语言学习意识
✓ 逻辑连接词(first of all, secondly, thirdly)运用得当